08:3808:38, 22 December 2023diffhist−592
Fairytale of New York
Leadingthe paragraph with this quote gives undue weight to one particular point of view. It should be reworked into the text of the section, perhaps, to avoid this problem
14:5114:51, 1 October 2023diffhist−4
List of aquarium diseases
Changed references to Saprolegnia as a "Fungus" to an "Oomycete", a more accurate description of it that is important to know in context of the fact anti-fungal drugs are ineffective against it.
23 August 2023
17:4817:48, 23 August 2023diffhist−5
Iberian ribbed newt
→Space experiments: Changed oddly ambivalent terms saying the Iberian Ribbed Newt "May have" been to space in 1985. There is no reason for doubt on this and it's well cited, so I changed the verbiage used to be more confident.
12 August 2023
12:2012:20, 12 August 2023diffhist−1
Assisted suicide
Removing POV framing. Saying that doctors "remind" that something is against the Hippocratic Oath implies that their opinion is the correct one and they are making people aware of it. Since this is an opinion only, changing the wording to "state".
17:1917:19, 12 December 2022diffhist−321
Neurergus kaiseri
→Captive care: "Cycled water" does not exist, so I have removed references to it. "Cycling" refers to the cultivation of denitrifying and bacteria-eating microbes within the biomedia of a filter, or filter-analogue. The water is just water. It is also incorrect and misleading to claim that they "Need" a variety of plants that are totally alien to them in their enclosures.Tag: references removed
01:5601:56, 14 May 2022diffhist+29
Sodium dithionite
→Industry: Added "Aquarium water conditioners" to the list of uses for sodium dithionite, due to the widespread use of products such as Seachem Prime and Safe that consist of it.
15:0515:05, 17 February 2022diffhist+33
Free public transport
This information shouldn't necessarily be removed, but it is a single study and more information on drawbacks from a more global perspective is needed for balance