The general manager of Busch Gardens Tampa, William Thurman, expected the approval for the expansion was anticipated due to the recent success seen at the park in October 1975 seems oddly worded. What is specifically tripping me up is expected the approval for the expansion was anticipated
Done Re-tweaked to: "In October 1975, the general manager of Busch Gardens Tampa, William Thurman, expected the expansion to be approved by the city of Tampa due to the recent success seen at the Busch Gardens parks." Adog (Talk・Cont) 20:37, 1 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Why is reference 23 used twice when it can just be used at the end of the sentence she expressed "feeling a little unsteady on [her] feet but exhilarated."?