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A paid editor made contributions to this article, and has disclosed that fact on this page, therefore the paid contributions template is a matter of fact and does not require discussion. Beyond My Ken (talk) 13:52, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

According to the policy "if you place the Paid tag, you should promptly start a discussion on the article's talk page to explain what is non-neutral about the article." As a paid editor I'm not allowed to remove the tag myself, but if any volunteer editor thinks that the neutral point of view of the article is ok, they are free to remove the tag as told in the Template:Paid contributions instructions: "If you do not start this discussion, then any editor is justified in removing the tag without warning."Jjanhone (talk) 17:18, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I'm pinging the previous editors of this article to see if they have something to say about the neutral point of view of the article. So hello Nauriya, RFD, Kicking222, All Hallow's Wraith, Facevalue1, David Gerard, Rosiestep, Derek R Bullamore. Do you see problems here? Thanks for your comments! Jjanhone (talk) 18:51, 12 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
lol, it still reads like a press release, and the paid tag is an excellent explanation for the reader - David Gerard (talk) 20:32, 12 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I'm seriously asking: what makes it "like a press release"? Is the summary too long and containing too many names or what's the matter? Jjanhone (talk) 21:00, 12 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The lead is a bit excessive and seems to repeat the article's body as prose. Perhaps shorten it and add wikilinks so the examples look more notable/relevant. Caius G. (talk) 11:06, 13 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks! Is it better now Caius G.? Jjanhone (talk) 09:00, 14 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Complaint (was: Request for comment)[edit]

Are there any issues with this article that can justify the warning added at the beginning of the article? If yes, can you give an example please?Jjanhone (talk) 09:00, 18 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]