Request for comment[edit]

The following discussion is an archived record of a request for comment. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
A summary of the debate may be found at the bottom of the discussion.

No consensus to add this information to the article at this time. - jc37 03:48, 22 November 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Should the article contain material about the property dispute and murder following the landslide?— Gorthian (talk) Reopening: 01:57, 31 October 2016 (UTC); originally opened 23:53, 28 September 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]

The discussion just above is pertinent, and the disputed edit is here. — Gorthian (talk) 23:59, 28 September 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Opinions[edit]

A similar question was asked on the Project Automobiles talk page. The discussion, now closed, is here [[1]] and heavily favored excluding content such as this. Springee (talk) 13:04, 10 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
*User:Springee has found this discussion by watching my edit history, in order to harass me, i.e. Wikihounding. See the Harassment policy. --Dennis Bratland (talk) 03:18, 4 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
No actually. There is a notice on CuriousMind01's talk page where I've been engaged in discussions. I would suggest you read WP:AGF. Springee (talk) 10:12, 4 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
That there is a link (a connection) is not in issue, nor is it the issue. The issue is not relatedness, but relevancy. As there seems some confusion on this I've added the #On related versus relevant section (below) to clarify the matter. ~ J. Johnson (JJ) (talk) 21:12, 12 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Threaded discussion[edit]

I am curious about VQuakr's statement that: "The contentious and bitter nature of the compulsory purchases following the slide are a key characteristic of the aftermath." Are there any sources that discuss these 'contentious and bitter, compulsory' purchases? Could more of this information be included in the article? JerryRussell (talk) 01:11, 29 September 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]

It got a passing mention in a few sources I found when trying to improve the paragraph on the murders. I don't recall seeing any sources that had an adequate intersection of reliability and weight, though. VQuakr (talk) 01:15, 29 September 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
It seems that the buyout program was voluntary rather than compulsory, but there was a building moratorium, and habitation was prohibited in some areas. Here are some stories:
http://www.wsj.com/articles/a-year-after-deadly-landslide-fight-over-building-curbs-goes-on-1426871627
http://www.kiro7.com/news/oso-gets-76-million-federal-funds-mudslide-recover/43294007 JerryRussell (talk) 02:30, 29 September 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
The source that said "Reed had been forced to sell to the county" is the Daily Mail. The Reliable Sources Noticeboard hasn't reached a strong consensus on whether this tabloid can be cited, but it is a controversial source, which I consider skunked: even when its correct, you invite suspicion just by citing it, and that's an unncessary distraction. It looks like the Daily Mail story is a close paraphrase of the Seattle Times anyway, so what's the need? --Dennis Bratland (talk) 17:20, 29 September 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Makes sense, particularly if the Daily Fail says something different than the other sources. VQuakr (talk) 19:48, 29 September 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
I'd say that any BLP issues are handled pretty well. The article doesn't name the suspected murderer, and it says that he's been arrested on suspicion of the murder, but avoids any judgment about his guilt or innocence. For whatever it's worth, I believe Reed has pleaded innocent of the charges. Perhaps that ought to be mentioned as well, per NPOV. JerryRussell (talk) 20:36, 1 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Right. All of these various essays that get cited so often because they have become accepted distillations of long-standing community consensus and norms should be ignored because WMF has not officially enshrined them as policies. But allow me to point out that WP:SECTION, which you [Bratland] cite in the following section, is also an essay. So why are the essays you cite more compelling than the essays everyone else cites? ~ J. Johnson (JJ) (talk) 21:14, 1 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Did I cite it? I didn't say: do it because WP:CSECTION says so. I said my reasons were found there in fuller detail.

There are varying degrees of acceptance, and that determines the precedence. There's nothing wrong with citing an essay. But it carries less weight than a guideline, which in turn carries less weight than a policy. Violating a policy is a more urgent matter than ignoring the advice of an essay. WP:CANTFIX lists the policies showing the only cases where content must be removed. WP:editing policy trumps any essay or advice page. We have not named an accused, low profile person, respecting the WP:BLPCRIME policy.

When multiple policies apply, or multiple interpretations are possible, the example set by multiple FAs is a good guide as to how the broader community interprets policy. It's a mistake to assume that because an essay exists, it must have broad support. Essays that contradict policy are rarely deleted because it's easier to simply ignore them.--Dennis Bratland (talk) 22:07, 1 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]

So in the section below you did not actually cite the essay WP:CSECTION, you just waved your hand at some vague and unspecified reasons "found there in fuller detail." Frankly, I am generally more impressed with arguments that people can make out of their own thinking rather than just pointing at something they think says they are right. But given your rejection of essays it seems inconsistent that you claim support from something (unspecified) in an essay. ~ J. Johnson (JJ) (talk) 21:45, 5 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Wow, what an erudite comment, and helpful assist to this discussion. Okay, maybe we don't really care about you believe, and now that you gotten that out of your system perhaps you would favor us with a considered comment. E.g., are the two homicides connected so closely to the landslide as to be considered a direct consequence of the slide? If so, then why should the not be included in the list of victims? ~ J. Johnson (JJ) (talk) 23:13, 30 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
I think: there are two sets of deaths. The 43 deaths caused directly by the landslide, and the 2 deaths caused in the aftermath of the landslide, the 2 murders. I do not see a list of victims in the article, if you mean the count of 43 deaths in the lead and infobox I think that count is the count of 43 deaths caused by the landslide. The 2 murders I consider are a count of deaths in the aftermath of the landslide, the aftermath is a direct consequence of the landslide. The count of 2 deaths by murder are not to be added to the count of 43 deaths in the landslide.I apologize if I misinterpreted your original question, it seemed like a loaded question as written within the RFC section. CuriousMind01 (talk) 00:48, 31 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
JJ, I understand the point you're making, but your question is out of scope of the RFC, so I'm moving your question/comment (and replies) to the #Threaded discussion section. — Gorthian (talk) 23:34, 30 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
In response to this loaded question, I would ask whether the death count in Rosewood massacre should be increased form 8 to 9 to account for the shortened life of Haywood Carrier who died a year after the event. A similar question could be asked about the death Colonel Archibald Gracie in the article Sinking of the RMS Titanic, or the a number of shipwreck "survivors" who succumbed to illness after the rescue. What to "count" these deaths as is a pedantic question that depends on how one wishes to define words. The question of whether or not they can be mentioned at all is separate from that.

There are different sources whose job it is to count victims. Insurance companies have their own criteria for what counts, and that determines whether a policy will pay out in a given case. FEMA has their rules for the scope of their aid. News media make their own choices -- for example, choosing to count the perpetrator and victims differently in a murder/suicide incident. It is not the job of Wikipedia editors to make a judgement as to how to count victims of anything; we report what our sources tell us. These opinions can be attributed to whoever voices them. They have nothing to do with the scope of a Wikipedia article.

A re-read of Wikipedia:Article titles might help here. Long titles like 2014 Oso mudslide and its aftermath are only necessary when there is a chance the article might be confused with some other 2014 Oso mudslide article. When there are no other articles with similar names, it isn't necessary or desirable to append all sorts of adjectives on the end of a title to cover its entire scope. Since we have only one 2014 Oso mudslide article, it can contain everything about the mudslide, and everything connected to it. Long 18th century book titles like Modern Seduction, Or Innocence Betrayed: Consisting Of Several Histories Of The Principal Magdalens, Received Into That Charity Since Its Establishment. Very Proper To Be Read By All Young Persons; As They Exhibit A Faithful Picture Of Those Arts Most Fatal To Youth And Innocence; And Of Those Miseries That Are The Never-Ending Consequences Of A Departure From Virtue have their charm, but we don't do it that way. --Dennis Bratland (talk) 00:01, 31 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]

On related versus relevant[edit]

I think we need to review the distinction between related (as in linking from or connected in some way) and relevant, which is more about the degree of relation (i.e., how closely related). When I opened this discussion I explicitly questioned the relevancy of the questioned material, whereas VQuakr's first response was that it is "pretty directed related" (emphasis added). He subsequently added: 'Related means "standing in relation or connection."'. And that has been the principal point of controversy.

That those favoring retaining this material insist that the murders are related to the landslide seems quite beside the point, as I don't believe anyone denies a connection. But so what? There are a LOT of connections. Like the long-time state employee that lost his job (see next section); it is connected - derives directly as a consequence of the slide - should it not also be included? How about the person whose car went off the road taking the detour - that is "connected", why shouldn't that be included? If there is no qualification of the degree of relatedness (connection), then, by this supposed rule of "relatedness", those examples should be included. The grotesqueness of doing so shows that we should consider the degree of relatedness. Which comes down to a matter of scope. ~ J. Johnson (JJ) (talk) 21:04, 12 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Comparing a murder to a car running of the road is a rather transparent rhetorical ploy. Nobody said "no qualification" but everyone I know thinks murder is kind of a big deal.

Whether you say related or relevant, there's no policy-based argument against including events that happened as a result of the mud slide. Citing the WP:OFFTOPIC section of the essay Writing better articles is just another way of saying "I think it's better like this than like that". Port Chicago disaster is perhaps the most extreme example of an artilce considered to be Wikipedia's best content that ignores that essayist's definition of "better". It describes not only the explosion, but the mutiny that was motivated by the explosion -- which is much like this case: a disaster triggered a major crime -- and then goes into detail in the trial of the mutineers, then goes on to recount the consequences of all that decades later. But there are many other FAs that also ignore that definition of "better", just as that essayist's opinions about redundancy are overruled by the guideline summary style. Lots of other FAs -- in fact every FA I could find about a disaster or wreck or catastrophe -- did indeed include events like major crimes, deaths, social changes, and more that happened as a consequence of the event.

So sure, we can take a vote to decide "I like it like this" vs "I like it like that", but this isn't an issue of policy or guidelines.

Although, just saying, I would kind of feel like is an NPOV problem to filter events of the degree of importance of murders based on whether they're "tawdry" or "tabloid" -- well-sourced things that makes us feel shame, pity, embarrassment that they even happened -- vs other events that are cheerful or would make polite dinner conversation. That kind of limit pre-judges content not on their sourcing, or their magnitude, but on how they make us feel, and we screen out tawdry murders because they're too Fargo (film)-ish, and we prefer not to think about the dark side of human behavior when thinking about the tragedy and heroism of the Oso mudslide.

By all means, vote to exclude it if you don't like it, but don't say policy or guidelines demand it. --Dennis Bratland (talk) 21:45, 12 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Being a "big deal" does not increase the relatedness of the events. The guy with the car was taking the unpaved detour as a direct result of the slide closing the main road. The direct motive for the murder (apparently) "was retribution for the neighbors' reporting him for squatting at the property". Which followed the property's condemnation and purchase, which followed the slide. And I seem to recall there may have been bad feelings even prior to the slide.
You say "we prefer not to think about the dark side of human behavior...", but you seem to have missed that "tabloid" (as in journalism) emphasizes sensational crime stories, etc. It is catering to the vicarious thrill of "the dark side of human behavior". To some of us inclusion of indirectly related crimes sensationalizes the slide, and disrespects those who died as a direct consequence of the slide. ~ J. Johnson (JJ) (talk) 20:49, 13 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Yes tabloid journalism emphasizes it, but nobody has ever suggested we emphasize it. Merely be allowed to mention it, and do so in context, and in proportion. Just as any other Wikipedia article would do. Tabloid journalism pretty much covers all the same topics as Wikipedia, or respectable news media, research articles, and books. The difference is not what they cover, it's how. Tabloids cover sex salaciously, Wikipedia covers sex informatively, tabloids cover hoaxes and pseudoscience credulously, Wikipedia covers hoaxes and pseudoscience factually. The tabloids' choice of subject matter doesn't make it off limits to Wikipedia. --Dennis Bratland (talk) 22:12, 13 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
You seem to have missed the key idea, that to some of us mere inclusion (however factually presented) of such a distantly related crime is sensationalistic. But if you think these two deaths are the direct consequence of the slide, then would you also hold with increasing the casualty count by two? ~ J. Johnson (JJ) (talk) 22:43, 18 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]

If you were closing this discussion, what would you do?[edit]

Dennis, you wrote above: So sure, we can take a vote to decide "I like it like this" vs "I like it like that", but this isn't an issue of policy or guidelines. But the essay on voting says that we don't vote, we seek to establish a consensus. At this point, arguments have been presented passionately on both sides, mostly based on essays and other reflections on the contents of good encyclopedia articles, rather than any policy questions. The vote is running eight "no" to five "yes" at the moment. So if someone were to close this RfC right now (which would undoubtedly be too early), what would be the conclusion? Considering the unmitigated passion on both sides, I would be most comfortable arguing "No Consensus." And what happens if there's no consensus? WP:NOCON policy says: In discussions of proposals to add, modify or remove material in articles, a lack of consensus commonly results in retaining the version of the article as it was prior to the proposal or bold edit. However, for contentious matters related to living people, a lack of consensus often results in the removal of the contentious matter, regardless of whether the proposal was to add, modify or remove it. So is this a contentious issue related to BLP? I would say no, the contention is almost entirely about the relevance, not the BLP aspect. So since the material had been in the article a long time before the bold edit that led to this RFC, the result would be that the material is kept.

Considering that I am arguing on the "yes" side, to keep the material, far be it from me to take it on myself to close the discussion. But I am curious if other editors have any thoughts on how this discussion ought to be closed. JerryRussell (talk) 17:27, 13 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]

They could close it "remove" but only as local consensus, but noting there is no policy basis for this exclusion, i.e. consensus can change, and very easily. Once the case goes to trial, or sentencing, there will be more coverage, and consensus then will might support keeping it. Or close as "keep" but with an inline maintenance tag, like ((Importance inline)) or ((Relevance inline)) calling for future reconsideration. Once the article is better developed, it might make more sense, or have better context. For example, a fully-developed article would mention a variety of events triggered by the mudslide, including state employees losing their jobs, changes in policies meant to discourage settlements in unsafe areas, and so on, as we expect to see in a fully developed article, e.g. Sinking of the RMS Titanic. In a fully-developed aftermath section, a couple sentences devoted to this event don't look so out of place or disproportionate. Not saying the name of someone not convicted (WP:BLPCRIME) is the main BLP issue here, and nobody disputes the decision to not say the accused's name. --Dennis Bratland (talk) 18:22, 13 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Seeing the votes pile in on the "No" side, I feel really uncomfortable arguing that this should be decided on a procedural technicality. It makes sense to concede to the majority, while recognizing that there's not any consensus. Or at least, no consensus fitting the ordinary English meaning of the word. Especially in this case, when no one has really identified specific policy issues pro or con.
I hope that Dennis turns out to be correct, that as this article develops, and as more of the sagas of the aftermath are told, this incident will seem to fit right into place. JerryRussell (talk) 00:20, 19 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
At the 30-day point, my count of the tally is nine yes (or qualified yes), twelve no. !vote too close to call? JerryRussell (talk) 21:56, 29 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
@JerryRussell: closing an RfC is more than counting !votes. If you'd like a formal-ish resolution, I suggest posting a request at WP:ANRFC. VQuakr (talk) 22:25, 29 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
For such a hotly contested issue as this, maybe we should insist on a panel of three closers to publish their deliberations, and then go to an appeals process. Personally, I would be OK if we toss a coin. JerryRussell (talk) 22:47, 29 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Three seems a smallish panel. To establish panel size, we first need to check - how many active admins are there? VQuakr (talk) 23:37, 29 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
I was recently involved with a similar RfC [[2]]. In that case, as here, it seemed the issue boiled down to editorial vs true policy issues. So in that case weight of numbers, especially the views of uninvolved editors, largely carried the day. It also mattered that the opinions were heavily in one direction. Here we seem to have about an even split and no obvious policy view in either direction. Thus I would argue that a consensus hasn't been reached thus the article reverts to what ever it was at the start of the discussion. In this case I believe the material has been part of the article for a while thus the default would be keep. Springee (talk) 02:57, 30 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Another example for consideration?[edit]

I read in today's Seattle Times that a longtime employee of the Washington Attorney General's Office has lost his job as a result of the Oso slide. If we are going to cover all of the "aftermath" events shouldn't this be included? ~ J. Johnson (JJ) (talk)

Here's the article: http://www.seattletimes.com/seattle-news/northwest/judge-state-must-pay-for-email-destruction-in-oso-case/
It says that victims of the landslide are suing Washington State and a timber company for damages "that could top $100 Million". A jury trial is expected to begin Monday. In a preliminary hearing, the judge in the case held that the state had willfully deleted relevant emails. The state attorney general said he respected the judge's decision, and pledged to prevent any similar incidents from happening again. This is why the employee was fired.JerryRussell (talk) 16:45, 10 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]
That story ran on Oct. 4. The latest news is that Washington State settled the case for $50 Million. The plaintiffs are continuing to pursue the case against the timber company. http://www.seattletimes.com/seattle-news/50m-settlement-reached-in-oso-landslide-suit/
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Does not compute?[edit]

The intro says the the mudslide covered an area "of approximately 1 square mile".

The fourth paragraph says the "mudslide covered an area 1,500 ft (460 m) long, 4,400 ft (1,300 m)".

That's less than a quarter of a square mile. . Moriori (talk) 01:02, 1 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]

So check the sources to verify the numbers. If sources are inconsistent you may have find other sources to resolve the matter. It may be necessary to determine why the sources have different numbers. This could be due estimates by different sources (and here I refer to the primary sources, such as the USGS that have actually made some attempt to measure the area, not the newspapers that merely repeat the numbers), different concepts of just what is being measured, or an evolution of those numbers as the measurement are refined. Sounds like a nice mini-project. ~ J. Johnson (JJ) (talk) 21:36, 1 October 2016 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Tree genus in the memorial?[edit]

All the material I could find about the memorial avenue describes the trees as "cedar", which is where I linked the new section. This change specifically links to Cedrus, but the trees look like Cupressaceae to me. Cedrus isn't native to the PNW, either. Admittedly it's surprising that anyone would plant Western Red or Port Orford (=Lawson Cypress) so close together. Can anyone point to an authoritative source? David Brooks (talk) 16:33, 18 August 2017 (UTC) ETA: I should have put that more strongly. They are clearly not Cedrus. David Brooks (talk) 16:38, 18 Auguszt 2017 (UTC)Reply[reply]

The tree genus is irrelevant, so I removed the link. Cedar is a common English word and so shouldn't be linked in the first place. What is relevant to this topic is that it is written in a way to imply that the "impromptu memorials" in the first sentence includes the 43 identical cedar trees, planted in evenly spaced rows, each assigned an individual victim and given items to match that person. Which makes it astronomically unlikely that the tree memorial was "impromptu". It is almost certainly something very well planned and organized, and has been carefully maintained for at least two years. I found a half dozen news articles more or less the same as the Seattle Times article cited. They all use passive voice to describe the "43 trees planted" but none attribute that planting to anybody. Who planted the trees? Who organized the project? Anyone with time to work on this should try to find that out. --Dennis Bratland (talk) 19:13, 18 August 2017 (UTC)Reply[reply]
The (apparently) impromptu memorials are the objects and writing left on the barrier. But thanks for pointing out the ambiguity. I wrote to WSDOT about the trees because it piqued my curiosity, but of course if they send a private reply that would constitute OR. David Brooks (talk) 19:46, 18 August 2017 (UTC)Reply[reply]
I can't figure out how the construction of this memorial -- not the impromptu one, the organized cedar grove -- could not have been reported. There are multiple local news sites besides the Seattle media, and I don't see any mention. Could be I'm somehow not searching with the right terms. Any detail WSDOT provides is useful in tracking down verifiable sources, so it's helpful to email them. And if they give you information which is contained in a public record available on request, that is verifiable too and we can cite it, even if it's not published. --Dennis Bratland (talk) 20:54, 18 August 2017 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Just for the record, the trees are Atrovirens Western Red Cedar (Thuja plicata ‘Atrovirens’), which seems to be an ornamental cultivar. But I totally agree that the generic term is more appropriate for the article. David Brooks (talk) 17:16, 1 September 2017 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Requested move 22 December 2018[edit]

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.

The result of the move request was: no consensus to move the page to the proposed title at this time, per the discussion below. Possible changes to the article text to illustrate the differences between types of flows and slides are outside the scope of this close, and discussion or implementation of those points can continue as necessary. Dekimasuよ! 22:20, 29 December 2018 (UTC)Reply[reply]


2014 Oso mudslide2014 Oso landslide – The term "mudslide" is a misnomer for a mudflow. As has been discussed on the mudflow article, the term mudlisde is a misnomer for a mudflow, and that article was moved accordingly. We should not use such a term for this event if it generally not used by geologists. The text of this article even refers to it as landslide. TornadoLGS (talk) 21:39, 22 December 2018 (UTC) TornadoLGS (talk) 21:46, 22 December 2018 (UTC)Reply[reply]

I apologize on that. It would have been better to simply say that the term is a misnomer since laypeople have used it to describe landslides, but it is a misnomer nonetheless. I admit that I missed the archived talk pages for his article, but I did read the discussions on the mudflow article. I figured that the argument by Bejnar didn't hold much weight in this case since landslide is already a very common term. I guess I will have to be content that the lead of this article refers to the event as a landslide. TornadoLGS (talk) 03:13, 23 December 2018 (UTC)Reply[reply]
For what's worth: it did start as a landslide. But when it hit the river it fluidized, and the rest of the story, and all the salient characteristics, is all about mud. And while there is no doubt that "flow" is the technically more accurate term, that is not how it is commonly known. Any thing else I might say on this would be pretty much just recapping what Dennis has already said, so I'll just suggest re-reading his comments (above). ♦ J. Johnson (JJ) (talk) 20:21, 23 December 2018 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Well, since it appears that this move is not going to happen, shall I remove the template? TornadoLGS (talk) 08:10, 25 December 2018 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Like it says on the notice: "may be closed 7 days after being opened, if consensus has been reached". If you agree to not doing the move, and no one else chimes in otherwise, then presumably there is consensus to not do the move, and after the 29th the discussion can be closed (see the instructions). ♦ J. Johnson (JJ) (talk) 02:40, 26 December 2018 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Ah, sorry. I got a little mixed up since I was checking in on an AfD at the time as well. TornadoLGS (talk) 18:48, 26 December 2018 (UTC)Reply[reply]
As I said above, it did start as landslide. Perhaps we could keep the first part of the lead sentence ‒ "A major landslide occurred ..." ‒ then explain how upon hitting the river it morphed into a mudflow that ran across the valley. To merely say that it is "also known as ..." seems weak; better to explain why it has this dual character. ♦ J. Johnson (JJ) (talk) 20:50, 28 December 2018 (UTC)Reply[reply]
I like that idea, and, of course have both terms wikilinked to help demonstrate the distinction. TornadoLGS (talk) 23:26, 28 December 2018 (UTC)Reply[reply]

The above discussion is preserved as an archive of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page or in a move review. No further edits should be made to this section.