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The article was promoted by SandyGeorgia 11:51, 1 June 2011 [1].

Draped Bust dollar[edit]

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Nominator(s): RHM22 (talk) 19:25, 3 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured article because I believe it meets the criteria. The Draped Bust dollar was the second silver dollar struck by the United States Mint, and as such it remains relatively obscure among collectors. It's not the first, and not the most interesting or most controversial, but it is nonetheless a surprisingly fun coin to read about and research. The Draped Bust dollar began mintage in the same illegal standard as its predecessor, the Flowing Hair dollar, but this was changed when the United States Mint hired a new director, Elias Boudinot, who was known for his honesty. Though the bulk of the series is largely ignored, one date, 1804, is widely considered the king of American coins. Selling for record prices almost since they were created, the 1804 dollar was actually first minted in the 1830s. I hope that this article will provide the reader with something interesting, and I thank everyone for any comments or reviews!-RHM22 (talk) 19:25, 3 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Sources

Thanks! I've fixed the references, but I can't add a location for the Whittmore book because the publisher doesn't give one. It's probably New York City, but I don't want to put that in there because I'm not sure.-RHM22 (talk) 00:17, 4 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
WorldCat agrees with you, so the location can be listed as "[New York]"; the brackets imply that while the location is not given in the source, the city is likely due to the publisher, printer, and/or distributor. According to the site, there's also no "The" at the beginning of the publisher name. María (habla conmigo) 12:52, 4 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, Maria! I fixed that now.-RHM22 (talk) 13:55, 4 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Units

Lightmouse (talk) 19:36, 6 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the comments! I have fixed both of those things. For the esoteric wording, I have changed a few of the uses of "alloy" and reworded the rest to help readers better understand the meaning.-RHM22 (talk) 20:58, 6 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Very good. It uses 'percent' and '%'. I suggest you use the '%' throughout although if you prefer 'percent' use that throughout. Sometimes it has a space, sometimes it doesn't. The MOS says it should be unspaced. See Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style_(dates_and_numbers)#Percentages.
Also I think the instances of 'or' inside parentheses indicating conversions could be removed.
Lightmouse (talk) 09:09, 7 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, Lightmouse! I've fixed those things. I apologize for not making the percent/% consistent. I tried to get them all, but I missed a few.-RHM22 (talk) 19:31, 7 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Comments. As always, feel free to revert my copyediting. Please check the edit summaries. - Dank (push to talk) 19:17, 14 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

This means that he would carry out various artistic works upon request for a fee. I expect that would have included a number of portraits and probably various monuments as well, though that's just speculation. Either way, I have added an explanation and replaced the assertion with a direct quote.-RHM22 (talk) 11:21, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I think part of this is still not working for me. Anyone have an opinion on this? "... described by a contemporary artist as a "thorough-going drudge" due to his willingness to carry out most painting or sculptural tasks at the request of clients." I carry out copyediting duties at the request of writers; does that make me a drudge? (Wait, don't answer that). - Dank (push to talk) 15:42, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I removed the part about him designing it. I really don't see any indication of that, since he had already been sent sketches and was probably pretty accurate to those.-RHM22 (talk) 11:21, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the comments! I have addressed all of those, and I went over the article a couple of times and fixed a few other things as well.-RHM22 (talk) 11:21, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks! I changed "unbeknownst" to "unknown". I've always used it, but I understand that it is somewhat archaic. Sorry about the ".892" thing. I thought I changed all of those, but I must have missed one of them. As for the agreement thing that you fixed (thanks for the copyedit by the way), I thought it a little funny that I accidentally wrote that an agreement was reached with the bullion! Still, bullion isn't entirely disagreeable, as it has both a "silver tongue" and a "heart of gold"!-RHM22 (talk) 22:34, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Your sense of humor will be one of your most important assets as a writer. - Dank (push to talk) 22:50, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Images

Thanks for the image review! Sorry about leaving the page numbers out. I'll be sure to include that in further FACs. The 1804 dollar image is actually not a page number, but rather a plate number. As for the Boudinot image, that delightful portrait was created in 1817 by Thomas Sully. I've added the correct information in that respect (author, year), but the old link is still there. Should I remove the link and find a current website that has the image, or just leave it there and accept that the image was once at that link in good faith? Sorry for my ignorance here – I've never encountered old links that I can remember.-RHM22 (talk) 22:57, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
By the way, I found an older version on the Internet Archive, but the portrait isn't visible there.-RHM22 (talk) 23:27, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I'd say the archiveurl would be better than nothing. Nikkimaria (talk) 03:28, 16 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, thanks! I'll add that.-RHM22 (talk) 22:24, 16 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
It took some searching, but I found a link with the painting on the Internet Archive! I've added it.-RHM22 (talk) 22:37, 16 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

remarks needs legacy or impact section to show why it's significantrm2dance (talk)

Hm. Do coin articles typically have a Legacy section? - Dank (push to talk) 13:27, 29 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Not usually, except under special circumstances, such as if a coin is most famous for something other than just being a coin. A good example would be the 1933 double eagle, which is most famous for being a great rarity, or the so-called "Widow's Mite" (most likely a lepton), which is by far most famous for being mentioned in a Biblical verse.-RHM22 (talk) 18:00, 29 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Support, in general. I can't speak to comprehensiveness and there are a couple of thing I don;t understand (other than why someone would apy 4 million dollars for a coin!):

Thanks! "With the date of 1804" means that though the coins were struck throughout the nineteenth century, they were dated 1804. That does sound confusing though, so I'll reword all uses of that phrase now. As for the Secretary of State thing, I couldn't really tell you why he was involved. Back then, coinage was a lot more important than it is now, so that may be why he was concerned. I believe that the Secretary of State has power over most governmental agencies.-RHM22 (talk) 15:14, 30 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Support Dana boomer (talk) 21:38, 30 May 2011 (UTC) Comments, a few quibbles before I can support:[reply]

Once these issues are taken care of, I shall be happy to support. Dana boomer (talk) 19:54, 30 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the comments! I fixed all of them except for the last one. The section about de Saussure is on page 80, but I think there are actually multiple pages numbered 80 in the book, if you know what I mean. I'm not sure why it's like that, but if you search within the book for "de Saussure" it shows the quote as well as the picture on the a page numbered 80. However, when you use the box at the top to quickly go to page 80, there's something else on it. I'm not sure exactly why that is.-RHM22 (talk) 21:25, 30 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Hmm, weird. You are quite correct. Anyway, the information is backed up in the source, on a page 80, if not the page 80. Anyway, everything else looks good, so changing to support. Dana boomer (talk) 21:38, 30 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Support made a number of comments and suggestions along the way and helped out a bit on sourcing. Well worth the star.--Wehwalt (talk) 07:19, 1 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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