- Lead. Catalogue is spelt with a "ue" in BritEng.
- Honours and achievements. Are you sure Luton have won "several major honours in English football"? Don't think our Villa-supporting colleague who used to review these lists would have let me claim 1 League Cup, 4 Second Divisions, 1 Third and 2 Football League Trophies as "several major honours", and yours are on a similar level :-)
- Reference should come after any punctuation, not before their comma.
- Is there any reason for referencing each honour individually to various pages from Collings or FCHD or one BBC match report, rather than just referencing the whole section to FCHD?
- Flags. Need accompanying with country names, per MOS:ICON#Accompany with country names.
- Images. Per MOS:IMAGES, use the thumb parameter default, i.e. don't specify a width, unless there's good reason not to. At 1024x768 screen resolution, I'm seeing lots of white space where images push tables out of their way.
- Don't think decorating a list is enough to justify fair-use on the Morton and Turner images. They're not "historically significant photo[s] of a famous individual", they're just photos.
- Top goalscorers. Number column doesn't sort properly (if the 6= cell is at the top, it isn't recognised as numeric, so the column sorts as alpha rather than numeric).
- Transfers. Don't really see the point of making a five-line table sortable. Doesn't do any harm, obviously, but for information, if you've got any more lists to come, the criteria say "includes, where helpful, ... table sort facilities" (my highlighting), they don't require all tables to be sortable.
- International. First capped (Hawkes) and first int'l goalscorer (Payne). Sources don't verify facts.
- First int'l goalscorer. International has a spurious capital I.
- Linking England 3 times in 4 lines is probably twice too many (WP:OVERLINK#Link density).
- Club records. Be consistent about whether you're using Second Division or Division Two format.
- Again, once per section is enough for linking xxx Division.
- Record defeats. Wouldn't have been Leicester City in 1899.
- European statistics. The words might read better if you merged the never progressing past the group stage bit into the AngloIt sentence, along the lines of "As of 2009, the only European competition the club have taken part in is the Anglo-Italian Cup, but they never progressed past the group stage.", so you finish with what they have taken part in before starting to talk about them not being able to enter the UEFA cup.
- Suggest you let the tables have a bit more width, so the columns don't wrap.
- Footnotes. Note C needs another backlink. Though you could always get round the problem by putting notes which attach to column headings of small tables immediately below the table they attach to, without any complex mechanisms, as per HERE.
- Note G. Per WP:MOSNUM#Numbers as figures or words, comparable quantities should be all words or all numbers, so "thirty" should be written 30.
- References. #28 (Barnett) is missing a publisher.
- Ref #70 (Time) needs a publication date.
- Ref #77 (Guardian Weekly) needs a letter p before the page number, for consistency. cheers, Struway2 (talk) 15:09, 25 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- All sorted except the "Reference should come after any punctuation, not before their comma." Not before their comma? I can't see any references done incorrectly – can you be more specific? Cliftonian (Talk • Contibs) 15:47, 25 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- That's because I fixed them :) Dabomb87 (talk) 15:53, 25 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- They seek him here, they seek him there… them coppers seek 'im everywhere… is he in heaven, or is he in hell? That damned … elusive … Dabomb87. Cliftonian (Talk • Contibs) 15:55, 25 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- They'd have gone anyway, when you changed the honours section to just use the one reference. cheers, Struway2 (talk) 15:57, 25 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I've capped the resolved ones, which leaves these.
- Flags. Need accompanying with country names, per MOS:ICON#Accompany with country names.
- Top goalscorers. Number column doesn't sort properly (if the 6= cell is at the top, it isn't recognised as numeric, so the column sorts as alpha rather than numeric).
- I fixed that by using ((nts)) and put the equals signs back, please take them back out if you don't want them.
- Club records. Be consistent about whether you're using Second Division or Division Two format.
- Again, once per section is enough for linking xxx Division.
- Europe. Suggest you let the tables have a bit more width, so the columns don't wrap. To explain what I'm seeing at 1024x768 resolution, in the main table, dates are wrapping to 3 lines, flags are breaking from their country, but there's 4cm of unused white space to the right of the table.
- Note I also needs a source for Luton Town qualifying for the UEFA Cup but not being able to enter, which I should have made clear. cheers, Struway2 (talk) 17:16, 25 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- OK, all done now. :) Cliftonian (Talk • Contibs) 06:49, 26 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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