The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Hahc21 00:54, 12 April 2014 (UTC) [1]].[reply]


85th Academy Awards[edit]

85th Academy Awards (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

Nominator(s): Birdienest81 (talk) 16:29, 13 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating the 2013 Oscars for featured list because I believe it has great potential to become a Featured List. I read the requirements and criteria. I also followed how the 1929, 1989, 1990, 1992, 1994, 1996, 1998, 1999, 2000, 2002, 2004, 2009, 2010, and 2012 Oscars were written. --Birdienest81 (talk) 16:29, 13 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Giants2008 (Talk) 23:04, 23 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • Minor, but the Jean Hersholt Humanitarian Award winner could use a bullet point, like the honorary winners have.
  • Presenters and performers: "Annual" is improperly capitalized again in the first note.
  • Ceremony information: "an nationwide bus tour promoting the event...". "an" → "a".
  • Introduction of electronic voting system: "amongst" → "among"?
  • "but technical errors and glitches promoted the Academy to move the deadline one day later." "promoted" → "prompted"?
  • Box office performance of nominated films: Again minor, but a serial comma would be helpful after Flight, since you use it elsewhere in this section.
  • Note A: "the" is needed before "awards gala." Giants2008 (Talk) 19:34, 21 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Done: I have fixed everything you requested above.
--Birdienest81 (talk) 03:05, 22 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
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