The article was not promoted by SandyGeorgia 01:48, 26 October 2011 [1].
Percy LeSueur (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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Percy LeSueur was an ice hockey goaltender from the early days of the sport. He played for a small-town team against in a Stanley Cup challenge series against then-holders, Ottawa. One of the better teams in its era, Ottawa was so impressed by his play that he was playing for them nine days after his original team had lost their challenge match. As regards the article, I feel that despite being a bit on the short side, it is a well-written, thorough account of the man and his sixty years dedicated to the game of hockey, and consequently deserves FA status. Maxim(talk) 20:07, 20 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Source review - spotchecks not done. Be consistent in whether ISBNs are hyphenated or not. Nikkimaria (talk) 02:23, 21 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Copyscape check - No issues were revealed by Copyscape searches. Graham Colm (talk) 22:49, 21 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Comments – Quite a few things for an article of relatively short length, It's a little concerning...
Oppose: Although a good piece of work and fairly comprehensive, I don't think this is quite there yet. I have just looked at the lead and first section and found several issues, mainly with the prose which is not FA quality yet. A quick glance through the rest of the article reveals many similar problems and these should be sorted out. I notice that this article has not gone through PR or even GAN; while this is not a requirement of a FA, it is usually helpful to have the eyes of as many editors as possible before FA, so that it is not only the primary editor who has checked it and these kinds of problems can be ironed out. I am opposing for the moment and these are examples only from the lead and first section; the rest of the article should be checked thoroughly, preferably by another pair of eyes. --Sarastro1 (talk) 15:28, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Archiving at nominator request. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 01:47, 26 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]