The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was promoted by User:SandyGeorgia 01:07, 23 December 2008 [1].


2006 Gator Bowl[edit]

Nominator(s): JKBrooks85 (talk)

Hello, all. This is another article for the Virginia Tech Hokies bowl games featured topic in-progress. It's been passed through the GA review process, I've checked it for dead links via the tool provided, and it follows an established FA style featured in previous articles such as 2000 Sugar Bowl and 2008 Orange Bowl. The only thing this article lacks is pictures, but the aforementioned 2000 Sugar Bowl article also lacked pictures and didn't have any problems passing FAC. I'll continue to look for some, and if I'm able to find any (or if you can suggest some), I'll be sure to add them. Feel free to contact me with any comments, questions, or concerns, and I look forward to earning your support by addressing any items you care to bring to my attention. Thanks for your time. JKBrooks85 (talk) 07:12, 13 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments -

  • Fixed those two.
Otherwise, sources look okay, links checked out with the link checker tool. Ealdgyth - Talk 14:50, 13 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Dang, that is darn strange. I don't think I've ever done that before while writing an article. All the other FAs I've contributed to are in a standard format, and only this one looks funky. I wonder if I just started out differently, then kept it internally consistent throughout. Either way, I'm going to reformat these refs. There's a few "The Roanoke Times" vs. "Roanoke Times" conflicts, and the titles of the articles need to be put into quotes, so thanks for bringing it to my attention. JKBrooks85 (talk) 21:53, 13 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments - Another enjoyable Virginia Tech bowl article. Here's some of what I found that can be improved.

  • Fixed.
  • Fixed.
  • Fixed.
  • Fixed. Not sure what I was thinking, but I must've had a reason at the time.
  • Heh. I've put in a picture of the stadium for now. We can work out what else might work if you've got another suggestion.

I haven't gotten to the defensive matchups yet, but I can tell already that I will end up supporting this in the future. Like most articles from this editor, it flows well and leaves me wanting to read more, which I will be doing later. Giants2008 (17-14) 02:53, 14 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Defensive matchups: Jimmy Williams link needs disambiguation. The link should go to Jimmy F. Williams. While I'm here, a couple of these Tech defensive players have photos, if more are needed.
  • Fixed.
  • Fixed.
  • Final statistics: "and quarterback Hunter Cantwell was named the most valuable player of the Cardinals." I'm not crazy about of, so how about "was named the Cardinals' most valuable player."
  • Fixed.
  • There was a mistake on my part; I originally had Final quarter written instead of Final statistics. It wasn't changed, but I'm going to do it myself after I finish here, so I struck it. If it doesn't look right, feel free to change it back. Giants2008 (17-14) 20:34, 20 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Postgame effects: "The game itself provided more than $14 million dollars in economic benefit to the Jacksonville area...". That, my friend, is what dollar signs are for.
  • Aw, you're all about the dollar signs. :P
  • Yeah. I don't make enough of them for doing this. :-):-). Giants2008 (17-14) 20:34, 20 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • In addition to the two dabs I mentioned above, there are a bunch of others in the article; use the dab checker at the top right of the FAC page to find them.
  • Dang, that's a handy tool! I've fixed everything it noted and will definitely add that to my pre-FAC procedure from here on out.
  • Still a couple left, but I'll get these too. Giants2008 (17-14) 20:34, 20 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
That's it from me. Giants2008 (17-14) 02:55, 17 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks for another great review. I appreciate all the checking you've provided this and past FACs. It's definitely helpful. JKBrooks85 (talk) 02:12, 19 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from User:B
  • Fixed.
  • Removed.
  • This was something I had to make a judgment on in regards to readability. I imagined that it'd be easier for someone unfamiliar with college football to understand running back, and the article about the position is labeled that as well.
  • I think, so long as its consistently used, it can be either --for the 2007 USC Trojans season article, I used "running back" instead of "tailback" because I wanted to use the most common term --despite the fact that USC usually uses tailback to describe the position. --Bobak (talk) 18:02, 21 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • I think you're right on this one as well; I've switched it around.
  • Yeah, it's close enough together that Stinespring's tenure is pretty much irrelevant. I've changed it and added a new citation.

Image review: Images appear to be fine. --Moni3 (talk) 23:11, 15 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Could you please give me an example of what you would prefer? JKBrooks85 (talk) 22:21, 21 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]


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