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Request for NPOV review

I have made two edits to the page, drawing from others in the nearby graph, with the intent of restoring NPOV to the article. I feel that before these edits it slanted significantly towards an apologists' view: next to a half sentence saying the Lakota consider the land sacred, there was an explanation that some outsiders don't find that belief valid.

It's hard for me to fathom how to write this article honestly without plainly stating from the top that the land belonged to Native Americans; that the United States recognized their ownership in a treaty; and that the 1980 Supreme Court ruling confirmed the US did not honor the treaty.

Given that it's hard for me to so fathom, I'd like an editor with more Wikipedia experience or even just an outside point of view to review the prior content and my changes for balance. I'm only an occasional editor; I'll try to check back but if I've used the wrong template tags or process please do whatever's right for the content.

Thanks, flip — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mrflip (talkcontribs) 20:09, July 3, 2020 (UTC)

@Mrflip:, I took a look at your recent changes and do not find that they violate any of the Core Content Policies, including WP:NPOV. There could be an argument made on the basis of WP:DUE but even a brief review of the history shows that the area was unambiguously ceded to the Lakota via ratified treaty and then expropriated and that this is the essence of the claim so it certainly seems like it is in proportion to coverage in RS. The citations could be improved but that can be addressed through the resources found at Help:Referencing for beginners. I hope this helps. Eggishorn (talk) (contrib) 23:54, 4 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"Theft of the Black Hills" vs "Black Hills Land Claim"

We have a problem here. On 11 June 2023, User:Larataguera made the undiscussed move of this page from "Black Hills Land Claim" to "Theft of the Black Hills". This move should have been discussed, as all significant moves should. On 18 June 2023, User:Snarcky1996 restored the article to its original name. On 20 June 2023, also without discussion, User:Freoh moved the article back to the undiscussed version, also without discussion. This is not at all the appropriate process. I've been here a very long time, but I have studiously avoided learning bureaucratic back-end processes, so I'm not going to attempt to move the article back to the original "Black Hills Land Claim", because I would most likely bugger it up hopelessly - but it needs to be done - then editors can discuss the move, and come to a consensus.
Separately, the current opening wording is a misrepresentation of what took place. SCOTUS did not rule that the US government "stole" the land - this is an editorialized restatement of what the ruling was. We need to use neutral wording when presenting material in the encyclopedia.
I'm not interested in a fight here; I've no dog in the hunt. But the process for significant changes is discuss first, find a consensus, then move forward. Let's abide by the process. cheers. anastrophe, an editor he is. 20:39, 20 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I will for my part simply remark that this article is indeed about the current land claim, not about the 1870s events, therefore the name "Black Hills Land Claim" is the appropriate one. Snarcky1996 (talk) 21:02, 20 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Snarcky1996, I'd like to discuss this move a little more. You say that the article is about the current land claim, but around half the article is actually in the "History" and "Land rights and treaties" sections, which cover events in the 1800s. So I think "Theft of the Black Hills" is a broader title that would include these sections in its scope. Would you be willing to reconsider this move? Thanks! Larataguera (talk) 00:13, 25 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I would recommend an RFC, as this is not a heavily trafficked article, so uninvolved eyes would probably be helpful in reaching a consensus. cheers. anastrophe, an editor he is. 00:17, 25 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Anastrophe I agree. Snarcky1996 (talk) 12:19, 25 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Larataguera Half, but not all, that's the thing, "Black Hills land claim" is broader because it include both the History background of the 19th century, and more recent and current events. Black Hills land claim is probably a broader title. Snarcky1996 (talk) 12:19, 25 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I will add that the user Freoh seems to have unilaterally blocked the possibility of changing again the page's name. Snarcky1996 (talk) 21:07, 20 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I guess I should have discussed the move. I thought it was possibly uncontroversial since the supreme court ruled that the land was taken illegally without compensation (ie, theft) and because many reliable sources describe it as theft. I can provide some of these sources later when I have more time.
Based on Freoh's edit summary, I think they may not have realised that Snarcky was reverting my undiscussed move, and it wouldn't be their fault that the software doesn't allow multiple pagemove reversions.
@Snarcky, there's actually quite a lot in the article about events in the 1870s.Larataguera (talk) 22:26, 20 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I moved it back. Get a consensus first. AlexiusHoratius 02:09, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

no Disagree with Snarcky1996. I prefer Theft of the Black Hills for a few reasons.

I agree with Larataguera; Wikipedia guidelines point to Theft of the Black Hills.  — Freoh 17:33, 25 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

MOS:CLAIM doesn't apply - a "land claim" is a specific term of art; it is not equivalent to a "land said". The Ngram isn't compelling; First, the matter has been written about extremely sparsely. Second - Repeat the ngram, but eliminate smoothing and begin results in 1960, which is when the first writings appear in google's corpus. It vaccilates wildly - again due to the sparsity of results. The difference between the two results is a statistical wash. Had this ngram been used as an argument twenty years ago, it would have 'compellingly' shown that the land claim was the overwhelming result. Ngram just isn't the right tool here. I am not opposed to the move; wider discussion is what's needed. cheers. anastrophe, an editor he is. 18:33, 26 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

References

Requested move 26 June 2023

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: no consensus. There isn't a consensus for the term "theft", but there also is a developing consensus that just describing it as a "land claim" is possibly a bit too euphemistic to the point of NPOV violation given the context of the 1981 Supreme Court case.

This particular RM is, hence, a "no consensus" close, however, I can see a possible consensus for "Seizure of the Black Hills" as a compromise title. A new RM to formalise this consensus can, and I believe, should be created without prejudice to this result. (closed by non-admin page mover) Sceptre (talk) 23:31, 5 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]


Black Hills land claimTheft of the Black Hills – This article describes the theft of the Black Hills in the 1870s, not just the current land claim (which is a response to that theft). The land claim presupposes the theft. The new title more completely describes the scope of the article. Finally, the Google Ngram shows that "Theft of the Black Hills" is the WP:COMMONNAME, and this is a compelling reason to move the article. Larataguera (talk) 09:44, 26 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I have notified all of the listed WikiProjects of this move request. Larataguera (talk) 09:52, 26 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

My word choice and 'vote' were not well put. As I originally stated, I've no dog in this hunt. So suggesting that I'll 'support' the change after XYZ is silly. I have no vote, I was trying to prod deeper discussion before just jumping to a vote. We have a fair bit more discussion now. I still think an RFC is the right way to go, because when only "interested" editors chime in, it's not uncommon for the vote to be little more than a popularity contest among partisans. But I digress. I have no vote to tally. cheers. anastrophe, an editor he is. 18:36, 2 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I wrote Once wider (more than four editors!) discussion has taken place predicated on an RFC, in order to bring in uninvolved/disinterested editors. cheers. anastrophe, an editor he is. 18:01, 27 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Paragon Deku (talk) 00:09, 30 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
No, this is disputed land claim, where a court found in favor of one party rather than another. These decisions happen every day in civil court. People sue each other for land claims and violations of contract all the time, and a court decides which one has the superior legal claim. That's all that happened here. Losing a property dispute does not make one a criminal.
Theft, however, is a crime. Who did they arrest for the theft? Where were criminal proceedings instituted? Who is the lead prosecutor?
This is just litigation over land title. It is property law, not criminal law. The Sioux won a lawsuit, that's all.
This is proposing entirely moralizing language, not legal language. There is no crime of theft involved or suggested.
What is being proposed here is an entirely emotional POV term. You can do so at the personal level if you'd like, but it has no place here. I can understand the emotion. In my indignation, I might call my neighbor a "thief" if I think his fence goes over my property line. But a court does not, and neither do the police. This is a land dispute, not theft. It is up to me to sue him in civil court and prove my legal claim, not a crime to be investigated by the police and prosecuted by the Attorney General. A court might decide the lawsuit in my favor and order him to move his fence, but he will not be arrested and charged with the crime of theft.
This proposal to replace an accurate NPOV descriptive term with misleading POV language smacks of WP:RIGHTGREATWRONGS, which has no place here. Walrasiad (talk) 05:48, 30 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
WP:RGW is being misused in this discussion. RGW is about adding unsourced information. Sources describing these events in the 1870s as "theft" have been provided, and are in fact quite common – and what the government did was not nearly so passive as building a fence. Surely you are aware this isn't an apt analogy?
You make an interesting point about civil vs criminal language, but in the end what matters is what the sources say.Larataguera (talk) 11:23, 30 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
What source? I have been looking and can't really find any. Googlebooks brings up a grand total of 3 hits for phrase "Theft of Black Hills", only two of which are relevant but hardly unbiased. By contrast, there are 105 hits for "Black Hills land dispute", 846 for "Black Hills land claim", 2690 for "Black Hills claim. Walrasiad (talk) 16:07, 30 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
We're talking about over 1,000 hits on Google Books for "Theft of the Black Hills". Also over 500 for "Stole the Black Hills". These are not hard to find, so suggesting only 3 sources exist seems odd to me.
The number of hits for "Black hills land dispute" isn't totally relevant, because no one is saying that there isn't a dispute. People are saying that "claim" or "dispute" is not the word for what happened in the 1870s. Literally no one says that the government "disputed" the Black Hills in 1876! Larataguera (talk) 18:20, 2 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Ah. I guess "the" was missing. Still, "Black Hills claim" is "2820, nearly three times more. Anyway, not sure why you're obsessing about the federal government. The federal government is not the subject of the phrase, the Sioux nation is. It is the Sioux who disputed it. "Black Hills claim" refers to the legal claim by the Sioux nation on land previously assumed to belong to the federal government. It's not the federal government doing the claiming. The Sioux were the plaintiffs, not the defendants. The Sioux filed the lawsuit in the Court of Claims, the Sioux made the legal claim, and the court found for the plaintiffs. Most of this article is about what the Sioux did, how they got their land claim through, not about what the federal government did. Which is another reason why this title is awful and ambiguous. There's no subject in the sentence, and can be read as if the Sioux "stole" the Black Hills via the courts! Or, at even the most generous, make it seems as if this article is about the federal government, rather than the legal achievements of the Sioux. It has a rather patronizing tone, as if it is only what the federal government does that matters, that the Sioux are just some passive bit players in some moral drama about the sins of the US federal government. Walrasiad (talk) 02:45, 3 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Compromise split?

It seems to me that this article is analogous to the murder of George Floyd. (Is murder editorializing?) Both describe an exceptional use of government force where the government's own courts later ruled the actions illegal, and in each case, the response is probably notable enough to warrant its own article. How would people feel about splitting this article into two? We could have both the theft of the Black Hills and the Black Hills land dispute, just like we have both the murder of George Floyd and the George Floyd protests.  — Freoh 21:10, 29 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I think this is a suitable split and the GF analogy is a great argument of previous article title involving crimes by the govt or policing bodies that were proven illegal activities.  oncamera  (talk page) 02:44, 30 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, "murder" is editorializing if there is no criminal charge of murder. Wikipedia article titles use the term "Killing" for homicides which have not been charged or convicted for murder. Even if you feel it's murder. The article was under "Killing of George Floyd" for a long time, until the conviction for murder, whereupon it was changed.
I don't see any point to splitting or what you're asking to be split. This should be in the same article. There was a land dispute, a lawsuit was filed, legal title was decided in court, and now there remains implementation. It is all the same topic. Walrasiad (talk) 05:56, 30 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Your statement, There was a land dispute, a lawsuit was filed, legal title was decided in court... is not quite accurate. It is more accurate to say "There was a theft, a lawsuit was filed, damages were awarded 110 years later..." The implementation is contested, leading to the present land dispute. Continuing to call the theft a "land dispute" is indeed similar to continuing to call Floyd's murder a "killing". Larataguera (talk) 11:07, 30 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]


The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

California gold rush

In the "Origin of the land claim" section, the article states "In 1849 the Californian Gold Rush attracted prospectors to the Black Hills, who were often killed by the Lakota as result of encroaching on the sacred grounds." I can't view the cited page of the source, but this seems dubious. The California Gold Rush attracted prospectors to California; prospectors may have traveled through Lakota lands en route to California, but they would have little reason to enter the Black Hills themselves (being more difficult terrain for travel, and a significant detour from major routes to California). Plantdrew (talk) 22:14, 1 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The source is misrepresented in the article; your speculation is correct. The source states Yet the California gold rush, along with Oregon fever, attracted so many whites to the Oregon trail that the Indians through whose land they passed felt compelled to react. Unrest spread [...]. I'll fix the text. cheers. anastrophe, an editor he is. 22:40, 1 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Requested move 6 July 2023

Black Hills land claim → Taking of the Black Hills (Alternative: → Seizure of the Black Hills[a]) – This is the most common phrase on Google Ngrams among options discussed in the recent move request (result: no consensus), where Theft of the Black Hills was proposed based on WP:COMMONNAME (while overlooking more common phrases). In addition to "taking" being more common here than "theft," it is a legally accepted and neutral term (WP:NPOV) in this context. In United States v. Sioux Nation of Indians (1980), the U.S. Supreme Court held that Congress[b] "effected a taking of tribal property" and that it "had taken the Black Hills without just compensation, in violation of the Fifth Amendment" (i.e., the Takings Clause). The Supreme Court did not use the terms "theft" or "stolen" and did not hold that the lands must be returned, but rather that the U.S. Government must pay just compensation (as normally required for eminent domain).[c] I objected to the title Theft of the Black Hills because it (1) is less common, (2) is a non-neutral term as applied to an unlawful government taking (as distinct from criminal theft), and (3) is not legally correct[d] terminology.

Notes

  1. ^ The phrase "seizure of the Black Hills" is also more common than "theft of the Black Hills", and I think "seizure" may have the best sound. However, it is less common than "taking of the Black Hills". See the Google Ngrams.
  2. ^ For background, the way in which Congress took the Black Hills is explained at Black Hills land claim#"Sell or Starve" and the Act of 1877.
  3. ^ United States v. Sioux Nation of Indians, 448 U.S. 371 (1980) ("the 1877 Act effected a taking of tribal property, property which had been set aside for the exclusive occupation of the Sioux by the Fort Laranme Treaty of 1868. That taking implied an obligation on the part of the Government to make just compensation to the Sioux Nation, and that obligation, including an award of interest, must now, at last, be paid.")
  4. ^ This is what I said about the legal meaning of "theft": That term has legal meaning: It's a criminal offense. When the government takes something (with or without valid legal claim) relevant terms include a "taking" (5th Amendment) or "seizure" (4th Amendment). There is not ordinarily any crime for a government taking, even if it is held to be unlawful. Indeed, what the Supreme Court held was that this was a "taking" of property without just compensation. (As such, the Court held that the United States must pay just compensation for the taking, not that the taking was void to effect a transfer of ownership — as would be the case for stolen property.) I also listed some examples of notable cases where SCOTUS has held government takings illegal.

((replyto|SilverLocust)) (talk) 03:57, 6 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Larataguera, Freoh, Oncamera, AlexiusHoratius, SnowFire, Necrothesp, Walrasiad, and Jorahm: Because you participated in the recent move request Black Hills land claimTheft of the Black Hills (result: no consensus), you may be interested in this new proposal for the page's title. ((replyto|SilverLocust)) (talk) 04:17, 6 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
That is not clear in the title. Title needs to stand alone. If that's what you mean, then you should call it "US federal seizure of the Black Hills". Although I don't know why you are emphasizing that, since most of this article is about the Sioux's land claim and their success in the courts. Walrasiad (talk) 20:02, 12 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
They wouldn't need a "land claim" if it wasn't seized in the first place.  oncamera  (talk page) 20:28, 12 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
That's the case for any land claim, yes. But that's just background information. The actual topic of this article is about the Sioux land claim and their success in the recent court case. The article should be titled to reflect its actual content. Walrasiad (talk) 23:09, 12 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]