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Think this page needs updating since the book is already released.
Whilst I respect the fact that someone has taken the time to write a full synopsis for the novel, I will take some time in the future to alter some of the grammar used in this article. 79.73.205.160 08:42, 17 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Nathaniel Garro and Iacton Qruze have never been explicitly stated as 'founding members' of their respective legions. Garro is definately a terran born marine, while Qruze is only possibly (he is also referred to as 'The Last Cthonion' in Galaxy in Flames) so. Being terran born does not make Garro an original member of the Dusk Raiders, only a marine that predates Mortarion's discovery. This article is also full of author's own supposition and critique, which I'll remove now.Primarch06:55, 4 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
I haven't editted it yet, but, um, is there anything notable enough about one paperback novel to warrant an article this large? Can all the Horus Heresy Books not be merged, and the summaries pared down, significantly? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 206.126.163.20 (talk) 15:06, 15 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]