Did you know nomination[edit]

Morphological variety among birds and mammals
Morphological variety among birds and mammals
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——🦝 The Interaccoonale Will be the raccoon race (talkcontribs) 07:21, 14 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]

@Interaccoonale and Reidgreg: Forgive this non-expert, but I can't understand the hook at all, and I would question whether a broad audience would. I think this needs a simpler hook.--Launchballer 15:39, 1 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for raising that concern. I'm not sure that this hook fact can be rewritten without either changing the meaning or greatly increasing the wordcount. I'll think on it. Though I believe this is a case where the picture is relevant and helps illustrate the hook's meaning. – Reidgreg (talk) 17:21, 1 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Launchballer and Reidgreg: How about "... that birds have more species than mammals, while they are relatively more uniform in appearance?" ——🦝 The Interaccoonale Will be the raccoon race (talkcontribs) 23:06, 1 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'd approve that. But I forgot something else: the hooks need a "media marker" like (pictured) to indicate the image. Perhaps: (as illustrated)? – Reidgreg (talk) 01:16, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]