Second Boer War (which is linked) not Boer War so its clear which one it is. Done
Link Transvaal Done
Furlough is an Americanism I would leave it as leave, also it should have been linked at first use. Sick leave Done
Western Front needs linking Done
to die on active service or were killed on active service - ref is for killed I presume Done
Early life
I would add a ref here - Fulton was born at Dalhousie in India on 15 August 1869. - even if ref name as its a statement of fact.
I hadn't realised it wasn't covered by cite 1 - the stuff about his father was inserted later in the writing of this article. I think the cite for location will come from Austin so will check this.
returned to his Indian Army unit - Indian Army regiment Done
awarded the Distinguished Service Order - invested as a Companion of the Distinguished Service Order Done
First World War
Furlough - leave Done
command of an infantry battalion - do we know which one ?
I think it was the only infantry battalion of the SEF, but will check this.
It was a composite infantry battalion, the only infantry that was part of the SEF. Have changed to refer to "the infantry battalion". Zawed (talk) 05:23, 6 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
link Wellington Done
Senussi Campaign
he was appointed commander of a regiment... initially known as the Trentham Regiment - do we know what it was later called and add to inf box
It became the NZ Rifle Brigade (with the addition of two more battalions).
Fulton remained in Cairo for a time but by January 1916 joined his command in the field - what command its not clear Done
Major-General A. Wallace Done
The Rifle Brigade - The brigade or New Zealand Rifle Brigade Done
Have also abbreviated to NZRB; in some places, I refer to "the brigade" to avoid close repetition of NZRB.
to command of the brigade's 1st Battalion - did the battalion not have a regimental name ? The New Zealand Division calls them X Battalion New Zealand Rifle Brigade
The battalions were numbered. I have chosen not to recite the full name.
Western Front
link Armentieres Done
Fulton led the Rifle Brigade - as above brigade etc Done
Thanks for the comprehensive review Jim. I have addressed most of your points, commented on a couple of others and there are a couple more for which I need to get a book out of my local library for confirmation. I'll do this on Monday/Tuesday. Zawed (talk) 20:07, 3 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Jim, I have responded to all your points now. Let me know if there are