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It's not so much that the intro is too long as much as there's no distinction between the lead and the body. The lead should be a summary of everything that comes below, and it's not really doing that.
And the issue isn't that there aren't third party cites - you need more, and be less dependent on McCluskey's official site and other places he's contributed to. In other words, find independent sources about him, rather than of or by him. That, I think will inform the article better and solve the tone/neutrality issue. Does that help? --Mosmof (talk) 01:19, 22 December 2010 (UTC)
The article Philip McCluskey is being discussed concerning whether it is suitable for inclusion as an article according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.
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