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Text copied from elsewhere?[edit]

The style of much of this article is that of a nineteenth century military history. Much of the text appears to have been copied, although from what source is not clear. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A02:C7F:1432:DE00:D8B3:87F0:FFA0:7A30 (talk) 12:15, 10 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

it is clear. see the sources cited under "Attribution" in the References section of the article. -- PBS (talk) 11:20, 20 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Interlude[edit]

Back in December 2014 I added details copied from the EB1911 article into the section "Interlude". Today I have rewritten the section with text copied form the leads of the detailed articles Waterloo Campaign: Quatre Bras to Waterloo and Waterloo Campaign: Ligny through Wavre to Waterloo. I have done this because when created the original expansion the two detailed articles had not been written. Now that they exist I do not think think that there is need for so much detail in this article (summary style). -- PBS (talk) 13:36, 12 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This article is historically weak[edit]

This article has numerous errors and is worthless.

Its needs to be rewritten from scratch.

Who is responsible for this?

Just as an example, consider this paragraph, which is describing the situation prior to crossing the Sambre.

Napoleon moved the 128,000 strong Army of the North up to the Belgian frontier. The left wing (I and II Corps) was under the command of Marshal Ney, and the right wing (III and IV Corps) was under Marshal Grouchy. Napoleon was in direct command of the Reserve (Imperial Guard, VI Corps, and I, II, III, and IV Cavalry Corps). During the initial advance all three elements remained close enough to support each another.

Categorically false.

Ney had no command on prior to crossing the Sambre. Grouchy was in charge of the Reserve Cavalry Corps.

This is one of more examples than I can count.

Absolutely worthless article. stephen.beckett@comcast.net

07:21, 5 January 2019 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.125.108.228 (talk)

For "who is responsible for this" see the "View history" tab at the top of the article. Or, in a broader sense Wikimedia Foundation.
WP, like history, is made by the people who show up, and if you want, you can help. I suggest you do it one small piece at a time, perhaps focus on one section until you think it's ok. You can WP:BOLDLY edit the paragraph you quoted, take the time to read WP:Reliable sources and Help:Referencing for beginners and get into it. WP has a lot of strange policies and guidelines, but if you stick around, you will pick them up as you go along. I also suggest you register as a user, it makes communication with other editors easier in the long run (WP:REGISTER). Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Military history may be a good place to ask for input, this article may not have a lot of "watchers". Good luck! Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 07:57, 26 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
This article is a summary article if you wish to read the the details of 15 June 1815 then read Waterloo Campaign: Start of hostilities. While what you say is true, Ney did not take command of the left wing of the army until towards the end of the first day and Grouchy the right wing until the 17 June. As a summary it is not so inaccurate. Changing the wording to be more accurate can be tricky if it is to remain a summary without too much detail. However the text is open to anyone to edit ... -- PBS (talk) 12:18, 30 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@PBS - as a summary, it is utterly inaccurate - here is a strong recommendation for a summary: don't include demonstrably false statements. Ney and Grouchy are not necessary to mention in a summary, and if they are, one can easily be accurate with both Grouchy and Napoleon's command. There is no excuse for this, and it is not tricky at all. What is true, from reading the texts of Wikipedia's Waterloo Campaign coverage is that the authors do not have sufficient knowledge of the campaign. Where is the discussion of the events of June 10 and June 12? My guess - none of the authors even know what happened on those days. Pierre de Wit and I have covered this in detail - the sourcing exists, the authors need to find it. The discoveries of the last 5 years are no where to be found in these articles. The sourcing in all the articles is out of date and mostly obsolete. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.125.108.228 (talk) 06:02, 7 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@24.125.108.228 (talk · contribs · count) sorry I did not see this post because using just my user name without a link to my acount does not ping me. So here is a beleted reply. you wrote "Where is the discussion of the events of June 10 and June 12? My guess - none of the authors even know what happened on those days." as I said before (by with a link to the section) please see Waterloo campaign: start of hostilities#Start of operations (8–12 June). -- PBS (talk) 17:13, 1 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Requested move 18 July 2019[edit]

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: Moved. Despite some strong opposition, the fall-out from which resulted in one opposer being blocked, there is consensus with evidence that, according to our naming conventions, the "Campaign" should be decapitalised. The "subtitle" part of the titles are also to be decapped, so it will be Waterloo campaign: start of hostilities and Waterloo campaign: peace negotiations.  — Amakuru (talk) 19:11, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]



Waterloo campaign is not a proper name; that is, most sources don't cap campaign when referring to is as the Waterloo campaign. So per WP:NCCAPS and other policy and guideline sections, we should not be capping it. Dicklyon (talk) 22:52, 18 July 2019 (UTC) --Relisting.  — Amakuru (talk) 14:48, 2 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

This is a contested technical request (permalink). DannyS712 (talk) 21:27, 18 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Copying discussion from request:

@PBS: again. This discussion moved. Dicklyon (talk) 03:35, 19 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Survey[edit]

Note: User:MarcusBritish who opposed here has been indef blocked for his abusive comments related to this requested move at other discussions, so he will not be commenting further. Dicklyon (talk) 05:05, 11 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

With this discussion open for 10 days already, only one source has been pointed out that treats "Waterloo Campaign" as a proper name (that is, caps it in non-title contexts). I'm sure there are a few more, but a nonspecific distrust of n-gram statistics is hardly a reason to ignore all the sources that lowercase "campaign". Contrary to SnowFire's claim, most sources cited in the article favor lowercase -- you just have to look beyond the titles to see that; I have provided the links. So the "oppose" votes still competely fail to point out a reason to cap here. Conversely, there is a very good reason to fix it; WP:NCCAPS says right at the front: "Do not capitalize the second or subsequent words in an article title, unless the title is a proper name. For multiword page titles, one should leave the second and subsequent words in lowercase unless the title phrase is a proper name that would always occur capitalized, even mid sentence." Dicklyon (talk) 15:54, 28 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Note – Now 25 days in, and still only 2 books by 1 author have been shown to treat "Waterloo Campaign" as a proper name (that is, capitalized in sentences). Of course others could be found, but the evidence of widespread lowercase is reliable sources being overwhelming, I can't see why this is still open. Dicklyon (talk) 21:07, 12 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Support for move, to my experience the "campaign" here is a generic noun specify by "Waterloo", following style guide it appears to me it should be lower case. Xinbenlv(t) please notify me with ((ping)) 00:01, 1 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
"Waterloo campaign" implies it is not specific. On the other hand, "List of presidents" is non-specific, so I supported that title. --Comment by Selfie City (talk about my contributions) 13:46, 5 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Lowercase has no such implication, as fall of the Alamo illustrates. Sources routinely use Waterloo campaign (as the evidence and survey of sources amply confirms) in reference to this campaign. Why would we not do the same? Does our manual of style say to cap things that refer to a specific event? No, it does not. Dicklyon (talk) 18:53, 5 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
A specific event is a proper noun, and proper nouns are capitalized. Anyway, the article is not called "Fall of the Alamo" or "fall of the Alamo," but "Battle of the Alamo." --Comment by Selfie City (talk about my contributions) 22:04, 5 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think you'll find anything like "A specific event is a proper noun" in any English grammar. Dicklyon (talk) 23:54, 5 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Discussion[edit]

@SnowFire: Let us know if you found any of the cited sources supporting capitalizing Campaign. Dicklyon (talk) 04:02, 19 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
You're using a different standard for capitalization expectations than I am. Capitalizing the normal word "campaign" in running text when simply talking about some sort of campaign is very rare; you're basically asking for something like how you'd capitalize God or He in running text when referring to divinity, a standard that would lead to almost all capital letters being decap'd that does not align with actual usage in Wikipedia, in literature, in journalism, etc. I linked some examples of capitalized "Campaign" above from your sources before. We can agree to disagree on how relevant they are, but to me it seems that "Waterloo Campaign" the titled entity is capitalized. If you don't understand what I mean by "the event as a whole", that is the key distinction here, at least to me: there is the proper noun and there is vanilla bog standard usage. Bank of America is a bank, the word bank is part of a title in the first and just the normal English usage in the second case. (No argument that running references to "campaign" in general are fine, of course, even when referring to Foo Campaign.) SnowFire (talk) 17:32, 19 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not talking about the word campaign at all. I'm only looking at the phrases "Waterloo campaign" vs "Waterloo Campaign". Here are the stats links again: 1 2. Please review the sources for how these are used (in non-title / non-heading contexts) and see if you agree. I agree with you on "Bank of American" (as do stats [1]); it's not analogous to Waterloo campaign. Dicklyon (talk) 19:17, 19 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry, I admit my wording was not clear enough; I clarified it in this edit. Dicklyon (talk) 19:20, 19 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
You only searched from 1970. Cherry-picking date ranges is biased. Using wildcards to spread the results is manipulative. These stats are lies created from selective parameters. They wrote a shit-tom of books between 1815 and 1970, published hundreds of documents. Those European documents are far more valid than your results which limit to modern and primarily Americanised grammar. Charlatan. — Marcus(talk) 18:44, 25 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
We usually focus on recent decades when discussing usage in sources, but feel free to extend the date range if you think you can get the data to show something other than that most sources don't cap this. Dicklyon (talk) 23:22, 25 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Who is "we"? Show us where wiki policy states to only use recent usage in discussions on sources. In fact, show us any policy that sets limitations on any form of dicussion. Show us any wiki policy that requires us to be biased and ignore evidence over a cetain age. Until then, I'll consider this another lie and yet more contempt for the intelligence of editors that don't adhere to your personal ideals. Fact remains, the 0.0000005% differences expressed by N-grams are beyond trivial, no matter how hard you try to exaggerate them. And the fact that you haven't previously filtered your N-grams searches to only consider post-1970 sources, in multiple RMs, only now for Waterloo, is highly suspicious. Proof, in my opinion, that the usual standard search format is too close for comfort to convince even the lowest common denominator that your results are sincere: https://books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=Waterloo+Campaign&case_insensitive=on&year_start=1815&year_end=2008&corpus=15&smoothing=3&share=&direct_url=t4%3B%2CWaterloo%20Campaign%3B%2Cc0%3B%2Cs0%3B%3BWaterloo%20campaign%3B%2Cc0%3B%3BWaterloo%20Campaign%3B%2Cc0%3B%3BWATERLOO%20CAMPAIGN%3B%2Cc0#t4%3B%2CWaterloo%20Campaign%3B%2Cc0%3B%2Cs0%3B%3BWaterloo%20campaign%3B%2Cc0%3B%3BWaterloo%20Campaign%3B%2Cc0%3B%3BWATERLOO%20CAMPAIGN%3B%2Cc0 — Marcus(talk) 00:04, 26 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, there is more info in that late 19th century region, but if you look at it closely ([2], [3]), you see that it's mostly the uses in entries such as "2: Waterloo Campaign" and "3: Waterloo Campaign" and "Polity Waterloo Campaign", which appeared in the index to the section "General List of Works Published by Messrs. Longman, Green, & Co." that was appended to a whole bunch of their books in those years, in which they list some works in title case. So it's best to ignore that bump. After that, it doesn't much matter what year you look from. You are free to look at and analyze the data any way you want, and make a case for caps, but the case is just not there. Also note that 0.00000500% of trigrams in the 1880s is a whole lot less than a smaller fraction of trigrams in recent decades, due to the hugely larger numbers of recent books in the database. Dicklyon (talk) 05:09, 26 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@SnowFire - "The Campaigns of Napoleon" doesn't appear to be an on-point source". Are you serious? David G. Chandler was and remains one of the most prolific historians of Napoleonic warfare, he is one of the most recognised go-to sources for anyone studying Napoleon, nearly every other book on Napoleon written since 1966 mentions his work in the bibliography, there's just no getting away from him and how much ground he covered in that title. And just to note, he only used the term "Waterloo Campaign" three times in his work, twice capitalised: https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=hNYWXeVcbkMC&printsec=frontcover&dq=%22campaigns+of+napoleon%22+waterloo+campaign&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwiu4ZCxotHjAhVUQxUIHcS2CTkQ6AEIKjAA#v=onepage&q=%22campaigns%20of%20napoleon%22%20waterloo%20campaign&f=false — Marcus(talk) 00:17, 26 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I see 4, with 2 capped and 2 not (see lowercase on pages 172 and 1154). Hardly evidence of proper name status. Dicklyon (talk) 01:46, 26 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
1154 is merely an index entry, thus it is not placed in a sentence or used as a title, thus it lacks context to help disseminate usage. — Marcus(talk) 01:55, 26 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
You mean if an author was treating a term as a proper name he might nevertheless lowercase it in his index? Interesting theory. Dicklyon (talk) 02:01, 26 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@MarcusBritish:: I was going off of Dicklyon's link, which showed only a single instance of "Waterloo campaign" in an entire book, so I figured something screwy was going on and threw it out. (I haven't read that book.) Checking the link again, I see that this was actually a bogus search, as you noted - Dicklyon's search was for "during Waterloo campaign", but a vanilla search for "Waterloo Campaign" (link) does seem to indicate that the capitalized form is used twice and the lowercased one once, which could easily be an "event"/"proper noun" distinction (which is relevant and an argument in favor of capitalization to me). SnowFire (talk) 02:43, 26 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I said it was mixed; the point of the link was to take you to a page with lowercase, not to deny that it also had uppercase. But you didn't like that, so you dissed the source. Dicklyon (talk) 03:34, 26 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Oxford English Dictionary[edit]

It was suggested above that the OED might have something to say about this. So I got a library card and got onto it to check. They don't list "Waterloo campaign" among the compounds of Waterloo, sadly. They do discuss campaigns as one of the noun definition, like this:

3. Military. The continuance and operations of an army ‘in the field’ for a season or other definite portion of time, or while engaged in one continuous series of military operations constituting the whole, or a distinct part, of a war. (In German Feldzug.)

The name arose in the earlier conditions of warfare, according to which an army remained in quarters (in towns, garrisons, fortresses, or camps) during the winter, and on the approach of summer issued forth into the open country (nella campagna, dans la campagne) or ‘took the field’, until the close of the season again suspended active operations. Hence the name properly signifying the ‘being in the field’, was also applied, now to the season or time during which the army kept the field, and now to the series of operations performed during this time. In the changed conditions of modern warfare, the season of the year is of much less importance, and a campaign has now no direct reference to time or season, but to an expedition or continuous series of operations bearing upon a distinct object, the accomplishment or abandonment of which marks its end, whether in the course of a week or two, or after one or more years. The history of the sense is seen in early Dictionaries; e.g.

1656 T. Blount Glossographia (at cited word) A word much used among Souldiers, by whom the next Campaine is usually taken for the next Summers Expedition of an Army, or its taking the field.

1721 N. Bailey Universal Etymol. Eng. Dict. Campain, [in Military Affairs] the space of time every Year, an Army continues in the Field, during a War.

1730 N. Bailey et al. Dictionarium Britannicum Campain,..a summer's war.

1755 Johnson Dict. Eng. Lang. Campaign, the time for which any army keeps the field, without entering into quarters.

1667 S. Pepys Diary 28 June (1974) VIII. 300 Several commanders that had not money to set them out to the present Campagne.

1693 tr. J. Le Clerc Mem. Count Teckely i. 37 And prepared themselves to open the Campagn in good time.

1702 Clarendon's Hist. Rebellion I. i. 49 After he had made two or three Campaigns..he came in the leisure of the Winter to visit his Friends in England.

1708 Swift Predict. for 1708 8 It will be a Glorious Campaign for the Allies.

1790 R. Beatson Naval & Mil. Mem. II. 218 The want of success in the last campaign.

1850 R. W. Emerson Napoleon in Representative Men vi. 239 In the Russian campaign,..he said, ‘I have two hundred millions in my coffers, and I would give them all for Ney’.

Note that through the 1708 example it was capped (in various spellings), as most important nouns in English were at the time (like Winter and Friends), and that in the 1790 and 1850 examples, including Napoleon's "Russian campaign" it is lowercase, like today. Dicklyon (talk) 20:07, 5 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]


The above discussion is preserved as an archive of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page or in a move review. No further edits should be made to this section.

Case fixing done[edit]

I've edited all the above moved articles, aiming for case consistency with MOS:CAPS; but I didn't do much more than "campaign" and "order of battle" and a few other things I noticed here and there, and some link fixing. More eyes on this would be awesome. Dicklyon (talk) 01:20, 14 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]