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Apple Daily have begun to use the headline "Yuen Long Terrorist Attack" for all articles associated with the incident.--Patma20 (talk) 09:54, 24 July 2019 (UTC)
There are now many English sources describing the events as terrorism. The Civil Human Rights Front is calling it terrorism in their open letter to 61 countries, not to mentioned individual lawmakers making such a reference. Max Chung, the organizer of the 727 Reclaim Yuen Long protest, is calling the upcoming protest as a condemnation of a "terror attack". There are numerous Chinese media calling it as a terrorist attack - and not by a misinterpretation. comment addeby --Patma20 (talk) 06:30, 24 July 2019 (UTC) Patma20[reply]
Thanks, MJL. Should the "terrorist" redirect be G7'd? (My concern is we contribute to citogenesis of applying that NPOV label.) But maybe it's a good redirect to keep? I'm not sure. – Levivich02:17, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
The attack has fulfilled all the descriptions of terror attack. So the term terror attack must be included in the description part. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pascotam (talk • contribs) 2019-07-23T09:41:29 (UTC)
@Pascotam:. Hi newbie. In case you don't know, wikipedia is based on secondary source , instead of wiki editor's original research. If there are many news report using terror attack, then it is safe to use that wording. However, it is not and just some opinion of some well known "KOL". Matthew hk (talk) 09:46, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
1. Sign your post. 2. Put you reply in order (i.e. the last unless reply to someone comment in specific). 3. It is not widely using "terror attack" by major media. So it is WP:UNDUE. Matthew hk (talk) 10:07, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Please put your comment in order, again. Your comment had moved to the (second) last to follow the timestamp of the discussion. Matthew hk (talk) 10:31, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Matthew. I have attached 2 Chinese sources which clearly stated the term „terror attack/terrorism“ have been used. And apart from the written sources, there are YouTube records of the Pro-democracy lawmakers which also used the term „terror attack“ extensively. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pascotam (talk • contribs) 10:40, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
(edit conflict) Also, based on the citations you provided (Special:Diff/907499776, Special:Diff/907499901), they are news reporting directly quoting primary source, and directly publishing opinion of a public figure respectively. But as other wiki editors stated (see above comment), "terror"wording is not used in Western media. Also, local Hong Kong also did not use the "terror attack/Terrorist Attack" wording. It is WP:DUE to say a number of public figures such as pan-democratic, 梁啟智, Simon Shen, 盧斯達 condemned it is a terror attack, but WP:UNDUE to change article title and infobox or the wording of the first sentence of the lede. Matthew hk (talk) 10:46, 23 July 2019 (UTC) (edited 10:48, 23 July 2019 (UTC))[reply]
Doug WellerThere are clearly mixed opinions regarding this and I see nothing authoritative either here or in the main article, just various people's opinions.~
We don't use headlines (which you refer to as "title of article" as sources. They are rarely used by the author of the article itself. And the sources I saw were only people, mainly politicians, offering their opinions. That definitely is not enough. Doug Wellertalk14:25, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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We don't (not often to) use primary source in wikipedia article as citation. Most of the time wiki editors are summarizing secondary source. The article you provided, did not stated that SCMP called it as terrorist attack, but an opinion of Kwong Chun-yu, which already have The Standard and INMEDIAHK Network (香港獨立媒體網), one Chinese and English, one have print edition and one online only , but both free newspaper as citation for the same press conference. Also, please don't use multiple accounts for illegitimate use. As i accused you as a sock of an editor that had received the 3RR warning it clearly not a legitimate use of posting new stuff using second account. Matthew hk (talk) 15:03, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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Support the main article covers the topic more in-depth than what we have here. It can be split again if the content there grows too large. feminist (talk) 05:46, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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A Commons file used on this page has been nominated for speedy deletion
The following Wikimedia Commons file used on this page has been nominated for speedy deletion:
No idea what NCC has do with this image. I don't want to oppose deletion, as I might be the Commons' admin forced to delete the image. I want that you :en guys save it for the article. --Túrelio (talk) 14:47, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
For re-load to local wiki (en-wiki this wiki), it seem a critical commentary , but i would say not normally for keeping journalistic photo, using fair use. Matthew hk (talk) 09:18, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
It's currently the lead-image of the article and it seems to be historically, if not forensically important, as it shows attackers and a victim. --Túrelio (talk) 14:47, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
There is literally a WP:CSD#F7 criteria for file in local wiki. It need a careful wording to have that file to speedy keep in local wiki. ltn.com.tw (自由時報) is a commercial source, however, itself was using a photo from a facebook page "香港突發事故報料區". So, the copyrights itself was questionable (should it belongs to facebook according to ToS?). I am not sure The Stand News have photo or not regarding the attack, but it seem screen capturing their video for any use is allowed, given the commentary is reflecting the fact instead of distorting it. Matthew hk (talk) 15:43, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
So far there has been no confirmed number of the attackers. Apple Daily mentioned it as many as 1000. But as few as 100 is definitely unbelievable. Pascotam (talk) 10:48, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
The attached source mentioned “over a hundred” and “several hundred” many times.
We may be quoting HA (edit: HA for injured , Police for attackers. 11:05, 23 July 2019 (UTC)) but also stating unconfirmed figures that were reported by newspaper. However, HK01 is marginal reliable according to CUHK survey on interviewing random HK citizen [2][3]. I think some reliable "print" newspaper such as HKEJ may have news reporting on the figure instead. Matthew hk (talk) 11:00, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Did you ever read your user talk page? You need to sign your post in talk page namespace , user talk namespace "wikipedia talk" namespace , but not in article namespace. Matthew hk (talk) 12:37, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Title “violence”
Al Jazeera used the term “masked mob”, BBC used “(armed) mob violence” and France 24 used “mob attack” to describe the incidence.
The term “violence” cannot show the seriousness of the incidence.
I suggest using the BBC term in the title. Namely “Yuen Long (armed) mob violence”. I strongly believe the word “mob” has to be included. Pascotam (talk) 12:06, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
If you like, please follow the proper WP:RM process to start a discussion thread. Yes, local newspaper The Standard use "mob attack",[4] as well as NYT. [5] (both links are obtained from the citation of the wiki article) Matthew hk (talk) 12:10, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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FYI, lede is to summarize the main paragraphs of the article. It is not suitable to put info and fact in lede but absent in the main paragraphs . Currently, the lede failed to summarize the article , as well as the claim of "terror attack" may worth to move to a separate section, which may be named as "Public Response". Matthew hk (talk) 12:51, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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Timeline
According NOW the tv channel, quoting victim, the incident already happened in Yuen Long outside the train station before 10:00pm, thus the location and time in the infobox may need to change. Also, more citation is needed. Matthew hk (talk) 14:36, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Pascotam and David Kwan have been blocked as socks