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I looked at the two journal articles added the recent edit on Criticism, and while both of them seem valuable, I do not see the text added in this article to really speak to criticisms of Modern Paganism. Can you elaborate on what you added to more clearly demonstrate this, MaitreyaVaruna (talk · contribs)? --- FULBERT (talk) 01:30, 24 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Pike (2004)

@GenoV84 I'm baffled by your edit summary here. From the top:

  1. Linking to a source in a reference or bibliography section is not a copyright violation.
  2. Pike (2004) is already present in the bibliography section above (as I wrote) as
  3. Your revert has re-introduced a sfn multiple-target reference error.

Please either revert or fix the error that you've introduced in some other way; if you're not familiar with shortened footnotes you can find guidance here. Best, Wham2001 (talk) 18:13, 10 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I didn't notice that, I'll try to fix it. GenoV84 (talk) 18:19, 10 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks! Wham2001 (talk) 18:21, 10 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thelema?

Isn't Thelema a significant neo-pagan religion? 2603:6011:A400:8873:C831:5028:5BE1:4F7A (talk) 23:51, 13 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Not the way it's defined here. Thelema is a revealed religion, which often (but not always) is contrasted with paganism. Ffranc (talk) 09:34, 17 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
There's no one authority what paganism is; the only standard (OED, MW, and maybe definitive ones in mainly-English-speaking countries and Italy) dictionary (one-word simplification) definitions are 'country-dweller', 'non-Abrahamic' so almost all philosophies/religions are pagan: if Thelema is non-Abrahamic it fits some such article (things like El & Yahwism, and Christo-paganism, Universal Sufism and similar West Asian hybrid religions are other issues in which definition fits for adherents but not others). If I recall correctly, Thelema used/inverted Abrahamic material as anti-Abrahamism, which moreso falls under 'non-Abrahamic' except (by using the material, like Satanism/Luciferianism which fall under same definition but many pagans say aren't pagan) that's about as problematic as Abrahamism to pagans who'd rather have nothing to do with it--dchmelik☀️🦉🐝🐍(talk|contrib) 10:06, 17 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
This is about neopaganism/modern paganism though, so what matters here is what distinguishes those movements. The origin of the word pagan is a separate issue. (The common theories created by Andrea Alciato ("civilian", opposite of miles Christi) and Caesar Baronius ("country-dweller") may be applicable to some texts but have chronological problems. There is a good summary of the confused academic discourse in Elogio del politeismo by Maurizio Bettini.) The idea of paganism as non-Abrahamism is itself modern, and modern paganism has never operated on that premise. Ffranc (talk) 11:40, 17 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Requested move 23 August 2022

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: page moved. Strong arguments have been made on both sides, but the numerical consensus in favor of moving is not outweighed by the opposing arguments. I submit that the decisive argument, most clearly articulated by Cinderella157, is that this article currently describes something too general to merit capitalization in itself, and while such grammatical norms can be trumped by a clear preponderance of capitalized instances outside Wikipedia (and not just in scholarly media), there is, at present, insufficient evidence thereof. SchreiberBike summarized the situation well: What is and is not a proper noun is hard to define around the edges, so we fall back on n-grams and modern paganism is certainly capitalized much less than recognized religions.... [Moreover,] this article does not describe paganism in the way that those who say "I am a Pagan" describe their beliefs. It describes it as a group of religions. That could change. I hope most of us will agree that this is a borderline case, so may we be especially quick to assume good faith in all those involved, including myself. Arbitrarily0 (talk) 18:10, 7 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Modern PaganismModern paganism – per MOS:ISMCAPS. This suggestion failed to achieve consensus support in an RM discussion five years ago, but the fact remains that paganism is not a single identifiable organized religion or even a single identifiable set of specific beliefs. Rather, as the article says, modern paganism is "a collective term for religious movements" of a certain variety. Collective terms are things that describe a category, and thus are common nouns, not proper names. There isn't any single authoritative definition of what modern paganism exactly is. As the article says, "Most scholars describe modern Paganism as a broad array of different religions, not a single one", and there is a "lack of core commonalities in issues such as theology, cosmology, ethics, afterlife, holy days, or ritual practices", and there is "no consensus about how contemporary Paganism can best be defined". Wikipedia's convention is to use lowercase in such situations. See also Germanic paganism, as noted in the 2017 discussion. Please also see the related ongoing RM at Talk:Neopaganism in Scandinavia#Requested move 14 August 2022. —⁠ ⁠BarrelProof (talk) 18:29, 23 August 2022 (UTC) — Relisting.  — Amakuru (talk) 10:34, 31 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Prior close, prior to a move review which led to this RM being relisted

Moved. I guess we can build a snowman in August. (closed by non-admin page mover) – robertsky (talk) 09:58, 28 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  • It can be misleading to say that Modern Paganism is not a proper name. While Paganism is often applied as an over-arching term for a related group of religions (Wicca, Heathenry etc), there are also those who identify solely as Pagans, and their religion as Paganism. In those cases at least, Paganism is undeniably a proper noun. This undermines the MOS:ISMCAPS argument. Midnightblueowl (talk) 19:42, 2 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • This particular Ngram confuses the fact that the term paganism is used in two distinct ways. Historically, it was a Christian term applied to non-Christians; since at least the mid-20th century it has been adopted as a term for a modern religious phenomenon. As this article makes clear, the standard practice among scholars of the topic is to use the lower-case pagan for the former, and the upper-case Pagan for the latter. Assembling a collection of all appearances of "paganism" on the Ngram will inevitably pool both uses of the term, and thus is not suitable evidence for how we should title the article on Modern Paganism specifically. Midnightblueowl (talk) 19:38, 2 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

(This doesn't seem like a particularly Southern Hemisphere topic, but it looks like it is snowing in August!) —⁠ ⁠BarrelProof (talk) 16:49, 25 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I do believe it is. With a little more time, it could develop into a blizzard. Cinderella157 (talk) 23:04, 25 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

(Comments made after the initial close):

Would this not be an instance of WP:SSF? Graham (talk) 20:37, 31 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Only as much as the opposing view is an instance of WP:BIAS. Multiple examples of academic reference have been provided. A clear line has been drawn to accepted capitalization use in other cases. What hasn't been discussed is the struggle that members of the Pagan community have been undertaken to receive recognition in the various Manuals of Style (AP, Chicago, etc) and received exactly the sort of response in this discussion; it's not a proper noun because we say it's not.[1] Meanwhile, Britannica has decided to capitalize Pagan and Neo-Pagan[2][3]. Darker Dreams (talk) 03:46, 1 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Per MOS:FAQ:

Although Wikipedia contains some highly technical content, it is written for a general audience. While specialized publications in a field, such as academic journals, are excellent sources for facts, they are not always the best sources for or examples of how to present those facts to non-experts. When adopting style recommendations from external sources, the Manual of Style incorporates a substantial number of practices from technical standards and field-specific academic style guides; however, Wikipedia defaults to preferring general-audience sources on style, especially when a specialized preference may conflict with most readers' expectations, and when different disciplines use conflicting styles.

What your comment seems to lay out is that "general-audience sources on style" such as the AP Stylebook and The Chicago Manual of Style reject the capitalization of paganism, and that most (not all, but most) sources that consistently capitalize the term are academic sources that specialize in the study of neopaganism. This seems like a textbook case of the specialized-style fallacy. Graham (talk) 05:39, 1 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
That's a spectacular straw man. It ignores the fact that you can do the same thing with non-academic sources, including in both journalistic and popular style. Further, it ignores that the major difference between those who consistently capitalize and those that don't is a minimal attempt to respect the real people practicing the religion under discussion and, specifically, their strongly expressed desire to be treated with the same respect as other religions and families of religions. Darker Dreams (talk) 13:09, 1 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Because this is a formatting issue, not a common name issue. Rreagan007 (talk) 18:29, 1 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Even with lowercase "modern" the uppercase holds a clear advantage in the ngram measurement. This only adds to Midnightblueowl's excellent research and assertions. Randy Kryn (talk) 14:35, 1 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
We don’t capitalize things that have a “clear advantage”; we only capitalize if there is a substantial majority, as you well know. This is close to 50/50. Wallnot (talk) 13:04, 3 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
And this, a fairer use of the Ngram, shows that the odds are by far in favour of the capitalised P. Midnightblueowl (talk) 17:28, 3 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The opposers aren't necessarily arguing Paganism is a single religion. I, for example, view it as a family of religions. Much like Abrahamic religions and Dharmic religions. I'm coming to think Hinduism is a family of religions, but Western understanding of it is so misaligned / misinformed that we think of it as a single religion. On the other hand, there are individuals for which Paganism is the unifying, singular term for their religion, including Oberon Zell. But, either way, Hinduism is probably one of the closest reference points to how Paganism should be handled. Darker Dreams (talk) 19:52, 1 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"Abrahamic" and "Dharmic religions", which are rarely referred to as "Abrahamism(s)" and "Dharmism(s)" (even more rarely than the former), and "Hinduism" to a lesser extent, are the most accurate categories to which "(Neo)Paganism" can be compared as to its semantic function. We could say that the semantic value of "(Neo)Paganism" stays somewhere in-between "Hinduism" and "Abrahamic" or "Dharmic religons". Æo (talk) 20:03, 1 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ 1949-, Berger, Helen A., (2003). Voices from the Pagan Census : a national survey of Witches and neo-Pagans in the United States. Leach, Evan A., Shaffer, Leigh S. Columbia, S.C.: University of South Carolina Press. ISBN 9781570034886. OCLC 51566739. ((cite book)): |last= has numeric name (help)CS1 maint: extra punctuation (link) CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (link)
  2. ^ Bureau, US Census. "Section 1. Population". www.census.gov. Retrieved 2017-07-29.
The claims of those promoting "Support" also need to be scrutinised, because some of them are specious. Most of the comments given by "Supporters" of a change do not indicate a good understanding of the subject matter; I suspect that some of those lending "Support" have confused paganism as a generic Christian concept for non-Christians with Paganism as a modern religious identity. As this article currently points out, the general rule among scholars of the topic (with a few exceptions) is to render the former in lower case and the latter in upper case. I also think it is wrong to say that Paganism is not a proper noun. Sometimes Pagan is used as a general term for people whose primary self-identification is as a Wiccan, Druid, Heathen etc, but in many other cases there are people who identify as Pagans, and only that (they are sometimes called "Eclectic Pagans" in the literature). In those cases, Pagan is undoubtedly a proper noun. On that front, the whole argument for invoking MOS:ISMCAPS falls apart, and with it the main case for "Support". Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:04, 2 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Modern Paganism" is not inherently a proper name phase since it is descriptive of pagan religions in the modern era. This article's lead would state: ... [it] is a collective term for religions influenced by the various historical pre-Christian beliefs ..., further reinforcing that it is being used as a category or common noun phrase. Consequently, there is no inherent reason to capitalise this but we should then defer to MOS:CAPS (through WP:NCCAPS) if there is (as there now is) dissent over whether the phase is a proper name.
  • The specific guidance within MOS:CAPS is at MOS:ISMCAPS: not [to] capitalized unless derived from a proper name. For example, Islam, Christianity, Catholic, Pentecostal, and Calvinist are capitalized, while evangelicalism and fundamentalism are not. The guidance would therefore tell us to use lowercase.
  • If one chooses to ignore this specific advice, we then revert to the general advice of MOS:CAPS in the lead: ... only words and phrases that are consistently capitalized in a substantial majority of independent, reliable sources are capitalized in Wikipedia.
  • To resolve this, one needs to review a randomly selected statistically significant sample of sources. Any small set of sources presented by an editor are usually going to be subject to selection bias even if this is not the intention. Sources of a particular type (eg news sources or academic sources) can also exhibit a selection bias in respect to the larger set of potential sources and general usage.
  • WP:SSF would caution us against giving undue weight to academic sources. Yes, it is an essay and not a guideline but its advice is verifiable through citations and it is in good standing. It provides an objective basis to avoid giving undue weight to a particular type of source generally.
  • Both sides of this of this discussion would acknowledge the utility of ngrams as evidence addressing the criteria of the general guidance at MOS:CAPS, though some skill is still required in gathering and interpreting ngram evidence.
  • The first issue is that ngrams do not distinguish usage in prose (where sentence case is used) from usage in headings, captions, references and like where title case commonly used. It is common to make an allowance of 10% for title case usage when viewing raw data or to refine the search with additional terms such as Amakuru has done here to indicate usage in prose.
  • The second issue is the threshold of usage that indicates capitalisation is necessary per the guidance. This is clearly not a simple majority of cases but a supermajority of cases. Past discussions would suggest >80% for raw data (noting a 10% allowance for title case usage) or >70% where there is refinement to indicate usage in prose. This is quite generous (in favour of capitalisation) since terms such as Christianity and Hinduism are capitalised essentially all of the time and a confidence limit much closer to 100% would not be unreasonable by comparison with these.
  • Neither of the two ngrams presented by Randy Kryn give a true picture of usage that would address whether "modern paganism" is a proper name. One must reasonably consider all of the different permutations of case for the two word phrase as here. One can take a simple view and consider just the most recent data or apply a greater degree of smooting as here. Regardless, observation would indicate that Modern Paganism represents about 50% of usage compared with the other two common permutations modern Paganism and modern paganism, while Modern paganism is most likely modern paganism when used at the start of a sentence. It is clear from this mixed usage that Modern Paganism does not reach the threshold to be considered a proper noun phrase. This is perhaps even clearer in the ngram evidence of Amakuru, which is a refinement for usage in prose.
  • A survey of several pages from JSTOR here and Google Scholar here, looking at the search summaries, would indicate a similar distribution, while Google Books is of little direct use, since the term really isn't appearing in the search summaries per here (though I believe the results from Google Books might vary between regions.
  • Yes we do tend to capitalise religions eg Hinduism and Buddhism because they are derived from what are inherently proper names. To make such an argument for modern paganism is non sequitur. To argue that there are multiple practices in Hinduism and modern paganism, therefore they are similar and therefore, if Hinduism is capped, so should modern paganism ignores the reason why Hinduism or Abrahimic (of Abraham) is capped - not because they are religions but because they are derived from proper names.
  • To argue from WP:BLP is too long a bow to draw.
  • To argue respect would fall to MOS:SIGNIFCAPS and/or WP:RIGHTGREATWRONGS. It is an emotive argument. The guidance is to rely on objective source base criteria to determine capitalisation. To argue from WP:BIAS is a strawman if one adheres to objective source base criteria. To not do so would be more like WP:BIAS.
  • I can see no strength in the arguments offered to opposed. Cinderella157 (talk) 04:13, 4 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Cinderella157: I'm not one of those of the "respect" argument, which in my opinion does not apply here. However, names of religions are generally capitalised in English, regardless of whether they are based on proper nouns or not. MOS:ISMCAPS says: Names of organized religions (as well as officially recognized sects), whether as a noun or an adjective, and their adherents start with a capital letter. Unofficial movements, ideologies or philosophies within religions are generally not capitalized unless derived from a proper name. For example, Islam, Christianity, Catholic, Pentecostal, and Calvinist are capitalized, while evangelicalism and fundamentalism are not. Here there is a flaw in the MOS rule. "Evangelicalism" and "fundamentalism" are indeed not religions but approaches to the way of being religious; the others in the list are religions. However, neither "Islam", nor "Catholic", nor "Protestant" are based on proper nouns: the first means "surrender (to God)" in Arabic, the second means "all-whole" (katholikos) in Greek, the third is an archaic Latinate form of "protester". Æo (talk) 19:01, 6 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Æo yes, we do generally capitalise the names of religions, when these are considered proper names of themself or based on proper nouns as when I was referring to Hinduism and Abrahimic. The question is to resolve whether this (modern paganism) is a proper name. What a proper name is, is generally not well understood. There is a general perception but false equivalence between capitalisation (orthography) and proper name (grammar) which ignores that we often use capitalisation to emphasise or distinguish a phrase in much the same way that we might use quote marks or italics. We might then justify using caps by asserting that the name labels [describes] something that is unique, specific or significant. Such assertions ignore that specificity can equally be achieved by a common noun phrase (common name). Specificity of referent is a property of proper names but not an exclusive, defining property. A true proper name is an arbitrary label which (intrinsically) tells us nothing about the referent. A proper name may appear to have a descriptive meaning, even though it does not ... If it had once been, it may no longer be so ... Just as for the example of Newtown, in the proper noun article, proper names will often have a derivation (etymology). Catholic may mean all-embracing. While the Catholic Church may once have been, it no longer is all-embracing. Catholic refers to the religious denomination with the Pope at its head. Protestants aren't protesting in the streets and very few Anglophones would associate Islam with its Arabic meaning. Because of the mixed understandings about what a proper name is, WP reverts to empirical evidence to resolve disputes. Of the various terms you raise immediately above and below, please see this ngram evidence.[14][15][16] One can see that the religions we would capitalise per the advice at MOS:ISMCAPS are near always capitalised - quite unlike modern paganism. There is no apparent inconsistency as you would assert. The rules of grammar in conjunction with this article, the advice at MOS:ISMCAPS and the general advise at MOS:CAPS along with ngram evidence all indicate a conclusion for a move to modern paganism. Cinderella157 (talk) 01:10, 7 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Very well put. —⁠ ⁠BarrelProof (talk) 16:25, 7 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Tony1 & Laurel Lodged: Regarding your argument here, do you realise that "Catholicism", "Protestantism", "Eastern Orthodoxy", "Pentecostalism", etc., are not based on proper names and yet they are always capitalised?--Æo (talk) 14:35, 6 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
P.S. And "Christianity" isn't either, since "Christ" is not a proper name but a title.--Æo (talk) 14:38, 6 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.