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But as the wind shifted Remove the "But" to start the sentence
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bulldozers constructed firebreaks on the fire's north side between the community of Turtle Rock and Laguna Canyon Road and firefighters continued with firing operations. Add a comma after "Road" (CINS)
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A$50,000 reward missing space
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A Los Angeles Times investigation Italicize the name of the newspaper
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limiting factor during the fire, instead, it had been the distribution system The comma after "fire" should be a semicolon.
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In other areas, as homes burned the pipes inside them broke Make reading a little easier by adding a comma after "burned"
It's an invaluable reference for the article but perhaps I use it as a crutch too much. I'll start combing through to see if more statements solely sourced to it can be attributed to secondary sources. Penitentes (talk) 22:06, 4 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
5: flames were spotted in the vicinity of the Laguna Coast Wilderness Park off Laguna Canyon RoadY
7: Amide [sic] a wholesale evacuation...Y
19: Orange County fire officials, who had stopped actively investigating the case about three months ago and reopened it only when Martinez confessed to starting the blaze, said Wednesday they were also disappointed.Y
23: 2001 list shows Laguna at seventh. One of the listed fires above is after: Jones (1999). Y
All three images come from Orange County Archives which offered them as cc-by-2.0. No concerns here. Alt text present.
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