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Result: keep Clear consensus that problems have been addressed. Jezhotwells (talk) 22:04, 3 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

This article has two paragraphs, one heavy on technical data on recording and release, the other paraphrasing of the two available reviews. The rest, tracklisting and personnel, are lists transcribed from the DVD. The lack of info is the case here partly because there is no original work in this DVD - it's even called "marginal". Some articles aren't cut out for a GA assessment and don't allow for broad coverage (on background and development/writing and themes, recording, artwork, promotion, commercial performance, reception). This article fails in that category - in actual content it's a near-stub. Hekerui (talk) 10:01, 6 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comment Why not write a "composition" section, even though this is a DVD, you can explian each tracks genres, professional reviews, writing and inspiration, production and development of each track. Similar to album articles. If you need examples, if you want to consider this, I'll give you some example articles. Best, AJona1992 (talk) 15:58, 8 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    It has a well written prose quality.
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
    The article complies with Wikipedia's Manual of Style
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    Everything is properly cited.
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    All sources meet WP:RS
    C. No original research:
    I found no WP:OR
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    Wikipedia's Manual of Style (Wikipedia:Manual of Style (film) (this is a video, not an album) says that a film article must cover a film's Plot, Cast, Themes, Production, Release, and Reception. The contents section can be considered a plot section, since it explains what goes on in the film, the cast is listed in the personnel section, we have decided that discussing themes is not needed, Hekerui even agrees there is no need for a themes, or "composition" section. The film's production and release are talked about in the conception section, and there is a fair amount of information on the album's reception. Some of the things that Hekerui said the article needed are listed as "Secondary content" in Wiki's Manual of Style, and the rest was already covered in the article. The following is what Hekerui said the article needs:Background and development Green tickY talked about what is needed (Production)—Writing and themes/composition Red XN agreed not to be included in article.—Recording Green tickY Even though nothing is mentioned about recording in MOS:FILM, the article does talk about the film's recording.—Artwork Red XN MOS:FILM says that "if available", to provide information on Home media, but it is not available, so it is not required,—Promotion Red XN Production is not talked about in MOS:FILMS—Commercial performance Red XN The article had no commercial performance, and MOS:FILMS says to give a box office "if possible."—Reception Green tickY labeled as Critical reception.
    B. Focused:
    Focused
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
    It is neutral and is not bias.
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
    It is stable and is not undergoing any edit wars
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    Image looks good
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
    A picture of the cover art is all that is needed.
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
    If you disagree please comment. CrowzRSA 19:40, 23 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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