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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 22:28, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
Hello, and come what may from this review, thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. During the review, I may make copyedits, which I will limit to spelling correction and minor changes to punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. The Nominator(s) should understand that I am a grammar pedant, and I will nitpick in the interest of prose quality. For responding to my comments, please use Done, Fixed, Added, Not done, Doing..., or Removed, followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 22:28, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
based on the science of mesmerismto "pseudoscience", or delete it altogether.
Manilal's theological conclusions are that Āryāvarta is the source of all religions; [...]Could you add a few words to clarify that Āryāvarta refers to a historic region of the Indian subcontinent?
Images are relevant and free/tagged. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 22:28, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
Article passes copyvio scanners with a mere 5.7% likelihood. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 22:28, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
Article is stable, with no major edits in months. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 22:28, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
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