The article was promoted by Karanacs 01:27, 7 October 2009 [1].
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I am nominating this for featured article again because I believe that previous problems regarding the article failing just short of the professional criteria in 1a has been addressed. The prose is refereshed to a professional version. Every concerns have been addressed and "4 Minutes" is, one the most complete articles on a song, I believe, here on Wikipedia. Hence it should be a featured article after gaining consensus from my fellow reviewers here at FAC. --Legolas (talk2me) 13:40, 8 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Support I'm happy to support this article's nomination for the second time. All of my concerns have been addressed and then some. Great article! Drewcifer (talk) 02:47, 12 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
*Comments I supported the article's nomination at the last FAC, but upon taking a fresh look I feel the prose could be tightened up further. Alot of this is minor stuff that is easier to do myself, but feel free to keep a close eye on my edits and undo any that rub you the wrong way. However, I do have a few complaints about the Composition section. Namely, a few of the descriptors seem unsourced and a personal asessment presented as fact. For instance "Timbaland's characteristic bhangra beats". Who says they're characteristic? This sounds like an opinion to me. Take that word out and it reads much better. Also, "with a moderate tempo of 115 beats per minute." By whose standards is this "moderate"? Surely not to a drum and bass fan. Again, take the word out and you're cool. So I'd recommend a thorough scan through the entire article (there's stuff like this peppered throughout, not just in that one section). Also, I feel the article needs a sweep for WP:LQ. Also, there needs to be "[reply]&
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" between stuff like "number three". Drewcifer (talk) 22:32, 9 September 2009 (UTC)
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Great work! ceranthor 21:12, 11 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Support Meets FA Criteria warrior4321 15:46, 12 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
| class="col-break col-break-2" | , having the names (which can be quite long) in the normal font size may stretch the tables down. We have to keep in mind that not everybody watches with the same browser settings. Anything below the 800x600 resolution destroys the col-2 structure, if we magnify the names. --Legolas (talk2me) 03:25, 6 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]