Comments
- Is there a more up to date picture than 2006? [done]
- done, There is one from 2008 which I've changed to.
- "Kelly Rowland has an extensive discography" - this is very POV and not very true. [removed]
- In the last sentence of the first paragraph, the refs should be at the end.
- done, changed only to pass FL (this is something I personally don't agree with as with previous occassions I cannot find enough supporting evidence in terms of policy etc.)
- i only commented on it cuz it's what i have been told on previous FLC discussions. Mister sparky (talk) 23:59, 15 July 2010 (UTC) [done][reply]
- The "first studio album", "second studio album" etc are really unnecessary.
- In the albums table only the US positions are sourced. [done]
- The EU positions for the featured singles aren't sourced. [no stable source so replaced with France]
- What about the certifications for the featured singles? [Done]
- not done was told that these do not belong in the discography for the featured artist.
- they are included on the FL Pink discography and others. Mister sparky (talk) 23:59, 15 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- The album appearances need sourcing.
- will work on fixing these.
- As do the soundtracks, although I thought MOS:DISCOG said they shouldn't be included anyways...?
- will work on sourcing though per MOS:DISCOG regarding soundtracks it says "Non-original or previously-released material used on soundtracks, trailers, commercials, or any other compilation releases".
- Only 2 of the music video directors are sourced.
- will work on.
- There are bare url's in the references.
- easily rectified.
Mister sparky (talk) 22:47, 15 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- thanks for the input. --Lil-unique1 (talk) 23:26, 15 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- all of those responses are fair, I will work on them. --Lil-unique1 (talk) 00:03, 16 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I've done all of the above, but have an issue with the music videos in that many FLs (Pink discography included) uses links like http://www.vh1.com/video/pnk/9645/there-you-go.jhtml#artist= which do not state who produced each of the videos instead merely link to the video themselves. --Lil-unique1 (talk) 15:33, 17 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- the mtv links do have the directors name. you click on "more info" and it's there. Mister sparky (talk) 17:24, 17 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Ah right I see... It's ok I've gone through and added the information as well as removing where it is not attributable. I've Tiziano and Kelly's duet "Breath Gentle" because as seen from Tiziano's Vevo she is present in the video but there is no info on the director. Are you satisfied with the other changes? --Lil-unique1 (talk) 18:27, 17 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- germancharts.com doesn't verify anything, use musicline.de
- note manual verification charts like this are used on other FL's e.g. Rihanna discography which I tried to model this on.
- germancharts.com doesn't feature any chart positions for any artist, in rihanna's discog every position is sourced, in this one the german positions remain unsourced. Mister sparky (talk) 23:59, 15 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- http://www.musicline.de/de/artist/Rowland%2CKelly/discography offers no better solution. And note that this link which offers manual verification of pink singles is used. --Lil-unique1 (talk) 02:10, 17 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- i know exactly what the pink link is, i put it there. that musicline line link didnt show anything i know, but this one does. Mister sparky (talk) 17:24, 17 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- resolved. Sorry i couldn't navigate the website at first.
- same for the other hung medien refs, and the occ one.
- Done.
- in the singles tables, the netherlands is in the wrong place.
- Moved
- in the featured singles table you've included the certs for austria, belgium and norway but those 3 countries arent mentioned anywhere else in the article so the certs shouldn't be in the table.
- Removed.
- in the singles as a main artist table you've replaced germany with us dance. any reason for this just in the 1 table?
- It was because of the ref issues though this has now been resolved
Mister sparky (talk) 20:17, 17 July 2010 (UTC)
--Lil-unique1 (talk) 23:48, 17 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- there are 3 different refs for the irish charts, all 3 could be replaced with this one.
- I deliberately didn't use: Irish-charts.com because the chart positions shown for the album do not match those provided at the official gfk chart track ones and considering GfK is the official licensed provider i consider them more reliable. See hung medien says the Ms. Kelly peaked at 46 on 28 June 2007 yet Chart-track.co.uk shows the album at 53 for that date. --Lil-unique1 (talk) 23:05, 17 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- the hung medien sites use the entry date, not the peak date. the album didnt peak until may 2008 shown by chart-track here Mister sparky (talk) 00:11, 18 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- the lead also needs a copy-edit, it's missing comma's and some other punctuation and is missing some words. read it aloud and you'll get what i mean.
Mister sparky (talk) 00:15, 18 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- done (i think) --Lil-unique1 (talk) 01:01, 18 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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