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before the question. Again, welcome! WikiDan61ChatMe!ReadMe!! 20:27, 14 March 2013 (UTC)
You have thrown down the gauntlet, and I have taken it up. Please enter the discussion at Talk:Applied kinesiology#NPOV again. WikiDan61ChatMe!ReadMe!! 20:27, 14 March 2013 (UTC)
The main reason that I offered this flag was not to dispute the factual information already in place, but that basic content about AK and Clinical Kinesiology theory and methods is lacking, and that this lack contributes to the article's overall taste as biased in conjunction with the particular placement and use of parenthesis and words/phrases that add a negative connotation, rather than straight-forward facts. The statements in the opening paragraph are certainly informative, however would they not be more appropriately placed in the 'Criticism' section? The use of parenthesis in the History and Current use section, regarding ICAK also seems unnecessary, and meant to express the author's opinion about the nature of the organization, its people and activities - i.e. "certified", "diplomats". I could also be reading into this, but as a common wikipedia viewer, I am probably not the only person to process the use of punctuation as a method to maintain a tone of opinionated skepticism. Also see: "The essential premise of applied kinesiology, which is not shared by mainstream medical theory..." - this phrase seems unnecessary, and further reinforces, what appears to be the overall slant of the article. These are a few examples of why I placed the NPOV. I think the content already in place has the potential to read and inform in a more expansive way through reorganization and with additions to the text.
As you pointed out that I am a first-time editor, so I appreciate your patience with my kindergarten like-style of jumping in to this discussion. If there is a more appropriate way to do so, I will be happy to follow that avenue since I am just one voice of many in an old discussion here. If it is not appropriate for me to have placed a NPOV on the article, than I will remove it. (Holaema (talk) 23:14, 14 March 2013 (UTC))
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I tried to respond to WikiDan's "gauntlet being thrown down again" via "message me", kindly please tell - where did my message go? I would like to post it as I am supposed to via talk. Thank you! (Holaema (talk) 22:13, 14 March 2013 (UTC))
Thank you so very much - this is a whole new language, as I has quickly become apparent; I will do my best "as in Rome"! ((Holaema (talk) 23:19, 14 March 2013 (UTC)))