- General
- Fixed after I removed the links to junior and senior. There are no articles existed for college junior/senior.—Chris! ct 20:22, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- How about wikitionary linking the terms? wikt:junior/wikt:senior.--Best, ₮RUCӨ 23:08, 1 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Done—Chris! ct 00:04, 2 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Lead
- Per MOS:NUM, do not start sentences with numbers
- Fixed—Chris! ct 20:22, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Be consistent with the use of acronyms. You spell out Kansas State but use USC for South Car.
- Fixed—Chris! ct 20:22, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Also, another record was set with ten freshmen being drafted in the first round and twelve in total. --> Another record was also set, with ten freshmen being drafted in the first round and twelve in total.
- Fixed—Chris! ct 20:22, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I would expand the lead to summarize the list a bit more, at least adding something on the positions of the players.
- Added—Chris! ct 20:22, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Tables
- What does the 1998 next entry # 6 refer to (in the last column)?
- It is the birth year—Chris! ct 20:22, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- You should clarify this in the article.--Best, ₮RUCӨ 21:20, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Added—Chris! ct 05:40, 1 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I would place the Sr. (and etc.) within parenthesis.
- Done—Chris! ct 20:22, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Why isn't senior linked?--Best, ₮RUCӨ 21:20, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- See my reply on disambiguation links.—Chris! ct 05:40, 1 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- For entries in the position that have more than one position, the most used position is placed first right?
- Yes. Added a note to clarify—Chris! ct 20:22, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Note A is not a complete sentence, remove the full stop.
- Done—Chris! ct 20:22, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Undrafted players
- Is it possible to get the date of the signing?
- See above. There is a discussion about the relevance of the section. I will probably removed it.—Chris! ct 19:42, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- So what is going to comeabout on this?--Best, ₮RUCӨ 00:29, 2 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I am still waiting for User:Noble Story's reply. If he doesn't reply, then I will try to look for the dates.—Chris! ct 05:03, 2 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Draft-day trades
- In a three-team trade, Portland acquired the draft rights to 25th pick Nicolas Batum from Houston; Houston acquired the draft rights to 28th pick Donté Greene, a second-round selection in 2009 from Memphis and 33rd pick Joey Dorsey from Portland; and Memphis acquired the draft rights to 27th pick Darrell Arthur from Portland. -- the semi colons should be commas
- In a three-team trade, Chicago acquired the rights to 36th pick Ömer Aşık from Portland; Portland acquired a second-round pick in 2009 from Denver and two future second-round picks from Chicago; and Denver acquired the draft rights to 39th pick Sonny Weems from Chicago. -- Same thing here
- San Antonio acquired the draft rights to 48th pick Malik Hairston, a second-round pick in 2009 and cash considerations from Phoenix in exchange for the draft rights to 45th pick Goran Dragić. -- Comma after 2009
- Fixed all—Chris! ct 20:22, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Traded picks
- The in at trade involving is really repetitive, is there other ways to state this?
- Fixed—Chris! ct 20:22, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- References
- For the Sl.com ref, that's the work, but the publisher is the Time Inc.
- Fixed—Chris! ct 20:22, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
--Best, ₮RUCӨ 00:29, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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