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Welcome to Wikipedia. I noticed that your username (SUCrusader1858) may not meet Wikipedia's username policy because Indicates a close connection with Susquehanna University (based on "SU," the "Crusader" nickname, and the year of the institution's founding). If you believe that your username does not violate our policy, please leave a note here explaining why. As an alternative, you may ask for a change of username, or you may simply create a new account for editing. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by GrapedApe (talk • contribs)
Check out Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section for an idea of what a good lead looks like. Try to include something from each section in the article. Think of it this way: If someone read just the lead, would it be a good summary of the entire article?--GrapedApe (talk) 22:46, 19 July 2012 (UTC)