OK I have some more specific recommendations for Chicanismo:

I wish I would've taken time to make these suggestions before the article was featured as a DYK item. Pero ni modo. Let me know what you think about my suggestions and whether or not you plan to implement them.--Rockero 21:42, 21 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Rephrasing[edit]

Hey I'm just letting you know that im changing the following piece of article:

"The Legend of Popocatépetl and Iztaccíhuatl. Iztaccíhuatl's father sent him to war in Oaxaca, promising him his daughter Iztaccíhuatl as his wife if he returned (which Iztaccíhuatl's father presumed he would not)."

to

"The Legend of Popocatépetl and Iztaccíhuatl. Iztaccíhuatl's father sent Popocatépetl to war in Oaxaca, promising him his daughter Iztaccíhuatl as his wife if he returned (which Iztaccíhuatl's father presumed he would not)."

as it is a bit confusing to know exactly what is meant, I had to read it 3 times before i got that 'him' meant Popocatépetl. TeePee-20.7 06:51, 22 February 2007 (UTC)—The preceding unsigned comment was added by TeePee-20.7 (talkcontribs) 06:50, 22 February 2007 (UTC).[reply]