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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Francis Bacon's painting Fragment of a Crucifixion shows two dying animals in a scene influenced by the biblical Crucifixion and Aeschylus' The Oresteia?
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owl[edit]

Two owls. Ceoil (talk) 20:15, 4 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Now you're talking! .micro.dot.cotton (talk) 03:28, 5 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Huge Davis[edit]

Who is this? Hugo Davis? Hugh Davis? I never heard of any of them...Modernist (talk) 12:35, 5 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

O Christ, I need a spell checker. Hugh Davies; he's a curator in San Diego[1] and over saw a major Bacon retrospective in the late 1990s. I know him for various exhibition catelogs only. Ceoil (talk) 13:33, 5 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Lol, Davies name wouldn't show up on spell check anyway, just keep on keepin' on...Modernist (talk) 14:59, 5 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Carnt spell, I know. Thanks Modernist, thats what just what I'll do. Ceoil (talk) 16:02, 5 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
He's a friend of the von Baldasses. Kafka Liz (talk) 16:22, 5 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Har, you scoundrel-Outriggr would be proud of that quip. Ceoil (talk) 16:39, 5 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Fragment of a Crucifixion – Some first thoughts[edit]

Comments prepared for FAC

I prepared this as a review.
  • "Although the title has religious connotations, Bacon's outlook was bleak, he was an atheist and did not believe in either divine intervention nor an afterlife. " the comma after bleak should be a semi-colon.
  • "who is" I might say "a being" to eliminate the who/which thing.
  • I remember reviewing the screaming Popes, but is there a useful link you can supply here?
  • First image caption "Bacon's this"
  • The body of the article seems to begin somewhat in media res. This seems a bit odd.
  • "The painting has been linked both thematically and its formal construction" there should be an "in" before "its".
  • "and less and less of his canvases contained the sensational imagery" likely "fewer" is meant for less. I would avoid the repetition though.
  • "Bacon found it more powerful to reflect violence in his brush strokes and colourisation, not literally, and not "in the thing portrayed".[6]" I might substitute "rather then" for "not literally, and not".
  • "including a number of pieces that had that were held in high regard by critics and buyers." some issue with the "that had that".
  • "unaffected and uninterested in" maybe "oblivious to" or "unaware of"?
  • "Odessa Steps" is there no article on the steps themselves? (I'm doing this offline)
  • "Crucifixion scenes can be found in Bacon's earliest works,[18] and weights heavily throughout his career." It may be an ENGVAR thing, but shouldn't it be "weigh"?
  • Does Russell really need re-introduction?
  • The caption under crucifixion is not a complete sentence and should not have a period.
  • " Rembrandt Harmenszoon van Rijn" or, simply, Rembrandt.
  • "as the armature of the theme had been accumulated by so many old masters." accumulated?
  • "The legs folded out of view and the left arm passively by Rubens are transposed by Bacon into violent motion, flopping wildly up and down."[24]" First, there is a stray quote at the end. Second, there seems to be a verb missing to apply to the arm. Third, is "flapping" rather than "flopping" meant?
  • I have an issue with the Eichmann matter. It is presented in the lede as one of Bacon's sources, but Eichmann's trial was in 1961, and there doesn't seem to be a real connection here. Thus, the source matter is not backed up in the body. Neither is the screaming Popes reference in the lede.
  • I'm not an expert in art, but I'm not sure this has as much cohesion as I would like to see. It may be just me.--Wehwalt (talk) 07:47, 2 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Irish-born?[edit]

Why define the painting as the work of an Irish-born painter if the painter himself is defined in his biography as an Irish-born British painter? Does the painting have a special relation to Ireland? Surtsicna (talk) 13:43, 24 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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