GA[edit]

I am not sure if this is enough for GAN, given that the most of this article is based on a single source. MarioJump83! 09:36, 14 February 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]

WikiProject Australia labels it as Start. 🐔 Chicdat  Bawk to me! 11:12, 14 February 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
I got this fixed using Rater. It is definitely B. MarioJump83! 11:22, 14 February 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Cyclone Kelvin/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: KN2731 (talk · contribs) 05:29, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]


I'll take a look at this. At a glance, the prose has much room for improvement, especially in the lead and impacts section. I also notice the impacts contain a lot of rainfall totals with little mention of why each of them is notable (and thus worthy of inclusion). Aside from that, the use of km/h or kph isn't consistent and should be fixed. ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 05:29, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]

I'm going to use km/h since unfortunately the infobox can't use kph (I prefer kph for regional consistency). About rainfalls, it's to be consistent with Cyclone Owen which got into GA with it. MarioJump83! 03:27, 17 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
NB: All ref numbers listed are as of this linked revision.

Lead

Done. But I can't say for sure it's "dissipation", so I used last noted term instead. MarioJump83! 10:06, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
 Fixed JayTee🐦 20:02, 16 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
 Fixed JayTee🐦 20:02, 16 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Meteorological history

Fixed. Used the IbTRACS as a references. MarioJump83! 07:30, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Fixed. MarioJump83! 07:30, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Changed to one more supporting the source. MarioJump83! 07:30, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Removed, then. MarioJump83! 07:30, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Fixed to AWST. MarioJump83! 07:30, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
See below. MarioJump83! 10:06, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Redone the paragraph that has this. The system was last noted by BoM on 21 February, and the remains that drifted above Nullarbor Plain and emerged above Great Australian Bight (per this [1]) is the remnant moisture. I'm not adding things about the ultimate fate of this storm as the source talking about it is unfortunately a forecast. MarioJump83! 10:06, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Impacts

Added. MarioJump83! 14:29, 21 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Removed. MarioJump83! 07:30, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
See below. MarioJump83! 09:38, 26 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Well... I'm sorry I can't do this at that time because I'm very busy. Thanks though. MarioJump83! 09:38, 26 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Fixed. MarioJump83! 10:06, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]

References

Well then. I replaced everything with |website=ABC News|publisher=Australian Broadcasting Corporation into |work=ABC News. MarioJump83! 09:17, 16 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Fixed. MarioJump83! 07:30, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Fixed. MarioJump83! 07:30, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Fixed. MarioJump83! 07:30, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Fixed. MarioJump83! 10:06, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Removed. MarioJump83! 10:06, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]

The prose is somewhat disjointed and doesn't flow very well, especially in the lead and impacts section. If you have difficulties addressing the prose issues (I do note you mention on your user page that your level of English is intermediate), you may want to request for a copyedit or ping someone to help out. There are also some verifiability issues but those shouldn't be too hard to fix. ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 05:29, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]

@JayTee32: You can try to help me copyediting this article, as you did during Cyclone Owen. (Thank you so much!) I'll try to fix the rest. MarioJump83! 06:30, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
@MarioJump83:, taken care of in lead, met history, and impact. And I'm impressed with your work for a non-native English speaker, just keep in mind your tenses if I may offer advice :) JayTee🐦 15:35, 17 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Thanks for your copyediting, I'll fix the rest then. MarioJump83! 01:22, 18 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Couple more things:

BoM.  Fixed MarioJump83! 06:46, 26 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Changed to one in IBTRACS. MarioJump83! 06:46, 26 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Explained in the article. MarioJump83! 09:38, 26 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Okay. I fixed them all. MarioJump83! 10:05, 26 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Nearly there @MarioJump83:, just a few things left to work through. ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 02:38, 26 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]

I'm going to fix them ASAP. This is quite bothering when there are finals in this week... MarioJump83! 10:05, 26 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
@KN2731: This is all done. @JayTee32: please give some of your time to copyedit this article again. MarioJump83! 07:49, 27 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]
@MarioJump83:, done and done. JayTee🐦 13:13, 27 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Passing, well done. Hope your finals went smoothly, MarioJump83. ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 03:36, 29 May 2021 (UTC)Reply[reply]