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Much appreciated MyCatIsAChonk! Yeah, I noticed after I dibbed the nomination that Schminnte had retired, though I still intended to proceed with the review anyway as this article is entitled to one, especially after waiting for so long. I started looking at the article last night; knock on wood, I should have a review finished later today or tomorrow. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 15:15, 29 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you @MyCatIsAChonk for agreeing to take this on. I’ve decided (emboldened by TFA) to respond to my outstanding nominations as it's not fair on reviewers for me to drop tools and run (@Sohom Datta, I will renominate Hackaball for this reason if you are still interested). I expect I will fully return to editing at some point, so future Schminnte will be annoyed if I leave this in the queue for another six months. Chonk, if you want to help out it would be appreciated as I will be taking this one slowly. Cheers, Schminnte [talk to me]16:33, 29 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
The prose is generally excellent, but there are some minor issues with repetition, though I did take it upon myself to fix a couple of them. The name Reggie Watts appears in full five times in the prose; this is only necessary the first time he is mentioned. Subsequent mentions should just refer to him as Watts. Other names that appear in full more times than necessary are Tatsuya Takahashi and Justin Lincoln.
In the same paragraph that mentions Lincoln, I suggest trimming The American experimental artist Justin. Nullsleep's genre is not mentioned in that paragraph, so excising that particular Lincoln clause would make the passage more consistent, while also removing the second mention of Lincoln's first name.
Chelsea-based – should be clarified, whether in prose or by piping a link, that this is Chelsea, Manhattan. The source refers to a venue called Spectrum in a Chelsea, New York; while the disambiguation page for Chelsea lists multiple municipalities with that name in New York, a Google Search for "spectrum chelsea ny" turns up a Manhattan address.
The URL for ref #16 – labeled as Bruce Aisher's review for Music Radar – instead links to Rebecca Greenfield's review for Fast Company.
Is it Music Radar or MusicRadar? The spacing is inconsistent in the refs, while the one usage in the article text omits the space between the words.
Schminnte and Chonk – this article nearly meets the criteria, but the above points must be addressed before I can comfortably promote it. Other than that, Schminnte, I'm quite impressed. This was an enjoyable read; the prose is engaging, the article is structured in a way that is easy to navigate, and there are no issues I could detect WRT copyright. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 23:12, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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