The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:06, 1 January 2020 (UTC)

• ... that under the leadership of ethnomusicologist Agnes Nebo von Ballmoos, the University of Liberia Chorus performed traditional Liberian music for the first time in its history? Source "Our research began in 1966 with the arrangement of seven songs performed by the University of Liberia choir--the very first time in our history of indigenous songs being performed by our highest institution. The idea thrilled the entire community and we received encouraging letters of congratulations and compliments"
• ALT1 ... that Agnes Nebo von Ballmoos transcribed, arranged, and conducted traditional Liberian music, helping to preserve and popularize it?
• ALT2 ... that under the leadership of ethnomusicologist Agnes Nebo von Ballmoos, the University of Liberia Chorus performed around the world, including at Lincoln Center? Source: "A highlight of her musical conducting was the participation of her University Chorus at the Fourth Lincoln Center International Choral Festival

• Reviewed: Template:Did_you_know_nominations/Donna_Tobias

Created by Philepitta (talk). Self-nominated at 02:48, 27 November 2019 (UTC).

Philepitta , thank you! Interesting life. I'm going to review later today today. Please link her (to birth place, university ...). --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:54, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

Now: on good sources, no copyvio obvious. I like all hooks, and can't decide. How about a combination? The first two stay too much in Liberia, and scientific. Some of that within what ALT2 says, perhaps? I can't do it for you, or could not review it. Please check my copy-editing, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:15, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

Thank you so much Gerda Arendt for the edits to the article and for the thoughtful review! I will think more about how to revise the hook. Philepitta (talk) 02:54, 7 December 2019 (UTC)

• Alt 1 is the best of the three. --evrik ^(talk) 19:52, 23 December 2019 (UTC)

• It's been over three weeks since the review; at this point, since there isn't anything wrong with any of the hooks, it's time to get this moving again and approve one or more of them unless there's something clearly wrong with the article or the hooks. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:19, 31 December 2019 (UTC)

My choice is ALT2, for the international connection which is quite remarkable. Don't miss the video, anybody.

My combination would be:

ALT4: ... that Agnes Nebo von Ballmoos transcribed, arranged, and conducted traditional Liberian music, and led her university choir in concerts, including at Lincoln Center?

Philepitta, you can still suggest changes.--Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:58, 31 December 2019 (UTC)