Assessment comment[edit]

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start: info & infobox supplied; needs: in-line refs (could be C-class with several more good refs added);Shaidar cuebiyar (talk) 03:33, 30 July 2008 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Substituted at 18:19, 17 July 2016 (UTC)

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:GBI (German Bold Italic)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Cukie Gherkin (talk · contribs) 07:05, 24 January 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]


Images

  1. No fair use images, neat

References

  1. References seem to be formatted and organized really nicely; unless I'm overlooking something, does not seem to use any low-quality sources. Will do a spotcheck after reviewing the article itself.

Lead

  1. Changed 'has little success' to 'had little success'
  2. Otherwise, lead seems solid (will come 'round back if it seems like a vital aspect of the article is absent from the summary)

Infobox

  1. All details important for the infobox appear to be present, and vice versa with the article

Background and production

  1. All good

Composition

  1. Seems fine, though if I may ask, which source is being used to say that she "seductively reads her line"?

Release and remixes

  1. All good

Reception

  1. Is there anything that you feel may be gained by expanding the reception provided by Priya Elan?
  2. I tweaked 'has' to 'had' again, as the arguments made for its lack of commercial success are all past tense

Production and synopsis

  1. All good, although I think that the following line about it not being released fits better here than in the following section.

Reception and analysis

  1. All good

Aftermath

  1. I feel it may be a little redundant to say "has made several..." and "has worn traditional..." maybe change it to "where she wore"

Comments

  1. Will finish tomorrow, too dang tired. - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 07:45, 24 January 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]
  2. Done reviewing the text, will do a spotcheck soon. - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 16:50, 24 January 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]