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Hi Paleface Jack, I'm going to take this review on. I'll probably make copyedits as I go, so please review those and revert if you disagree with any. Otherwise I'll ping you once I've finished. grungaloo (talk) 01:52, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
No copyvio found using Earwig, no OR/Syn, and ref section exists. A few iffy sources that could use an alt source to be safe, and one unreliable one which needs to be removed. See comments below. Uses reliable sources and spot check aside from that is good.
My thought is, due to how closely tied the character's appearances in other media is concerned, I might just cite and mention some of the appearances and place a see also for Godzilla in game article for more info to cut down on the scope. Would that be a better way of handling this? Paleface Jack (talk) 17:55, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry, I'm referring to the "Other media" subsection where you mention things like what video game they appeared in. It's a pretty minor gripe and not something I would hold up GA over, so your call on how/if you want to address it. I think the description of the appearance is well written so no need to change that. grungaloo (talk) 17:58, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
That was what I was meaning. It is not a huge concern, but I have not found any alternate for the Gamespot source so, sadly, it will be removed. Paleface Jack (talk) 21:16, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
GameSpot as a source (ref 32) - GameSpot is only reliable if it's staff generated content, but this appears to be used generated. Could you please find an alternate source?
Varan was also considered for the main antagonist in the final film of the Heisei series. - Could you explain what the Heisei series is here? It's not been mentioned yet in the article.
In the Japanese reference book Godzilla Giant Monsters Super Encyclopedia, Varan is listed as being able to glide at up to speeds of Mach 1.5. - Calling it a "Japanese" reference book sounds odd because it's not a reference book about Japan. I would just say "In Godzilla Giant Monsters Super Encyclopedia, Varan is..."
I rewrote it going from an additional souce talking obout the character's longevity before it goes into the screenrant source, so it can be removed if problematic.--Paleface Jack (talk) 17:37, 6 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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