Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bkissin was:
This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines for sports persons and athletes). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
So, for the first option, Emmerdahl wouldn't qualify because he doesn't play in the Swedish Hockey League. For the second option, I'm not seeing information in this article that shows Emmerdahl has played at least 200 games (or achieved preeminent honours) in the HockeyAllsvenskan. If you can add more of that information to make it pass WP:NHOCKEY, I'll take another look.
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Hello, Warroad!
Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Bkissin (talk) 17:34, 15 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Hell in a Bucket was:
This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines for sports persons and athletes). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
The comment the reviewer left was:
Same issues as noted before, not meeting GNG for HOckey players
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Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Jonas Emmerdahl, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.
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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:22, 24 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, Warroad. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Jonas Emmerdahl".
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Bkissin (talk) 12:56, 3 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]