Sources and reception[edit]

Sorry for the somewhat incomplete nature of the article; I'd initially been intending on writing it up for a while but I ended up without the time, just sort of sitting on it. The reception section in particular I never really, uh, wrote. For anyone wanting and willing to expand the article themselves, these sources might or might not be useful:



The Millionth One (talk) (contribs) 06:13, 16 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Adam Jensen/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 20:47, 9 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be reviewing this article. I don't have too much experience with this series so that will make it more fitting.Tintor2 (talk) 20:47, 9 September 2023 (UTC) First things:[reply]

That's all for now.Tintor2 (talk) 23:07, 9 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Appearances

I managed to understand everything going on here so the prose is looking good. However, there is something that bugs me:

Creation and design

Tintor2 (talk) 00:03, 10 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

The second paragraph has a lot of in-depth commentary so it's fine. Maybe I'm nitpicking a bit so don't feel forced to do everything I pointed. Ping me once everything is done. Good work.Tintor2 (talk) 00:23, 10 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@ProtoDrake:

@Tintor2: I've done my best with the above. Rewrote the lead slightly, added an image of Adam's trenchcoat look, delineated the two games' events (kept related media separate), and included the DeMarle image as there is a lot of commentary from her relating to his character. --ProtoDrake (talk) 09:40, 10 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Perfect. Passing the review.Tintor2 (talk) 13:57, 10 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]