22:0422:04, 8 December 2023diffhist−9
Ana Mari Cauce
→Career: this sentence was repetitive and awkward. I've tried to rewrite in a way that conveys the historic milestones of her appointment without repeating "first" or overly emphasizing identity categories. Since her sexuality is described below in her personal details, is it notable enough to describe in this sentence? Right now, since there's no reference, I removed it.Tag: Visual edit
7 December 2023
22:0622:06, 7 December 2023diffhist−915
Ana Mari Cauce
I removed the section about Cauce's brother and his burial. It seems tangential to her biography and the key words in there that list political and racial identity categories: "Communist" "white males" "black cemetery" do more to stoke anxiety about her affiliations, but they are not necessary relevant to her biography, rather they're about her brother. Happy to discuss further if there's an editor who is interested in developing this article and wants to expand section on her brother.Tag: Visual edit
17:1817:18, 18 July 2023diffhist+32 m
European Journalism Centre
→Operations: corrected a program name from Data Driven Journalism to Data Journalism + added a hyphen to the phrase (data-driven journalism) because, as a general phrase, data-driven serves as an adjective preceding a noun, journalism.Tag: Visual edit