Comments
- If the medal pic is fine, then at least tell me which kind (gold/bronze) it is!
- I wish I'd know. The author/uploader did not discriminate that... Nonetheless, there's this image (File:Dorothy Hamill gold medal.jpg) of a gold medal from these Games. In fact, it's from the same photo collection of File:1988 Calgary Olympic Winter Games gold medal.jpg which I used for the 1988 Winter Olympics medal table list. I could switch to this one, though I would prefer to crop it and thus have to make a derivative work (if no one is against...). Parutakupiu (talk) 21:46, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- "were a winter multi-sport event" sorry, I'm usually pretty easy going with the discretionary plural but this doesn't work at all. "were a ... event"?
- 1000->1,000.
- "and only four of them" remove only.
- Rephrased clause, it didn't sounded as good without the "only". Parutakupiu (talk) 21:46, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- "Liechtenstein won its first Olympic medals in the alpine skiing slalom events, thanks to two third-place finishes by Willi Frommelt and Hanni Wenze" would rephrase perhaps to say "Liechtenstein won its first Olympic medals in the alpine skiing slalom events, with bronzes to both ...."...
- "contributed to three " or simply "contributed three"? did she win them solo?
- She won two golds solo but the third was in a team event, so she wasn't solely responsible for that third gold, hence the "contributed" ... Removed "to". Parutakupiu (talk) 21:46, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- "Great Britain's last Winter Olympic medal had been a single gold at the " -> last ... medal ... had been a "single" gold. No need for "single" if you're saying that was GB's "last ... medal".
- "None of these teams won any medal." I feel a bit dirty here, but this reads nasty, maybe (using a US-vernacular and modern parlance) you could say "None of these three teams medalled", and merge it back using a semi-colon?!
- The vertical image gallery. Why bold text?
- It's the default style of ((multiple image)). It wouldn't be bold if I placed it at the bottom (footer), but I believe it makes more sense at the top. Parutakupiu (talk) 21:46, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The Rambling Man (talk) 20:17, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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