Theres one more in the second paragraph. Also, after the last comma put and so it says "I-85, US 15, US 70, and US 501" and "Crumpton Road/Paterson Drive". -420Traveler (talk) 22:12, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
North of the interchange, the adjacent properties are primarily commercial businesses. Several intersecting streets lead to residential neighborhoods. I would combine these sentences.
NC 157 continues for one-half mile (zero point eight zero kilometres) northwestward before turning to the northeast and crossing the Eno River. Would "NC 157 continues northwestward for one-half mile (zero point eight zero kilometres) before turning to the northeast and crossing the Eno River." sound better?
In all honesty, I don't see a huge difference but I changed it because I think it does belong in front to be in the proper tense.--Ncchild (talk) 04:07, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
the surrounding area transforms from residential neighborhoods to rural farmland and forested area. should it say "rural farmland mixed with forested areas"?
At Barry Road, NC 157 diverges to the northwest, continuing to follow Guess Road. NC 157 enters Person County 0.7 miles (1.1 km) northwest of Barry Road. I would combine these sentences.
Nearing Hurdle Mills, the highway runs adjacent to residential neighborhoods on the southeastern side of the community. NC 157 also begins to generally parallel the Flat River located to the northeast of the highway. I would combine these sentences.
I think I did a good job with this combination, perhaps the best I could think of at the time. But I'm not sure how great it is, so this might be one you definitely want to look over to see if it makes sense.--Ncchild (talk) 04:07, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
It may sound better to say "Nearing Hurdle Mills, the highway begins to parallel the Flat River and begins to pass residential..." Let me know because I'm not familiar with the area. -420Traveler (talk) 22:49, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The northern terminus of NC 157 is located at an intersection with US 158/US 501/NC 57 south of downtown Roxboro. Would "NC 157 then reaches its northern terminus at an intersection with US 158, US 501 and NC 57 south of downtown Roxboro." sound better?
NC 57 was relocated north of Caldwell in 1948. From Caldwell NC 57 continued northeast until reaching US 501 north of Rougemont. From the intersection, NC 57 ran concurrently with US 501 to Roxboro. add references.
Once again, although not required for GA, are any images available?
There is one, but I'm not sure if the quality is good enough. I also have the one of the parade and the NC 157/NC 57 signs are in the background but of course thats not the main topic of the picture
That looks good with just the parade picture. Its up to you if you want to add the I-85 picture to the first paragraph, but you could always wait until if you expand it to FA. -420Traveler (talk) 21:52, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I decided to leave it out. At least on my laptop, it looks a bit odd because the text gets squished between the picture and the infobox.--Ncchild (talk) 04:23, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Just FYI, I've seen this and I will work on it. I've just been busy with school work so it is probably gonna take until the end of this week to carve out the time.--Ncchild (talk) 02:52, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Other final comments
Just make sure that everywhere you changed slashes to commas make sure you add the "and". Theres a couple left.
I used CTRL-F and couldn't find any more of the slashes to convert to commas. I corrected those that were missing an "and".--Ncchild (talk) 14:06, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Id add 29.3-mile-long (47.2 km) to first sentence in lead, and remove from second sentence.