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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 22:03, 3 June 2024 (UTC)

Phenotypic disparity

Morphological variety among birds and mammals
Morphological variety among birds and mammals
  • Source: Minelli, Alessandro (2019). Biodiversity, disparity and evolvability: "In terms of species number, birds are more diverse than mammals (some 10,000 vs. ca. 5600 extant species worldwide), but are instead quite more uniform in terms of morphology, reproductive biology and developmental schedules."
Moved to mainspace by Interaccoonale (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

——🦝 The Interaccoonale Will be the raccoon race (talkcontribs) 07:21, 14 May 2024 (UTC).

@Interaccoonale and Reidgreg: Forgive this non-expert, but I can't understand the hook at all, and I would question whether a broad audience would. I think this needs a simpler hook.--Launchballer 15:39, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
Thanks for raising that concern. I'm not sure that this hook fact can be rewritten without either changing the meaning or greatly increasing the wordcount. I'll think on it. Though I believe this is a case where the picture is relevant and helps illustrate the hook's meaning. – Reidgreg (talk) 17:21, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
@Launchballer and Reidgreg: How about "... that birds have more species than mammals, while they are relatively more uniform in appearance?" ——🦝 The Interaccoonale Will be the raccoon race (talkcontribs) 23:06, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
I'd approve that. But I forgot something else: the hooks need a "media marker" like (pictured) to indicate the image. Perhaps: (as illustrated)? – Reidgreg (talk) 01:16, 2 June 2024 (UTC)