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I am nominating this featured article for review because there is a heavy lack of citations, especially for direct quotes YellowMonkey (vote in the Southern Stars and White Ferns supermodel photo poll) 07:40, 22 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Comment. Images need alt text; see WP:ALT. Eubulides (talk) 00:03, 23 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Comment The sources in the article do need to be improved. There are entire sections that have no references, as well as opinion statements "neighbors recounted..." and quotes in paragraphs that include no references at all. "Ibid" should not be used, as the ease of editing on Wikipedia often leads to the "ibid" being separated from the reference it is supposedly repeating. There is unnecessary bolding in the references section, missing access dates for websites and at least one dead link in the external links section (which needs a trim anyways - links used as references don't need to be repeated in the EL). Why are you relying on the Ku Klux Klan, of all groups, for information about what the citizens of Bath felt about the memorial services (ref #25)? The lack of references in the body of the article is the biggest issue right now, though. Dana boomer (talk) 02:03, 1 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]