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Dianetics

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Result: delisted. The article has serious neutrality and verifiability problems. The consensus reached here was to delist the article. I also added ((POV)) tag to it. Ruslik (talk) 12:48, 22 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
To add the POV tag, you need to raise these issues on Talk:Dianetics. Otherwise, per the tag, there is no discussion, problems to fix, and finally, to remove the tag when they're resolved. AndroidCat (talk) 13:37, 22 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

This article has a good deal of problems and issues which do not conform to WP:WIAGA. Much of the article is written in in-universe style, making it difficult for a lay reader to understand whole chunks of the article. Parts of the article have poor formatting, using large blockquoting when selected quoting within paragraphs would be better, including a blockquoted portion of text in the WP:LEAD which looks awkward, as does the list at the top of the Procedure in practice subsection. The article has an overreliance on primary instead of secondary sources to back up multiple points throughout, which borders on WP:OR. Primary sources could be enough to satisfy WP:V in certain spots, but overweighting on primary sources is not something we should have in our WP:GAs. Article is not stable, having undergone some massive changes since its initial GA listing from 17 May 2006, which may explain some of the formatting problems, hyperlinks within article text itself instead of properly formatted citations, etc. Listing here for Good article reassessment - in order to solicit and gain input from a wider variety of editors as far as the article's current quality status rating. Thank you, Cirt (talk) 22:45, 20 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I think it would be much easier to read if some of the redundant wordiness was cut out. For example, first sentence: "Dianetics is a set of ideas and practices" -- those are practically redundant. The wordiness turns me off from spending my time reading it. In addition, I think this discussion would go better on the talk page, where people would see it much easier. ImpIn | (t - c) 01:26, 21 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Well, there is naturally of course a notice at the top of the article's talk page for this ongoing WP:GAR. Cirt (talk) 05:12, 21 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Burger King legal issues

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Result: Keep. A consensus has been reached that the article meets GA standarts. All minor isssues mentioned by reviewers have been addressed. Ruslik (talk) 13:24, 22 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, this article was recently elevated to GA status by LimetoLime. Another editor, JimDunning, who was helping me with the article felt that LimetoLime had failed to properly vet the article before its elevation to GA. I partially agree, however I believe the changes I made to the article during the discussion with Jim more than qualify the article for its current rating. We would like to have a neutral party take a look at the article and give their opinion and determine if its rating is appropriate.

GAN discussion is archived here.

--Jeremy ( Blah blah...) 20:27, 20 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Out-of-order citation numbers are usually caused by ref name. It's not a problem; the alternative would be to introduce duplicate citations, which is clunky. Majoreditor (talk) 06:18, 21 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I fixed the ones I could find. --Jeremy ( Blah blah...) 07:10, 21 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Comment I still have concerns that assertions in the article are unsupported by the cited sources and statements in the Lead are unsupported by material in the article body (see WP:LEAD). For example, in the Lead it says, "Depending upon its ownership and executive staff at the time, its responses to these challenges have varied from acceding to demands to refusal to concede its position regardless of the outcome." The source article used to support this statement (a statement which implies recklessness and fiduciary irresponsibility) includes a comment from Fast Food Nation author Eric Schlosser which says, "makes the behavior of Burger King ... seem completely unjustifiable." The Lead statement does not seem to be a fair characterization of the situation, especially since it is based on statements made by a source known to be biased against Burger King. It seems for a statement saying Burger King has been uncaring about the outcomes of business decisions, an objective source, such as a well-known business analyst, is needed (and the opinion needs to be presented as such, not fact). Also, the word "recalcitrant" is used to describe Burger King in the relevant section; again, this presents the company in a negative light when the sources do not support such a characterization (perhaps "reluctance" would be better?). See Wikipedia:NPOV#Attributing and substantiating biased statements for relevant guidelines.
Another statement in the Lead ("Several legal decisions have set contractual law precedents in regards to ... ethical business practices") lacks similar support in the body. The word "ethics" appears only one more time in the article, and it isn't applied to Burger King. Also in the Lead is the statement, "many of these decisions have helped define general business dealings that continue to shape the entire marketplace." The two cited sources (http://caselaw.lp.findlaw.com/scripts/getcase.pl?navby=CASE&court=US&vol=471&page=462 and http://www.invispress.com/law/civpro/burger.html), however, are merely summaries of a single case and provide no context or analysis about the subsequent effect of the court decision on the "marketplace". Additionally, in the relevant section in the article body there is no treatment of the decision on later business practices, thus nothing supporting that Lead statement.
Similarly, in the section on the Hungry Jack's case, it says, "The case introduced the American legal concept of good faith negotiations into the Australian legal system". Neither of the two sources provided support the assertion that this case "introduced" the concept to Australian law. The relevant source certainly supports that the case is evidence that its use may be growing or survives, but using the word "introduce" gives it more importance than the source seems to state.
I cleaned up that statement, it reads more accurate of the courts decision. Jeremy ( Blah blah...)
I am still concerned – despite solid, significant improvements as these and other issues have been raised – that not all statements in the article accurately reflect their source material and the Lead does not accurately reflect and summarize the body material. More work needs to be done to rectify these issues.
Jim Dunning | talk 03:48, 24 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Comment The lead is meant to be a general overview of the article and not specifically address in detail issues in the article, as per the issues you have had with the article, Jeremy has seemed to add the appropriate citations. This review isn't for an FA, it is for a GA and the article currently fulfills all of the current requirements for a GA article. I also think that you might be dealing with prose issues by talking about words like "introduce" (with the Hungry Jack's issue) which aren't sourcing issues, they are language issues, which again fall under the FA criteria, not the GA criteria.--Chef Tanner (talk) 03:15, 25 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I agree that the Lead does not go into detail, but it must accurately summarize the key points in the article. This applies to any class of article, B to FA. One of the examples I cited is not supported by anything that says Burger King has acted without regard to the consequences of its actions. For that statement to be made, someone has to either be reading the minds of the key decision makers or it has to be presented as a quote of from a reliable source's analysis of the case(s). I don't see either anywhere in the article (or buried in the source articles, for that matter). The other statements about cases setting legal precedents about ethical business practices and helping "define general business dealings that continue to shape the entire marketplace" are not supported by copy elsewhere in the article (whether summarizing a number of passages as a group or specific ones). No matter the class of the article, what's in the Lead must be reflected in the body and vice-versa.
As for "introduce", it's not a prose issue. The case did not introduce the concept of good faith to the Australian legal system. Moot, since the issue has been resolved.
Jim Dunning | talk 20:44, 26 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
RE: Burger King has acted without regard to the consequences of its actions.
I am speaking of the whole Coalition of Immokalee Workers morass outlined in the Labor section v. the actions of the company outlined in the Nutrition and Animal welfare sections; with the CIW incident the company behaved in a way that brought scorn, public protests and unfavorable press. It continued to do so until the mass of the situation caused everything to crash down upon them in April and May of this year.
You assertions are problematic to me as we have discussed the issue at length. As I have stated in our other conversations, it does not have to be spelled out in specific terms in the sources as it is implicit in the tone of the articles and the facts stated that are presented in those publications which I have cited, and in the behaviors of the company outlined in the body of the article itself. The sentence refers to the pattern of behaviors and outlined as a whole in the "Controversies" section. --Jeremy ( Blah blah...) 04:11, 27 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
It doesn't matter any way, I reworded it. --Jeremy ( Blah blah...) 07:16, 27 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Please read the lead, only those controversies with legal concerns or outcomes, such as binding agreements or violations of said agreements, are included. The Islam ice cream issue relates to Shariah, or Muslim canon law. --Jeremy ( Blah blah...) 17:39, 2 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I think it's completely pushing it, the animal rights section hardly touches on legal issues at all. The use of "issues" still sucks regardless, it's fluffy and vague. I would rather it be replaced with "disputes", which is much more descriptive. - Shudde talk 23:36, 2 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Popular culture studies

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Result: Delist. Unsourced material, original research, unencyclopedic bias and prose, and a weak lead. Although there are inline citations, these don't cover the opinionated material adequately. Geometry guy 20:55, 22 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I am reviewing all of the "Society and Culture" articles for GA Sweeps and am undecided on this article. The article has been tagged with "This article or section is missing citations or needs footnotes." since August 2007, and it uses Harvard referencing, which the criteria allows. However multiple parts are unsourced and some of the statements may be considered original research. I found parts of the article hard to follow, but I would like to see if it's just me that couldn't keep up with the content. Hopefully a community consensus can be determined to see if it should remain a GA. --Nehrams2020 (talk) 02:07, 30 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

This one isn't even close to GA standards. Majoreditor (talk) 00:10, 1 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

My apologies. I meant to say that certain key sections lack in-line citations, and have modified my original comments accordingly.
I started adding ((fact)) tags but threw in the towel because the article is, as Geometry guy states, more of an essay than an article. This article needs more than de-listing; it requires significant pruning. Too many assertions smack of personal opinion. Majoreditor (talk) 02:28, 9 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Gguy: yes indeed we are. As usual I was less clear than I should have been :-( I, too, thought Majoreditor was saying there weren't any inline cites, and intended my opening sentence to be read to say that, just because the citations don't use the <ref>...</ref> format, it doesn't mean there aren't any. Apologies EyeSerenetalk 18:01, 9 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
No worries both. In any case, it looks like this article needs to be delisted. Geometry guy 22:32, 9 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

RuneScape

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Result: Delist. The article has a great deal of in-universe and game-play material, as well as poor prose, and citation issues. There was some disagreement as to the extent to which these are GA issues, but there is consensus that the article doesn't currently meet the criteria. Renomination would be one way to get a fresh review. Geometry guy 21:23, 22 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

This article is very in-universe, and reads like a game guide. It also has sections that does not relate to the rest of the article, and would greatly benefit from a cleanup. Tarret talk 20:26, 4 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

That said, the article is in need of cleanup. Does anyone want to have a go at it? Cheers, Majoreditor (talk) 23:34, 4 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

If you could highlight specific aspects of the article which are due improvement, I'd try to fix them. There are others I'm sure who'd like to try. Someoneanother 14:52, 7 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Looks like most of the issues I spotted, such as capitalization and fact tags, have already been addressed. Majoreditor (talk) 02:16, 9 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The two remaining tags are the biggest issue; I'll see if I can copyedit the article this weekend. Majoreditor (talk) 12:51, 9 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The tags are still there. The article's prose still needs attention; I've copyedited several paragraphs but much more work remains. Unless someone tackles these issues shortly we should delist this article. Majoreditor (talk) 02:39, 13 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not saying that people should stop editing it. I'm merely pointing out its instability history. OhanaUnitedTalk page 06:26, 14 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Gregory R. Ball

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Result: No consensus. Like the nominator and Majoreditor, I'm not convinced that this article is neutral, but no clear failings of the GA criteria have been raised in the last month, so there is no reason to delist the article or continue this GAR. The article might benefit from a fresh GAR if someone is willing to initiate it. Geometry guy 22:26, 22 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

This article is a blatant political advertisement for Greg Ball. It does not give the controversies he has been involved in even-handed treatment and it meks it seem as if he has accomplished far more than he's actually done. The Courage Cup controversy is entirely white washed (read the sources for the real story). And the spitzer section is no better.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Datawants82 (talk • contribs) 23:46, 20 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Actually I got that idea from Calvin Coolidge after finding an additional source of biographical information during comments from an A-class review that the military section was too short. I thought it was an interesting and relevant quote, seeing as a lot of his post-military career deals with immigration. It never hurts to have another reviewer, but enough of the meatpuppets and vandals already. I have been commended at ANI for the extreme level of patience and willingness to work with these people that I've shone, even though they've leveled some very visceral, baseless and extreme anonymous criticism towards me. The Ball article reads very similar to the Barack Obama FA, and the criticism is worked into the article per the standards. Right now I am more concerned with their efforts to insert advertising and whitewash the article of his opponent in a WP:TEAM effort between the two articles, but I will continue to try and work with these editors, I know that eventually reasonable editors will step in and correct the issues. MrPrada (talk) 10:11, 21 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • I got that sentence from the Courage Cup's website (which is all messed up right now), but from google I'm starting to be convinced that the cover article was about the Work to Ride charity and not the Courage Cup it self (although there was a SI article about the Courage Cup as well). I will spend a day or two looking into this further and make sure the information presented is accurate.— Preceding unsigned comment added by MrPrada (talk • contribs) 01:00, 24 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • My guess is that on the cover the article may have been mentioned in text. I imagine the cover truly featured another story. However, if we can get the date of the cover that would be helpful. I can't find either Work to Ride or Courage Cup in the SI cover archive. Please see my other suggestions below.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 03:31, 24 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
 Done
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After re-reading the article I lean toward Delist. This is more of a haliography than an evenhanded assessment of a politician. There's barely a peep of criticism in the article, despite Ball's strong stands on iessues. While I'm not a fan of "Criticism " sections, I expect that there's been noteworthy criticism of him and his actions in office. Yet I see little to nothing of the sort in this article. Majoreditor (talk) 21:01, 22 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not sure I understand your rationale. We should delist based on the assumption that there may or may not be some criticism written about a politician thats been in office for a year and a half?. Remember, this article has been Project Peer Reviewed and Peer Reviewed. Where were these concerns then? I think you need to list some specific concerns before we consider delisting, as the article features less hagiography and more criticism then FAs such as Barack Obama. I've basically listed 230 articles from local papers as references. If you can find anything in addition to that that may contain some noteworthy criticism, you're welcome to add it to the piece, however for a thirty year old local politician whose been in office for 18 months, I doubt you'll find much more. In the meantime, I have never voted to list/delist based on an assumption. MrPrada (talk) 21:47, 22 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I'm surprised that you didn't notice published criticism like this article from the 2/10/2007 New York Times. To quote part of it:
But others were displeased. Keith L. T. Wright, a Harlem assemblyman and a Democrat, said that if Mr. Ball believed the Legislature to be so dysfunctional, he should step down. “He should probably get to know what he’s talking about before he opens his mouth,” Mr. Wright said. “He just seemed to paint a broad brush on a legislative body that he probably ran very hard and spent a lot of money to get into.”
  • I certainly believe that there is always room for improvement. However, I'll need you to cite some examples, as I really don't see this article as being criticism-free. Your point is not clear at all. The NYT quote you cited-interesting, however, you'll note that the "most dysfunctional legislature in the nation" comment echoes a report by New York University's Brennan Center for Justice report which spends 60+ pages describing the the legislature as dysfunctional. A google search for dysfunctional and legislature returns 100 out of the first 100 articles about the...you guessed it... New York Legislature. There is nothing that impressive about the Ball quote, other then that he said it on his first day, on the floor of the assembly. Governors Eliot Spitzer, and David Paterson, also call the legislature dysfunctional on a regular basis, as stated in their articles. The New York Times also calls the legislature dysfunctional. Ball's opponent in 2006, Ken Harper, called the legislature dysfunctional, as described in the article. The wikipedia articles on the State Legislature describe them as dysfunctional. What exactly is there to balance? Wright's quote is in the realm of WP:FRINGE. MrPrada (talk) 03:14, 23 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The point is clear: Mr. Ball, like most politicians, has come up for criticism. That's the nature of the job. I find it bizzare to have a criticism-free article on a polical figure who has garnered as much attention - both positive and negative - as Mr. Ball. In contrast, please see the FA-class articles on Barack Obama and Ronald Reagan, both of which weave criticism into the articles where appropriate (for example, on abortion and "trickle down" economics".)
That's not to say that the article should be 50% criticism. However, the article in its current form has veered to another extreme by incorporating no dissenting views, despite the fact that reliable sources such as the New York Times have published such material. Please, try a bit harder to strike a proper balance. Failure to properly balance an article results in a non-neutral point of view, which violates GA criterion #4. Cheers, Majoreditor (talk) 01:56, 23 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • The immigration and gun control sections are the areas where he has drawn actual dissent, and that is already described in some detail, weaved into the article as your examples with the Reagen and Obama FAs. It is rather telling that Jackyd, or one of the Wikiproject peer reviewers and Peer Reviewers who checked this over before it became a GA, could have mentioned this as at least a minor concern to be addressed, and they did not. There is always room for improvement, as this is not an FA yet, but to delist based on a bad faith nom, when no examples of what needs to be fixed have been presented seems to be WP:GAME to me. When actual examples are cited, they can be fixed during the GAR process, and then we can decide whether or not to delist. MrPrada (talk) 03:14, 23 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Funny, I spent a grand total of one minute on Google and found the New York Times article which clearly points out that Mr. Ball has come in for criticism from fellow legislators. I'd not be so quick to dismiss an assemblyman's comments - or the NYT's coverage - as "fringe". Why omit it from the article? I also differ with your assessment of whether the immigration and gun control sections contain critical points of view toward his positions; I see nothing at all in the gun control section and nothing in the immigration section other than a journalist disputing one of the statistics Ball quoted.
  • I think my point was that the commonly accepted view is that the legislature is dysfunctional, and the idea that it isn't is a fringe view. The NYT article does not go into detail on criticism from fellow legislators, outside of the context of the dysfunctional legislature quote on the floor of the assembly. MrPrada (talk) 14:03, 23 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
This article is well-composed and needs just a bit more work to ensure that it meets GA standards for NPOV. Majoreditor (talk) 03:45, 23 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I thought the Schimel seciton did a good job of presenting the opposing viewpoint. As for the immigration, outside of opinion pieces and letters to the editor, there are really three articles which go into detail on criticism of the immigration stances. However I think they misrepresent to some degree the nature of his position, which is a bit more nuanced (And I think is well reflected in the article's current format). Nonetheless I will get to adding the sources tomorrow. MrPrada (talk) 03:18, 25 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I would certainly expect that a biography article of a politician of sufficiently marginal notability that he only appears in the national press a few times would include all references in the national press. I would include both articles at http://www.google.com/search?aq=f&hl=en&q=%22Gregory+R.+Ball%22+site%3Anytimes.com&btnG=Search (as they are). I would also continue to watch Time, Newsweek, Washington Post, U.S. News, USAToday for any and all mentions of his name. If no negative press can be found, surely his political opponent had some arguments against his candidacy. Try to mention them.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 14:17, 23 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

History of the Jews in Russia

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Result: Delist The article has an insufficient number of citations and fails WP:VER, it also fails WP:LEAD (the lead is too short) and WP:Weasel. Ruslik (talk) 09:43, 23 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Sections:

  1. 5.2.2 Ukraine
  2. 5.2.3 Belarus
  3. 5.2.4 Tajikistan

seems to be ful of WP:OR andWP:Weasel (a antisemtic university with 50.000 students in a country of 45.000.000 people does not proof that a country is antisemtic). Mariah-Yulia (talk) 02:45, 23 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I notified WikiProject Judaism of this discussion; perhaps an editor can join the discussion. Cheers, Majoreditor (talk) 23:59, 23 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, the thing is that the article fails to meet it's scope (hardly any info about other post soviet states only a lot of info about Russia), a rename to History of the Jews in Russia might do a world of good. And the way the article got a Good article status looks fishy since it seems it was reviewed by only a view people... Mariah-Yulia (talk) 00:30, 24 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Mammoth Cave National Park

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Result: delist. The article needs more citations and a copy-edit. Ruslik (talk) 19:53, 24 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Notices left on the following talk pages: WP:CAVES, WP:WHS, WP:KY, WP:PAREAS, Alan Canon, Vsmith, MONGO

This is one of the better articles I have brought to WP:GAR. It is Jan 2006 GA promotion that needs to be brought up to current standards. As I prepare the current WP:CHIFTD, I spent part of the morning comparing articles in the following sections of the WP:GA page:

  1. Public parks and zoos,
  2. Recreational areas, sports venues and stadiums
  3. Nature reserves, conservation areas and countryside routes

This is the only article in those sections that fails section 2 of WP:WIAGA. There are no clear standards on what a properly cited article should be. My opinion is that a new WP:GAC should have at least one citation for every paragraph since each paragraph is suppose to present a new idea. For a current GA, I would I think an appropriate standard is that every section or subsection should have at least one citation and the majority of the paragraphs should have at least one citation. I did not actually count paragraph by paragraph, but I get the feel that it has more uncited paragraphs than cited ones. However, without counting I see several sections and subsections without citations. The article is a good article that hopefully will get a little attention and be refreshed to current standards through this process.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 15:09, 21 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Delist, it's been awhile, and there are still unsourced statements and weak prose. Nikki311 03:12, 14 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
That sentence is also an example of unencyclopedic prose. There is plenty of poor prose here, e.g. "An historical irony results in that although the name was applied before the cave system's true extent was fully known, modern discoveries have well established the appropriateness of the older name." Geometry guy 22:06, 13 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Max Mosley

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Result: Renominated at GAN. —Giggy 23:10, 24 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Max Mosley was delisted by user:Sceptre on 12 July. The reasons given were:

  1. the Nazi orgy section taking approximately half the page up is unacceptable - what is he more famous for? Formula One, or the orgy?
  2. I think it would be impossible to fix these objections in the timeframe alloted by GAR, so I'm skipping the process because it would, most likely, see reason to delist.

In response to 1, the section referred to takes up just under one sixth of the article (1093 words out of 6461 for the text) - which suggests a rather cursory reading by Sceptre. He didn't identify which of the GA criteria he felt was a problem, but the only one it can be is 3b - staying focussed on the subject. In response to his question about notability, rather unfairly Mosley is far better known at present for the orgy allegations than for his role at the FIA. Even so, the section is too long, a problem recognised on the article talk page.

In response to 2, it's actually a rather trivial task to cut down the length of the section. I have already drafted a much shorter version in my sandbox. It probably took me about half an hour, but I have not yet added refs. The problem could have been dealt with easily within the timescale of a GAR, and to be honest, it would have been even more sensible just to deal with it on the article talk page.

I am asking for views on three points:

Thanks in advance. 4u1e (talk) 09:46, 13 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The answer to point 3 is no. That isn't the point of this GAR though, and I hope those involved don't spend time focusing on that non-issue. Trout Sceptre and be done with. :-) I haven't looked over the article (yet - I will!) so I can't answer 1 and 2; I just think it important that we get 3 out of the way and drop it sooner rather than later. —Giggy 11:33, 13 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Re 3 - OK.I was thinking of the words "whether former good articles have been improperly delisted", from the intro above, which indicated to me that this was one of the things reviews were for. However, if I've misunderstood, I'm happy to leave it there.
Since we're here now, though, any and all comments about this article's suitability for GA status will be gratefully received. Cheers. 4u1e (talk) 12:08, 13 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
You are quite right about the intro, but discussions here should focus on the article and the criteria, rather than individual editors. I would however, make two general comments.
  1. Reviewers should always give article editors a chance to respond before delisting articles.
  2. Delisting decisions should be backed up by a review, just like GAN actions.
To this end, ((subst:GAR)) now has a facility to allow reviewers to create a review subpage just like the one used for good article nominations. I hope this will encourage good practice and have commented further at WT:GAN. Geometry guy 13:48, 13 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
One should not be able to tell from a Wikipedia article what are the views of contributing editors, but there seems to be a negative undercurrent here, which is a neutrality issue. There are also some sourcing issues: for example
"This training led some national English newspapers to link him to the French right wing Organisation de l'armée secrète (OAS), which was involved in the Algerian War at that time."
is sourced to grandprix.com, which provides no evidence for the assertion. In "The name March is a contrived acronym...", why "contrived"?
"Many insiders believed that Mosley's announced retirement was just part of a well crafted plan to strengthen his and Bernie Ecclestone's control over the sport,"
is neither sourced nor neutral. The word "believe" is also used to cast doubt on Mosley's views in a couple of places.
Concerning the sandbox replacement, it is certainly better, but is still more like the state of Prince Harry in 2005 than 2008. Two specific points: the illegality of pimping etc. is not really relevant; also since the question of whether the incident involved Nazi roleplaying is the subject of a court case, the article needs to be very careful not to give preference to the newspaper account over Mosley's.
I recommend that the article remains delisted. Checking the article against WP:BLP would be a good idea before renomination. Geometry guy 14:51, 13 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the comments, Geometry Guy. I would argue that this incident is far more important in relation to Mosley than the Harry incident was for him. Yes, the tabloid coverage is about the same, but Mosley came very close to losing his job over this, and may still do so. I will certainly review again for negative stuff - although I was, for example, surprised to find that almost all mentions of him in two histories of March Engineering, which both predate his position as FIA president, tend to be negative in the details. The positives tend only to concern his legal and diplomatic skills. The pimping stuff is an attempt (probably unsuccessful) to cover prostitution's slightly odd legal position in the UK: it's not illegal, but many activities around it are, and it is generally perceived as being illegal. I'll have another go. Cheers. 4u1e (talk) 15:00, 13 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with you that the Mosley incident may end up being more important than the Harry incident, but the question is, how important? Geometry guy 17:38, 13 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Well, quite a lot more important. In an F1 context, it's more similar to the hypothetical case of the current monarch being caught in highly inappropriate situation and being asked to abdicate by, say, several prominent cabinet members and a couple of the UK's leading companies. Without of course, quite the degree of tabloid hysteria that would entail. ;-) 4u1e (talk) 19:55, 13 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Update: As of 16 July, the "Nazi orgy" section that was the reason for the original delisting is now down to three paras (plus a one sentence para) from the previous nine (300 wds vs 1093). Although it may be possible to cut it down further in future, the current content seems to me likely to remain relevant.
I have also reviewed against WP:WTA and revised wording accordingly - lots of 'claims' have gone, and a few 'deny's and 'reported's as well!
I've done a general review of the text and cut some stuff that had negative sounding implications, but didn't really follow through on them. This includes the OAS story, Mosley's parents' wedding (with Hitler present!), and Alan Rees's departure from the team. I've also rearranged the lead, so that Mosley's parents and early life aren't the first thing presented, since they are less important than his career in motorsport.
Next up is a review of the sources to see if we've (unconsciously) filtered out more positive stories about MM. I think it unlikely but, hey, that's the point of checking!
Geometry Guy, you said above that there was a reluctance to expand on MM's positive contributions. It would be helpful (for me, anyway!) if you could specify which ones you feel don't give enough coverage. Thanks.
Finally, it occurs to me that the section on FIA presidency might be more neutrally structured if it were split by his presidential terms, rather than by (mainly controversial) topics as at present. This would follow the model taken by several articles on politicians that I've looked at. Views on this are welcome. 4u1e (talk) 06:49, 16 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

It looks a lot better, thank you. While the controversy section should be merged into other parts of the article (article structure), it does look a lot better than my delisted version. A question too: didn't Mosley admit on his part to participating in S&M during the orgy, or was that another NOTW allegation? Sceptre (talk) 09:45, 16 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
He admitted to being involved in S&M activities (though, I think it was 'such activities' or somesuch in response to a question about S&M) for 45 years. I don't think he has denied the orgy in any part, only the conclusion that it had nazi connotations. Narson (talk) 12:02, 16 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Sceptre, thanks for taking the time to comment. Yes, he did admit to everything other than the Nazi element. Question is, how much detail do we need to go into? The current wording is intended to make the situation implicitly clear. 4u1e (talk) 20:46, 16 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

That's me done for the next week or so, btw, so unless others want to have a stab at it, the article will have to stand or fall in its current shape. Thanks to all for the comments. Cheers. 4u1e (talk) 23:34, 16 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Are there any other issues/problems with the article? I think the specific problem that Spectre brought up was dealt with and a few other things have been fixed. What more needs to be done to see the article retain its GA status? Narson (talk) 20:25, 18 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

As a note, after reading the article today, I am in agreement with the above that this is once again a GA, and have relisted it. Resolute 20:58, 15 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Impalement arts

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Result: Delisted. There are still numerous unresolved issues. When you believe the article meets criteria, you can renominate at GAN. —Giggy 06:55, 26 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The article was recently listed by a reviewer who, at the time, had fewer than 200 edits. I believe the listing to have been a mistake. The article suffers from poor sourcing and too much of the content is in list format. Ice Cold Beer (talk) 05:51, 7 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Re: point 6A, I've added attribution text to the license template for that image. This includes a link to copyright holder's website, which provides a means to contact him should anyone need to verify he licensed the image. I will look at other points as and when I have time/inclination.Circusandmagicfan (talk) 10:29, 23 July 2008 (UTC)Circusandmagicfan[reply]
Thanks to Nemonoman for balancing things up a bit. My vote to delist was made in a moment of depression and frustration at the sort of criticism that was occuring. It's difficult to judge how to defend one's work in this situation because I feel these reviews ought to be objective processes. For that reason I had nothing to do with GA nomination and review (which was one of the few pleasant surprises I've had while working on Wiki). However, given the nature of criticism, it would have been remiss of me to let it go unchallenged. Nemonoman has now said much of what I was feeling. I will now shut up and go away and return to the article from time to time to make what improvements I can. I leave it up to others to express views on whether the article is best developed at GA status or some lower designation.Circusandmagicfan (talk) 21:20, 14 July 2008 (UTC)Circusandmagicfan[reply]
Although I concede there are aspects of the article which need improving, I have to take issue with any suggestion that the title is a neologism. The term "Impalement arts" might not be much used outside the business but, as stated in the article, there are sources dating back to at least 1871 which support its use as the technical or umbrella term for these types of act.Circusandmagicfan (talk) 20:19, 14 July 2008 (UTC)Circusandmagicfan[reply]
May I apologize for my rather terse and unhelpful assessment. I normally try to provide more thorough and helpful review contributions than this. I'm going to be away for a few days, and won't be able to make amends until the weekend. I appreciate the reassurance that the term is not a neologism, but this is not very clear from the article. The 1871 quote does not say what the feat is, as far as I can tell, and use of the word "impalement" is not the same thing as demonstrating that "impalement arts" and "impalement artist" are well-established umbrella terms. It is important that WP articles clearly demonstrate that they are reporting on a notable topic and are not original research (e.g. synthesis). I do not wish to doubt at all what you say, but could you find a way to make the article demonstrate this more clearly? That would help a lot. Thanks, Geometry guy 21:20, 14 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Right -- for further advice, see Illegitimi non carborundum--Nemonoman (talk) 14:06, 24 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I've often thought that should be on the front page. I think sourcing is going to be the biggest issue here, but if you'd like a prose copyedit from one of the illegitimi (in this case at least), and don't mind my often sporadic editing pattern, just shout ;) EyeSerenetalk 14:45, 24 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Massachusetts Institute of Technology

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Result: Keep. Since the article improved considerably and a consensus has formed that it should remain in the GA list I am closing this discussion as Keep. Ruslik (talk) 19:16, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

See Wikipedia talk:Good article nominations#Massachusetts Institute of Technology - rather surprising to see that this is a GA. The article is very long, has quite a few cleanup banners, and has rather mediocre prose - as well as meeting the quick fail criteria it fails some of the real ones. giggy (:O) 03:36, 7 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I've looked back through the article, and here are some more specific changes that need to be made, IMO: Nikki311 22:55, 14 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • In Challenges and controversies, every paragraph begins with "Article + date".
 Done Madcoverboy (talk) 17:05, 14 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Almost every paragraph in every other section begins with MIT.
 Done Madcoverboy (talk) 17:05, 14 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Small one or two sentence paragraphs need to be merged with surrounding paragraphs or expanded.
 Done Madcoverboy (talk) 17:05, 14 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "MIT's on-campus nuclear reactor is the second largest university-based nuclear reactor in the United States." - needs a citation
 Done Madcoverboy (talk) 17:05, 14 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • The following stats need sources: "MIT enrolls more graduate students (approximately 6,000 in total) than undergraduates (approximately 4,000). In 2006, women constituted 44 percent of all undergraduates and 30 percent of graduate students. The same year, MIT students represented all 50 states, the District of Columbia, three U.S. Territories, and 113 foreign countries."
 Done Madcoverboy (talk) 17:05, 14 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Quite a few of the references need to be properly formatted.
 Not done Madcoverboy (talk) 17:05, 14 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
 Doing... Madcoverboy (talk) 22:33, 16 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I added quite a few fact tags to the sections in question. Hopefully some editors can pitch in and help. Majoreditor (talk) 02:33, 8 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The remaining citations needed in the research accomplishments I don't believe need citations because I used easter-egg links showing the invention and linking to the scientist. I did this to keep it from becoming unwieldy, but each of these discoveries won the scientist a Nobel Prize. Madcoverboy (talk) 23:54, 9 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Looks as if you and other editors have made some progress, Madcoverboy. I've removed the synthesized research tag from the Alumni section. The other issues I mentioned still need addressing but it's not hard to imagine that some dedicated editors can set matters right. Majoreditor (talk) 03:11, 12 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I've gone through and thoroughly referenced everything in the Research accomplishments section as well as updating some data as well. Madcoverboy (talk) 13:12, 13 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
All of the ((fact)) tags and banners are now gone. Majoreditor (talk) 19:10, 4 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The article contains a fair amount of OR (e.g. by synthesis), the last sentence of the lead being one example. Other examples include "Given the scale and reputation of MIT's research accomplishments, allegations of research misconduct or improprieties have received substantial press coverage." and "As MIT's school of architecture was the first in the United States,[90] it has a history of commissioning progressive, if stylistically inconsistent, buildings.[91]".
The History section does not summarize the main article per WP:SUMMARY, which is a WP:LAYOUT issue. Again, I'm not blandly quoting policies here: this failure has resulted in a mess. Whereas the (much better) History of MIT has a broadly chronological basis, the history section here has "Initial years and vision", "Expansion" and "Challenges and controversies". The last of these in particular has become a magnet for all criticism, with the rest of the article remaining largely laudatory. Should a History subsection serve this dubious role?
There are other weaknesses also. The Organization section relies on external links in a "See also". The Campus section mixes discussion of the architecture with the architecture school (this can be done, but it needs to be done well). The "Academics" and "Faculty and research" sections are not clearly delineated: why are collaborations with government, industry, Harvard, etc., discussed under "Academics", while "UROP" is discussed under "Faculty"? Finally, is the "Housing" section about architecture or student culture?
I am somewhat sympathetic with Madcoverboy here, in that an article which should have had greater attention has not received it, and reviews (including this one) have largely focused on superficial issues. Even though I agree with the point of view of the article, I'm not convinced it is neutral; this is largely the result of structural weaknesses. Apart from one subsection, the MIT publicity department might well be quite happy with this article. Wikipedia should not be so satisfied. Geometry guy 22:28, 21 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
 Doing... I'm actually relieved to get this kind of feedback since I haven't been able to look at this article with new eyes since forever, so thank you for addressing some more substantive issues (not to demean previous criticism). I will try to address these concerns in the coming days. Madcoverboy (talk) 22:52, 21 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I've made some substantial edits to MIT in response to this feedback, especially with regards to the lead and history. Can editors give it a once over to see if it's heading in the right direction? Madcoverboy (talk) 17:46, 22 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
It looks like it to me: both the lead and history section are getting better. One general comment on this edit: the point is not that there is undue weight in the article as a whole, but that the criticism is marginalized and inappropriately placed in the history. Just cutting back the criticism in the history section is not enough; it should be integrated into the article, so that balance is maintained throughout. The gender imbalance should be covered under Student Demographics and Faculty, not history. Tenure issues should be discussed under Faculty, and research misconduct should be discussed under, well, Research, as should technology transfer overseas. Student deaths and health could be discussed with FSILGs and student activities.
Regarding the lead, here are some specific comments.
"MIT is one of two private land-grant universities and is also a sea grant and space grant university." Is this explained in the article?
"...the university adopted the German university model..." Is this explained in the article?
"MIT researchers lead the efforts to develop computers, radar, and inertial guidance in connection with defense research during World War II and the Cold War." The two parts of this sentence are developed separately in the article under research and history. This seems a bit detailed as a summary of the history, and a bit selective as a summary of the research.
"In the past 60 years, MIT's educational programs and reputation have expanded beyond the physical sciences and engineering into social sciences like economics, linguistics, political science, and management." Is this developed in the article? It seems to be largely implicit.
One suggestion (not a GA requirement): try to reduce the number of citations needed in the lead, by using those citations elsewhere in the article, so that the lead simply summarizes material elsewhere. Geometry guy 20:48, 22 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
(undent) I made some more substantive edits in an attempt to address the concerns regarding the imbalance/over-concentration of criticisms in the history as well as introducing more content to fill out themes from the lead. I'm hesitant to reduce or strip the references out of the lead only because they serve as anchor refs for subsequent refs as well as dealing with the inevitable verifiability fundamentalists demanding a footnote for every sentence should this article ever go up for FAC. Keep the much-appreciated criticism coming or lets wrap this thing up so I can get back to History of Northwestern University (end shameless self-promotion :). Madcoverboy (talk) 03:30, 26 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Good work. I've now cut the critical material from the history section: it doesn't need to be discussed twice. I've made quite a few other changes. Please check them to see if they make sense. One brief sentence about controversy/criticism in the lead would probably be a good idea for balance, but other than that, I'm ready to support keeping this article at long last. Geometry guy 19:22, 26 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Oh one more thing: the MIT logo in the infobox needs a fair use rationale. Geometry guy 19:25, 26 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Done. —Giggy 00:09, 27 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
No, not done: the problem image is Image:MIT_logo.svg, not the seal, which had a rationale already. Geometry guy 08:07, 27 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Okay now done, thanks! :-) I think I've justified the use of an SVG, and maybe examples like this will help to refine policy on the use of SVG logos. Geometry guy 17:20, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Madcoverboy (talk) 05:50, 26 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Homosexuality

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Result: Delist. The length has been improved considerably by a helpful spinout, but it is going to take some time to bring the article up to GA standards, with multiple issues remaining (e.g., WP:LEAD). In the meanwhile it can't be listed as a GA. Geometry guy 19:00, 2 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I'm nominating this page because there are several citation needed tags, as well as cleanup banners asking for more references and a worldwide view of the subject. These sorts of banners usually lead to Good Article nominations being quickfailed, so I don't think they are appropriate for a Good Article. Nikki311 19:08, 20 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Ay! I had no idea this article was here. I'm in the middle of an FAC, and a huge project. If I work a little bit at it are y'all going to keep the article to a deadline? --Moni3 (talk) 23:31, 23 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I can get to it today or tomorrow, Moni. Finally, a subject I know something about, if only as an amateur and not a professional :) - Dan Dank55 (talk)(mistakes) 15:56, 24 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Ah, what I need. A gay superhero. Thank you, Dank55! --Moni3 (talk) 18:16, 24 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I think an alien just landing from Mars would say, "Love and compassion, except when they have sex? Whaaaa?" But this position is both the official position and where many heads are at (or at least, where a lot of people say their heads are at...I can't quite make sense of it), and that's as good a way as any to report it in this article...if we try to make sense of it in one short section of this article, we'll get stuck in a quagmire.
I agree with the view on the talk page that homosexuality covers at least three aspects: same-sex attraction, same-sex relationships, and homosexual orientation, and that the last of these, like the first two, needs a separate article. Fixing this would change the article substantially and editors need the freedom to do this.
However, this is not the only substantial problem and so I will detail others below, which I sincerely hope will help in developing the article.
  • The current lead does not meet WP:LEAD at all. It discusses little more than etymology and usage, demographics, a touch of history, a couple of issues from society, and animals. Causality gets no mention, nor does art, literature, sex, religion, or even psychology. Instead the lead gets stuck on what homosexuality is and what it isn't. For instance, the last two sentences of the third paragraph ("In a narrow sense...") don't seem to be summarizing anything at all — a waste of precious lead space which no newspaper editor would tolerate :-) The lead is also quotation heavy.
  • An overview section should not be necessary in an article on a general topic like this. It seems to be trying to make up for the weak lead. Some of it (e.g. the first sentence) really belongs in the lead. The rest should be integrated into the rest of the article: a lot of it is history and psychology, which is not developed elsewhere.
  • The history section is very mixed. The whole labeling issue is irrelevant here and I suggest cutting it. The idea that homosexual behaviour did not exist before 1869 is as absurd as the idea that electrons did not exist before 1894. The argument over whether modern terms such as "gay" and "lesbian" make sense in a historical context can easily be avoided by not using them. Ironically, the rest of the section shows how prevalent homosexual behaviour has been throughout history. Indeed it may focus too much on prevalence at the expense of other historical aspects. There is also an underlying suggestion that homosexuality is a natural behaviour which was wiped out by Christian colonials; I am sympathetic to this viewpoint, but I still see it as a viewpoint. The sections on Africa, the Americas and the South pacific illustrate both these issues. There are also sourcing issues: several sections contain uncited opinion, not just the Middle East section, and even there, not just the tagged sentences. The Europe section develops a more rounded history, but still contains uncited opinion. (I realise that the Europe section is undoubtedly better due to the easy availability of source material.)
  • Beyond the history section, there are issues with global viewpoint. This is already present in the lead "trend towards acceptance" sentence. The religion section concentrates largely on U.S. issues connected with Christianity and Judaism, and the tag on the legal section is justified in my view.
  • There are several broadness issues. The demographics section only discusses prevalence, spending most of its energy on the difficulty in collecting demographics. There's a hint of gender differences, but nothing more. Possibilities include variations by region, ethnicity, social class and so on, although this section shouldn't be very long. I found no material on the teaching of homosexuality in schools, even though this is an issue that has generated controversy. Material on the psychology of homosexuality is also scattered and a bit patchy. The Prenatal subsection is extremely brief: it could at least mention the hormones involved (testosterone and estrogen, I believe, but this needs to be sourced) and the links with the lists in other subsections (finger-length ratios and so on).
  • More important, given the length of the article, are focus issues. Does Military Service really need a section unto itself? Some of it could be integrated into history, the rest into employment issues. We also get the Knights Templar story twice, on this occasion with unsourced presumption. The Causality section is rather long and the table in the Anthropology section suggests OR to me.
  • Some savings could be made by restructuring. I have two suggestions.
    1. The article really needs a "Biology and psychology" section in my view, incorporating the mental health, causality, malleability, pathology (this is the wrong word in a medical context!), and some bits of the history and overview. I don't think it is helpful to separate biological and non-biological causes, as many aspects of causality involve both, and the question of a genetic influence needs its own subsection. The causality material could be shortened (it is rather long with listy sections; also why does Peter Bearman deserve an explicit mention? - his views seem overrepresented in one subsection).
    2. A section on homosexual issues in the workplace might be a more efficient way to handle material about equal opportunities, workplace discrimination, modern military, and corporate attitudes.
  • The Law, politics and society section is too long with listy subsections. The restructuring above may help. The opening paragraphs editorialize twice, reflecting weaknesses in the lead. The law section is clearly listy and overlinked. The prejudice section is loaded and the term "scapegoat" is misused. The first example is the Knights Templar story; here homosexuality is not being used as a scapegoat, but as justification for an action with other motives. In the case of Nazi Germany, homosexuals were used as a scapegoat for the ills of society, but the article does not explain this; instead it concentrates on masculinity and racial issues. In the Politics section, all but the last two paragraphs are uncited, and the Parenting section presents no opposing views whatsoever: it deconstructs an issue without constructing it first.
  • The above and the examples below raise questions over neutrality and encyclopedic tone. A good rule of thumb is that in a neutral article one should not be able to guess the viewpoint of the editors. This article does not pass that test! The article on Freemasonry is one of my favourite examples of what not to do. Freemasonry is undoubtedly misrepresented and misunderstood. However, the solution is not to try to set the record straight, as "Freemasonry" does, but to present the reader with facts and information. The key phrases are "show, don't tell", and "let the reader decide". This approach is far more effective at communicating issues than telling readers what to think and criticizing prejudices.
  • There are prose issues related to this. The phrases "has stated that" and "put out a statement" are ugly and raise distrust: if the statements are out-of-date, provide a date. Per WP:WTA, "However" occurs 14 times, and "(al)though" occurs 11 times: some, but not all of these uses, need to be removed. Scare quotes should be avoided as far as possible. Also initials such as LGB and MSM are not defined, but, in my view, their use should be minimized; LGBT is a cultural construct, and is best used when discussing cultural issues, not, for example, medical ones.
  • Finally sexual practice. The article avoids this to a large extent, and that may be justified. The facts about numbers of sexual partners could be used to present a more neutral approach to stereotypes about promiscuity, i.e., rather than say "there's no basis for your views", say "your views are understandable because of X, but are an oversimplification because of Y". Regarding AIDs, I think the article has an obligation to mention that (receptive, unprotected) anal intercourse has a high transmission rate (which is hardly surprising). This not only gives a medical rather than a prejudiced (promiscuity/religious) explanation for the prevalence of AIDs amongst gay men, but also provides valuable health information.
Examples from the article


  • "In cultures under the sway of Abrahamic religions,..." and "Christian dogma" are unnecessarily critical phrases.
  • "Many modern style guides in the U.S. recommend against using homosexual as a noun, instead using gay man or lesbian... These style guides are not always followed by mainstream media sources." Tut tut! :-) Also answers an issue without raising it.
  • "The term homosocial is now used to describe single-sex contexts that are not specifically sexual." By whom? Sociologists I imagine - I've never heard it.
  • "metrosexual (referring to a non-gay man with stereotypically gay tastes in food, fashion, and design)" While the concept overlaps with gay stereotypes, a brief look at the sources in the metrosexual article (not the poor lead) confirms that this is not its primary origin or meaning. It could be argued that the article is breaking its own injunction by confusing issues of gender and sexuality here. In any case, this is somewhat off-topic.
  • "The lives of many historical figures, including Socrates, Alexander the Great, Lord Byron, Edward II, Hadrian, Julius Caesar, Michelangelo, Donatello, Leonardo DaVinci, and Christopher Marlowe included or were centered upon love and sexual relationships with people of their own sex. Terms such as gay or bisexual have been often applied to them; some, such as Michel Foucault, regard this as risking the anachronistic introduction of a contemporary construction of sexuality foreign to their times,[24] though others challenge this.[25]"
  • "Though often ignored or suppressed by European explorers and colonialists, homosexual expression in native Africa was also present and took a variety of forms."
  • "However, the instances of same-sex affection and sexual interactions described in the classical novel Dream of the Red Chamber seem as familiar to observers in the present as do equivalent stories of romances between heterosexuals during the same period." According to whom?
  • "But even as many of the male population were engaging in same-sex relationships,..." I counted 12 "even"'s in this article.
  • "The eclipse of this period of relative artistic and erotic freedom was precipitated by the rise to power of the moralizing monk Girolamo Savonarola." Nice prose and alliteration, but Wikipedia is not a term paper, nor the place to develop an argument.
  • "Ironically, politicians opposed to the scare tactics of McCarthyism tried to discredit Senator Joseph McCarthy by hinting during a televised Congressional committee meeting that McCarthy's top aide, Roy Cohn, was homosexual, as he in fact was."
  • "The bewildering death toll wrought by the AIDS epidemic at first seemed to slow the progress of the gay rights movement, but in time it galvanized some parts of the LGBT community into community service and political action, and challenged the heterosexual community to respond compassionately." Develops an argument.
  • "Yet as LGBT people slowly gained legal protection and social acceptance, gay bashing and hate crimes also increased due to heterosexism and homophobia (See Violence against gays, lesbians, bisexuals, and the transgendered)." Implies a connection, uses labels as causes, is unsourced and is the third link to the violence article.
  • "Homosexual acts are punishable by death in some present-day countries including Iran, Mauritania, Nigeria, Pakistan, Saudi Arabia, Sudan, United Arab Emirates, and Yemen.[70]" Including the death penalty under violence is POV (albeit one I agree with!); this is mentioned elsewhere anyway.
  • "Sometimes their own parents are not even informed." I'm scandalized at the idea that children might have secrets from their parents </irony>.
  • "...or even from former relationships." Why "even"?
  • "In some capitalist countries, large private sector firms often lead the way in the equal treatment of gay men and lesbians."
  • "Some religious groups have even promoted boycotts of corporations whose policies support the LGBT community."
  • "Since the Renaissance, both male and female homoeroticism has remained a common, if subtle and hidden, theme in the visual arts of the West."
  • "This discovery constitutes a major argument against those calling into question the biological legitimacy or naturalness of homosexuality, or those regarding it as a meditated social decision." Indeed, but...
Phew! This review took me nearly all day, and may take as long to read, but now I'm done. Geometry guy 17:00, 12 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
PS. Given the length, please reply below, and leave this review self-contained. Thanks, Geometry guy 18:17, 12 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
At present it has focused on Christianity and Judaism. I think it should expand to coverage other religions. --Seyyed(t-c) 16:00, 26 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Google

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Result: Delist. Issues raised by the reviewing editor have not been addressed, and the article does not meet the criteria. There is plenty to fix, and then the article can be renominated. Geometry guy 21:18, 2 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

As a part of Good articles Sweep I reviewed this article and put it on hold. However nothing has been done. Now I don't know what to do: to delist or not. Please, review the article and express your opinion. Ruslik (talk) 19:56, 25 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Los Angeles, California

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Result: delisted. The article has lots of maintenance tags in it, and many references lack author/publisher/year/date infromation. In addition, there has been no progress since this GAR began.

This article has not been reviewed in any manner for over 2.5 years. There are areas which need significant improvement and sourcing, especially paragraphs in the history section, nearly all of the culture section, demographics (family, age, and wage data all unsourced), government, and transportation. I'm not calling for the article to be delisted at this moment, but rather would like to bring rather obvious problems to the community's attention. However, if some of these flagrant errors are not addressed, I do not believe the article continues to adhere to the GA criteria. Best, epicAdam (talk) 16:47, 15 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comment. Just my opinion, but this article doesn't meet WP:CITE in several sections. Either [citation needed] is used or there is simply no or few citations.
As big as LA is, I assume there are many reliable sources out there. Calebrw (talk) 02:03, 16 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Hinduism

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Result: Delist. There's a lot of good work going into this article, with further expansion taking place, but GA issues remain, e.g. with the lead. This is a clear case where it is best to delist, allow improvements to stabilize, and then renominate at GAN. Geometry guy 20:20, 10 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

it does not meet the following good article attributes.

It is not well written: (a) the prose is not clear. For example it says": "Hinduism is often presented as the "oldest religious tradition" among the world's major religious groups, or as "oldest living major tradition" in the lead section. Therefore creates confusion about Why is it said as "often presented"? Who is presenting it as such? Or is it only a few people are presenting it as such and others do not agree? Is there a controversy around this? This is complicating a simple sentence which could have been simply written as "Hinduism is one of the oldest living religious tradition"


(b) it does not comply with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, jargon, words to avoid, fiction, and list incorporation For example it has two of the following sentences in the lead section : Early forms of Vedic religion are seen not as an alternative to Hinduism, but as its earliest form and there is little justification for the divisions found in much western scholarly writing between Vedism, Brahmanism, and Hinduism.[4],[5] Historical Vedic religion of Iron Age India, is at its roots. This is a clear attempt to imply a POV and to introduce an unnecessary contradiction. It is not factually accurate and verifiable: For example : Other major scriptures include the Tantras, the sectarian Agamas, the Purāṇas, and the epics Mahābhārata and Rāmāyaṇa. The Bhagavad Gītā, a treatise from the Mahābhārata, spoken by Krishna, is sometimes called a summary of the spiritual teachings of the Vedas.[14]

There is a implied POV that Tantras are more prominent than rest of the scriptures, which is incorrect. Bhagavad Gītā and Ramayana are the most prominent of other scriptures. In fact Tantras are not even considered holy and are vieved as notorious by most hindus because their purpose is for witchcraft and are used by a very small cults. It is given prominence over other major scriptures inorder to imply that Hinduism can be equated to witchcraft and fits into the Christian definition of Heathen religions. There are a lot of other similar inaccuracies which need to be corrected.

It is not broad in its coverage: (a) it does not addresses the main aspects of the topic properly because it appears to focus too much on Hindus and controversies surrounding Hindus rather than the theology of Hinduism (b) it does not stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail For example "Other countries with large Hindu populations include Bangladesh, Sri Lanka, Pakistan, Indonesia, Malaysia, Singapore, Mauritius, Fiji, Suriname, Guyana, Trinidad and Tobago, United Kingdom, Canada and the USA."

What does this have to do with the topic of Hinduism and how can this be justified in the lead section of Hinduism.

It is not neutral: it does not represent viewpoints fairly and without bias. For example it saysThe Grihastha Dharma recognize four goals known as the puruṣhārthas. They are:kāma: Sensual pleasure and enjoyment Artha: Material prosperity and success....

Please note that the tone and the way in which this is presented makes it look like the most important goal in Hinduism is "Sensual pleasure and enjoyment " followed by "Material prosperity and success" which is diagonally opposite of how Hindus interpret this important aspect of their religion. First of all the order and meaning of these goals are delibrately being misrepresented. In the Hindu sources the order and interpretation is as

  1. dharma - ethics,
  2. artha - securities,
  3. kama - pleasures,
  4. moksa - liberation.

One of the most respected Hindu saint Swami Dayanand Saraswati explains Purusartha’as following “Dharma occupies the first place in the four categories of human goals, because the pursuit of security, artha, and pleasures, kama, need to be governed by ethical standards. Artha, striving for security, comes second, because it is the foremost desire of everyone. Everyone is obedient under the doctor's scalpel precisely because everyone wants to live. Granted life, one then wants to be happy, to pursue pleasures, kama. I want to live and live happily; and both pursuits, the struggle for security and the search for pleasure, must be governed by ethics. The last category is the goal of liberation, moksa, ranked last because it becomes a direct pursuit only when one has realized the limitations inherent in the first three pursuits.[3].

Therefore this seems to be an implied POV with intent of bringing disrepute.

The article is not stable: it has changed a lot in recent times and lot of implied POV with malicious intent are added.

Please see the talk page of the article. Sindhian (talk) 10:36, 7 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Australian Ringneck

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Result: No consensus. After several arguments, it became unclear whether to fix or condemn, and very few editors bothered to take up a position. Thus a borderline article languishes on the edge of being good, and is presumed so for now. At least, however, the article has improved during the process. Editors are welcome to reopen a new GAR if they have a clear case. Geometry guy 21:51, 10 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Note previous GAR here
1a -you could move the text
2a - Agree
3a - Agree
6 Images not required at GA
Week keep subject to further comments jimfbleak (talk) 11:34, 19 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Failing with criteria 6 (not well illustrated) is seen in the context that there are four subspecies that at one time were considered to be separate species, and the article has a whole paragraph of text describing differences between the subspecies. There are a range of photos on commons and suitable ones could be used to provide better illustration. Snowman (talk) 16:38, 19 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • I have raised problems with this article that were not raised or considered in the previous GAR, and I regard the comments in the old GAR as largely irrelevant to this new GAR. Snowman (talk) 16:43, 19 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • If you agree that criteria 2a and 3a are not up to GA standard, then I do not understand your comment to keep this article as a good article. Snowman (talk) 16:49, 19 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • As far as I can tell, the original GAN when the article gained GA status lasted less than 6 hours from 06:52, 15 May 2006 to 12:30, 15 May 2006 and no discussion took place. Snowman (talk) 22:40, 19 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Its was review over 12 months ago why is the time an issue. Gnangarra 23:32, 19 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I have seen the previous GAR and a there is a link to it above. Snowman (talk) 10:11, 20 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
criteria 6 says It is illustrated, if possible, by images:, if possible the available images on commons are of two species only.
2a How many citations do you want?
3a it explains the naming of twenty eight in relation to its call, what else is required?
Can you explain what your looking for with the rest of it Gnangarra 23:32, 19 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
2a - You are correct about the name of "Twenty eight" being in the article - my mistake. But 2a is still a problem because it is light on other details, such as; calls of other subspecies, number of eggs in a nest, pair bonding, predators, threats (besides the Rainbow Lorikeet), and their longevity. Snowman (talk) 00:13, 20 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
3a - Depends on the sources; if it is all in one source, then one ref is enough. I find the description section not easy to read. Also, the Forshaw reference should have a page number or chapter to make verifiability easier.
6 - Commons uses the old classification and has two species, so this is a bit confusing. There are images in both of these species categories on commons. Some of the images on commons show the red on the front of its head much better than the images on the page. I am not exactly sure, but there may be images of two subspecies as well as the intermediate in the infobox. Snowman (talk) 00:13, 20 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Excellent. Can the field guide also be used for references for the ranges of the subspecies? Snowman (talk) 18:52, 24 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
It does have map splodges for the Mallee Ringneck and the Cloncurry Parrot, but the Twenty-eight and PLP's ranges are conflated. I'm a bit iffy about my ability to adequately translate the splodges to a description of their actual ranges, though. The splodges were taken from the contemporary ROAU atlas. -Malkinann (talk) 23:53, 24 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I've begun a section on "In captivity", which seems to be the accepted name. I'd appreciate some help expanding and copyediting it. -Malkinann (talk) 23:53, 24 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Some of the reference in the "In captivity" section are from 1997, and so I think that the information sourced might be out-of-date. Snowman (talk) 20:20, 25 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not so sure about that - legislation rarely changes, and the bit about the bird being traded worldwide is also supported by the CITES bulletin of 2002. The bird being traded domestically is also suggested by the SA information from 2003. I can't find an update on the 1997 stuff, so I'm assuming it's still current. -Malkinann (talk) 05:14, 26 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

(Undent) Very clearly, images not required at GA. Will look at other details now. Ling.Nut (WP:3IAR) 04:22, 20 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

No, I believe this should be closed as being "no consensus" - all comments on the state of the article (which have been mixed) are significantly outdated when compared to the current version of the article. -Malkinann (talk) 02:00, 3 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
That's certainly an option. If there is sufficient interest (Nikki has now also commented below) perhaps we could do a restart (close as "no consensus" and open a fresh reassessment). Geometry guy 19:19, 3 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Horses in warfare

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Result: Kept- Reasons for putting the article up for review were sourcing, citation, and MoS issues that have been resolved over a month-long revision process. Article now meets standards to maintain GA status. -epicAdam (talk) 01:49, 11 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there, I have reviewed this article as part of GA Sweeps and had a few problems with it as listed at Talk:Horses in warfare/GA1. Most are pretty minor but some are more serious. Given the size of the article, its importance and the nature of what I perceive to be its problems I would prefer to obtain community consensus on this article before making a decision on it. My personal feelings are that it would probably only take a small amount of cleaning up for this to be a GA but I am interested in other people's views on the subject.--Jackyd101 (talk) 13:16, 15 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Delist: There are a number of sections and paragraphs that require citations (there are even some maintenance tags on the page)... I just went through and edited the article to take care of some basic WP:MoS issues. Further, the web citations provided are formatting improperly.

I just ran this semi-automated javascript programthat has some additional items that could be considered beside the problems you mentioned:

There are also other problems that I have listed below:

I am going to add maintenance tags in areas that need help. Please let me know if you have any additional questions. Best, epicAdam (talk) 22:32, 15 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Keep: The article has undergone vast improvement. MoS, sources and prose look good and should keep its GA status. Best, epicAdam (talk) 16:42, 10 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

KEEP At least, don't panic and give us a couple weeks (not a couple DAYS) to get this tuned up. None of these problems are major, however, please be aware that the GA team at Wikiproject Equine is busy and we would appreciate your patience. At least two people who have helped extensively with this page are on vacation, one internationally. To answer a couple of your questions:

  1. 1 There is no real infobox for the project, though I did add the Equidae template to the bottom, if that works.
  2. 2 Horses are always measured in hands in English-speaking countries, it's a term of art.
  3. 3 Some of the comments on relevance of content do point out some fill, but other material is in there because it is of historic significance (say "war horse" and most people think of Knights, the original article was exclusively about the knight's horse and expanded from there. We can work on making it read better, but this is by its nature a long article and many other GA articles are just as long, if not more so.
  4. 4 We can tune up the footnotes, but this may take some time, as one of the people with the hardcopy books is the one who is out of the country.

I certainly appreciate constructive criticism, but keep in mind that this article is maintained by some experienced editors, and though the GA standard appears to have tightened up, the article easily passed when it was nominated the first time. So give us a chance to fix it. Montanabw(talk) 03:23, 17 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Response Hi Montanabw. I apologize that you feel like the article (and the editors who work on it) are being attacked by a slew of reviews. I just wanted to dissuade your fears of "Horses in warfare" being immediately delisted. A request was made at WP:GAR for a community review, to determine whether or not an article at present continues to meet GA standards; I felt that "Horses in warfare" did not. However, as per all community GA reassessments, no action is taken on an article until a consensus is reached and the primary editors have a chance to both respond and correct any flaws with the article. This process can often take weeks to complete, so there's no worry about the article being immediately delisted. To respond to some of the points you raised:
  • Simply because there is a customary unit of measurement does not mean that it's appropriate for an encyclopedia. The entire point of providing the information is so that people unfamiliar with a topic can understand it; hence why it was recommended that the use of "hands" be explained as a primary method of measuring horses, but then stick with units more familiar to readers for the rest of the article. However, again, this is only a recommendation. I am unaware of any WP:consensus on the issue. If there isn't, then it may be a good time to propose that a consensus be found.
  • I am not at all worried about the length of the article; in fact, I think it's a good size. However, as far as achieving good (not professional) prose, there are many redundancies in the text, which make the article difficult to read; a situation of which I'm sure you are aware.
  • Editors with sources: that's fine. Like I said, there's really no rush. Nobody wants to delist articles; that's not the point of the entire GA system. But, until User:Jackyd101's GAR recommendation, there had been relatively little work done on the article at all. Think about a GAR more as a method by which to bring attention to an article, as opposed to an all-out assault. :-)
If you have any other questions, or would like additional help with the article, please let me know and I'll see what I can do. Best, epicAdam (talk) 06:28, 17 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the reply. Some answers to the assorted questions raised, whoever raised them:

  1. Horses are measured in hands. That's an absolute. And it is wikilinked (though we can wikilink it more, certainly) We are not going to change over 1,500 horse articles on this. There are other things with odd measuring systems, the nautical mile, the troy ounce, etc., though there is certainly no objection to someone adding conversions as well if someone wants to do this. (A hand (length) is 4 inches and then one-inch increments. i.e a horse that is 15 hands is 60 inches at the withers, a horse that is 15.1 is 61 inches, 15.2 = 62 inches, 16 hands = 64 inches, etc.)
  2. Any other inaccurate conversion stuff can be fixed, obviously (Bad lb to kg stuff, for example, isn't there a template for this??)
  3. Reordering sections is up for discussion. The current version was intended to first provide an overview to make the rest (i.e. the history) make sense by providing a set of parameters and basic principles more or less common to all eras (i.e. form to function, for example, or when/why did the saddle start to matter?) Beyond that, it is pretty much ALL history after than, starting with antiquity and coming up to the present day. There may be an improved way to rearrange things, but this is an article where blind adherence to a set template is not necessarily the solution
  4. The table of contents seems suited to the length of the article, redundant things can be combined, but good subsections make it much easier to find material. I really don't see a huge problem with this.
  5. I see no reason to respond to a cut and paste template of suggestions not customized to the issues with this specific article. Some apparent "weasel words" simply reflect that a situation (such as the debate over the size of the knight's horse) are discussed in extensive detail in a footnote or at a wikilinked article. One must choose between a who/what/when discussion that becomes irrelevant and endless when one is also complaining that the article is too long. Make up your mind which problem you want to fix, eh, don't just apply rules out of context.
  6. I am cool with fixing redundancies. However, finding them is an issue - when you see an article too much, you know how one's eyes can blur. It WOULD be very helpful if you could create a separate section on the article talk page and give a short list that we can use strikeout on as we fix them, or discuss if they are a problem.
  7. Feel free to slap on the fact tags, but be aware that some sections have a source at the end of the paragraph that covers the entire paragraph. I never know quite how to handle those -- do we REALLY need five footnotes to the same page of a book in one para???
  8. I am not sure who put in all the suggestions as to what's relevant and what's not. There was a stable consensus on this for quite some time and I for one am reluctant to throw out a lot of material that does not in fact have much in other articles. For example, modern competition at the Olympic level is ALL derived from warfare. Equestrian at the Summer Olympics points out that civilians weren't even allowed to compete in the Olympics in Equestrian competition until the 50's. That's quite relevant. Historic reenactments may not be warfare, but they educate people about how horses were used in warfare (at least the better ones do). That's relevant.
  9. Calling material pseudo-information" is a but much. Just slap on fact tags.
  10. The material on medieval knights was already cut down a ton and transferred into Horses in the Middle Ages, but this was the core of the original article and most certainly relevant
  11. Mules and donkeys won many a war by preserving the supply line. So are you saying that supply isn't part of "warfare"? Ah, but the folks who wanted this material added were quite vehement that they were...and consensus of the time agreed.
  12. There is some stuff in the South Asia section that needs work. It does need to somehow be saved, though, as it helps provide a worldwide perspective to the article. I wish we had more on the Mongols, too.

Hope this helps! Montanabw(talk) 18:55, 17 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comment - just note that I am actively working on updating references, etc. The web references have been cleaned up, and I'm slowly working through the sourcing issues. After those are taken care of we'll work on weasel terms, etc. Ealdgyth - Talk 00:56, 20 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, the article has a new lead, which is much longer. Much of the missing citations are in now. Dodgy refs are gone (we're still waiting on a few page numbers, but nothing spectacular.) Some expansion of topics covered has taken place, but we're still good with 42K of readable prose. Considering the scope of the subject, that's not bad at all. Just updating on progress. Ealdgyth - Talk 20:36, 1 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
So can we keep GA status, now, pretty please?? Montanabw(talk) 01:33, 4 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]


ATTENTION: We have, for the most part, completed the re-edit of this article and would appreciate it if all who weighted in here will please comment and close this reassessment. Several editors, Dana in particular, have worked VERY hard on this update and it would be nice to get this article out of limbo. Can someone please explain how we can wrap this up now? Thank you. Montanabw(talk) 01:10, 10 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

And if a vote is needed, I vote KEEP. Montanabw(talk) 01:10, 10 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

GoldenEye 007

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Result: Delist naerii 16:24, 21 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Consensus appears to be to delist, the article has had little work done to it, for example the lead is still sparse. naerii 16:24, 21 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I've nominated this article to GAR because there are three "citation needed" tags. David Pro (talk) 21:58, 16 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

That's not a good reason for GAR. Take it to the talk page. --haha169 (talk) 18:10, 18 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I think that there is still reason for it to need reassessment. The easter eggs section is starting to read like a trivia section, which indicates that there may be more edits that were made between now and when it was last reviewed that have gone unchecked. It has been almost a year since the last time it was formally reviewed, and the last peer review seems to address only general problems instead of article-specific problems. I think that a reassessment would benefit this article. — OranL (talk) 22:23, 20 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Nastia Liukin

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Result: Article listed. Clear consensus shown by all comments being in favor of listing. Rreagan007 (talk) 02:28, 25 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer has agreed that everything in the article is in good shape. Everything is cited, everything is formatted, there are illustrations, it's NPOV. However, it has been claimed that the article does not meet stability requirements, resulting in the fail, because it is protected from IP vandalism and because the subject is involved in a current news event.

  1. IP protection is not, and should not, listed as a criterion to fail GA. The article is protected so it will remain stable, and because the subject is a visible sports figure who attracts a lot of media attention, and, thus, a lot of visits to her Wiki page. I note that many current GA and FA articles need to be protected for the same reason.
  2. Many BLP subjects are involved in current events, and will need their pages updated from time to time. Again, not a reason to fail.
  3. No edit war has happened; there's simply been a surge of vandalism that has been caught and corrected immediately.
  4. The original agreement was to wait until the end of the Olympics to pass/fail this; the reviewer has changed his or her mind for some reason.

I very much thank the reviewer for the input and help they've given. However, there's no reason this should fail GA, especially for the given reasons. DanielEng (talk) 21:57, 15 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

List. Stability is a measure of the degree to which there are legitimate disputes over an article's content. An evolving current event in which an article has to be updated often does not count as instability. Also, repeated vandalism that prompts protection status of an article does not count as instability, as vandalism is not a legitimate dispute (i.e. edit war) over content. Rreagan007 (talk) 18:06, 18 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Alicia Sacramone

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Result: Article listed. Clear consensus shown by all comments being in favor of listing. The issue was the exact same one as in the Nastia Liukin GAR. Rreagan007 (talk) 03:11, 25 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

This article was failed for GA by the same editor who failed the Nastia Liukin article, for the same reason: it was claimed that it was not stable. The editor had originally agreed to wait until the end of the Olympics to assess the article and then went back on his or her word, with no warning. The rationale here was a NPOV tag which was added by IP vandals, and was taken away by registered editors as soon as it was found. The editor admitted s/he hadn't even read through the most recent copyedits before failing the GA.

This article should not have failed GA. I would like for it to be reassessed. I would also appreciate it if perhaps someone could ask the assessing editor about what s/he is doing--it seems as if s/he is constantly misreading the GA criteria and failing good articles as a result. DanielEng (talk) 01:19, 19 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

LaRouche conspiracy trials

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Result: Renominate for GA. The article was promoted by a user editing in violation of a community ban, and therefore never has been properly considered for promtion. Xymmax So let it be written So let it be done 20:43, 27 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The article was passed GA by a confirmed sockpuppet. Other editors have expressed concerns that this article, as it stands, has deficiencies which should have held it back from GA. The implicit accusation is that GA was passed inappropriately and should be revoked pending improvements. Jclemens (talk) 16:42, 27 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

This article was never reviewed for GA. No one signed up to review it. There is no past GA review. It was promoted by removing it from the nomination page and placing GA passed code on the talk page. —Mattisse (Talk) 17:29, 27 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Well, the banned user did post what was purported to be a review on the article's talk page. I agree that no one ever signed up on the GAN page. Speaking only for myself, I have no strong feeling about whether the article is reassessed here, or placed back in the nominations queue. Xymmax So let it be written So let it be done 19:17, 27 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
A real GA review is not posted on the talk page but is transcluded on to the talk page from its own review page with the ((Talk:ArticleName/GAn)) template. For example, ((Talk:Papahānaumokuākea Marine National Monument/GA1)) is a current review page —Mattisse (Talk) 19:29, 27 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Agreed, which which why I phrased that as I did. Although, the subpage's use on all GA reviews is a recent development. Do you feel the more appropriate course is relisting? I have no problem with closing this and getting Will Beback to re-nominate. Xymmax So let it be written So let it be done 19:46, 27 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
My first instinct would be to simply relist it, since it really has not had a real GA review. Take the GA off the talk page and proceed as you were going to do when it was originally listed for GA. It has never actually been a GA so GAR doesn't fit. But I am not familiar with all the ways of GA. —Mattisse (Talk) 20:15, 27 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Taking this back to the talk page :) Xymmax So let it be written So let it be done 20:20, 27 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Jurassic Park (franchise)

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Result: Consensus was to delist, issues not addressed. Malkinann (talk) 10:31, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The article has numerous references tags, and I believe certain sections such as the critical reception and development sections could be expanded to give a more in-depth view of the entire film series. The development section is especially important in a film series article. See the Halloween franchise for an example of this. The critical reception could have individual critic's opinions of the films and compare it to the others. I also belive the article could use a copy edit.--EclipseSSD (talk) 16:29, 19 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • "Before the book was published, Crichton put up a non-negotiable fee for $1.5 million as well as a substantial percentage of the gross. Warner Bros. and Tim Burton, Columbia Tristar and Richard Donner, and 20th Century Fox and Joe Dante also bid for the rights,[2] Universal further paid Crichton $500,000 to adapt his own novel,[3] but Universal eventually acquired them in May 1990 for Spielberg." Apart from the fact that it's poorly written, it seems to be saying that Crichton paid someone $1.5 million before he'd even had his book published?
  • "Many rumors have surrounded the project since it was first reported, many surrounding plot and script ideas, and new logos." Surrounding the surrounded?
  • "Spielberg himself told him that he would direct the sequel, if one would ever occur." Sequels occur?
  • The Reception section needs to be fleshed out.

--Malleus Fatuorum (talk) 16:59, 4 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Plentiful "very successful"s need to be more specific and reliably sourced.
The dinosaurs table is not a good way to present this information (the cast table is only just bearable). The continuity section is listy. Critical reception by table is unacceptable for the same reason. The video games section seems no better, with the unsourced and unreadable "There was also a game available on the Microsoft Xbox console and also the Playstation 2 as well as the PC called Jurassic Park: Operation Genesis where the goal of the game was to create and manage their own version of Jurassic Park, in a manner somewhat similar to the Zoo Tycoon games." Geometry guy 21:12, 11 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Milton Friedman

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Result: Keep listed as good article. Patrick (talk) 03:18, 12 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I have requested a reassessment of the good article status due to the severe lack of neutrality. Similarly, I have also flagged the article itself to dispute its neutrality. This article reads as a hagiography and only mentions criticisms and failures of Friedman's ideas in passing. Paul Krugman's criticisms are dismissed as if he is a lone quack.

There definitely should be more information about the application of Friedman's free market principles, by his disciples (the Chicago boys), in South America (Argentina, Chile, Bolivia), and the catastrophic effects they had on the economies of that region. Friedman's tacic support of brutal dictators such as Pinocet to advance his theories should also recieve attention. Naomi Klein's recent book "The Shock Doctrine" provides ample specifics and references. Historical evidence that refutes Friedman's theories should also be added (eg deregulation debacles like Enron; environmental, legal, and labor abuses following privitization of national industries; historical failures of tax cuts to stimulate economic growth (low taxes preceded the great depression, and have often preceded drops in unemployment in the US); the association between freer market policies and greater income inequality in the US, etc... Jdstany (talk) 22:18, 18 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comment I would expect that the biography of a Nobel Prize-winner would be much more positive than negative. Thus, the relevance of neutrality should be judged in this context. The depth of the article is more than sufficient for a WP:GA, IMO.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 16:09, 19 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Comment I don't think that a Nobel Prize should grant its winner limitless immunity from valid criticism; Yasser Arafat and Henry Kissenger, for example, are both Nobel Prize winners who are regularly and strongly critised in mainstream conversation. Milton Friedman is known for his ideas, and the consequences of his ideas are therefore part of his legacy. Just as Marx has been rightfully demonized for the consequences of communism, Friedman should not get a pass on the consequences of his ideas simply because he won a prize or because he never fired a shot or implemented a policy. Ultimately, the application of Friedman's principles has destroyed economies throughout the world (particularly South America); Friedman-inspired privitation and deregulation has nearly always resulted in total disaster; and here in the US, Friedman's ideas are directly responsible for rising government debt, rising income inequality, increased poverty, and weakened social support systems. Saying that Friedman is all good because he won a Nobel Prize, or because Reagan and Bush like him, is an inadequate defense. The depth of the article may be adequate, but the failure to legitimately address any criticsm or failure of Friedman and his ideas indicates that the breath of the article is far from aqequate. Jdstany (talk) 18:00, 19 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I have asked you twice on your userpage to make the proper notifications and denote it above. Please give some sort of response.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 05:59, 20 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I'm sorry about that. I'm new to contributing and I wasn't aware of the protocol. I'll send out the notifications ASAP. Thanks for letting me know. Jdstany (talk) 02:50, 21 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not sure if it's worth repeating the process, but for things like this it's very helpful to include a link to this discussion in your message. CRETOG8(t/c) 03:46, 21 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Have you notified any of the projects yet?--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 20:58, 26 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Lou Gehrig

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Result: No consensus to list. Suggest renomination. Geometry guy 11:51, 20 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I would like to request community review of this recent GAN. It was failed, in part due to confusion about the reviewer's asking for a second opinion. See my comment at GAN/talk. As the article seems to be fully sourced and otherwise comply with MOS and use of images, etc., the wider community's assessment would be helpful especially as the prose question raised by the reviewer was unresolved. Using WP:FACR as a measuring stick, I believe the article's prose is "engaging and professional", as well as presenting the content comprehensively, factually accurate, and reliably sourced. JGHowes talk - 19:47, 28 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • "... including a 450-foot (137 m) blast on April 28". Blast doesn't seem like appropriately formal language.
  • The first three sentences of the fourth paragraph of Major League Baseball career all start off with "Gehrig ...".
  • Too much peacockery, like "... Al Simmons made an amazing leaping catch ...". Amazing to who? Me?
  • "On June 1 1925, Gehrig was sent in to pinch hit for light-hitting shortstop Paul "Pee Wee" Wanninger." Too many statements like that one, which mean almost nothing to someone like myself who isn't familiar with the sport's jargon.
  • "Gehrig accumulated 1,995 RBIs in seventeen seasons ...". RBI needs to be explained in this article, instead of forcing the reader to follow a link.
  • ... chiefly remembered for his prowess as a slugger ...". Is slugger an official baseball term?
  • "Earl Whitehall beaned Gehrig, knocking him nearly unconscious". Beaned might be OK for a sports page, but not for an encyclopedia.
  • The list following: "Late in life, X-rays disclosed that Gehrig had sustained several fractures during his playing career" does not appear to have anything to do with any fractures.
  • Shouldn't use pullout quotes ( ((cquote)) ) in the body of the article.

--Malleus Fatuorum (talk) 16:40, 4 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Reply: Thanks very much for looking this over. I've gone through the article and corrected the points you raised. JGHowes talk - 04:54, 5 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Just to speak to the confusion regarding the second opinion request, the reviewer requested a second opinion because there were a lot of statistics given in the article and a lot of focus was given to the sentimental aspects of Gehrig's diesase and death. I looked through the article and replied in the review section that there didn't seem to be too many statistics (certainly not more than some of the other baseball articles I have read) and that the article captures how Gehrig is remembered. I said that I didn't believe that either of the concerns were serious enough to prevent the article from reaching GA level. The reviewer was satisfied with that answer, and the request for a second opinion was removed, as one had been provided. I am not sure where the confusion came in. GaryColemanFan (talk) 15:53, 9 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

John Marshall Harlan II

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Result: Keep. This was effectively an individual reassessment and the issues raised were fixed. Geometry guy 11:57, 20 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Notified: WP:WPBIO, WP:ILLINOIS, WP:CHICAGO, WP:LAW, Lord Emsworth (inactive leading editor), Ruslik0 (2nd leading editor)

Upon review of the article history at Talk:John Marshall Harlan II this article was not properly nominated and passed. However, the article has previously survived a WP:GAR nomination and is outside of my area of expertise, so I did not delist it myself. The article is very poorly cited.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 04:59, 11 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I like this idea. Ruslik (talk) 18:39, 16 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
 Done. Ruslik (talk) 08:30, 20 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Well, I think I cited all cases. Can not find anything uncited. Ruslik (talk) 09:27, 21 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Keep Thanks for helping. Now a reader can really verify things.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 14:01, 21 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I would still appreciate an opinion on whether some of the template case citations should be in ref tags.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 14:03, 21 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
They can be, but I don't think it is necessry in this article. Ruslik (talk) 14:13, 21 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Winston Churchill

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Result: Speedy Keep. This article meets GA criteria and the nomination offers no legitimate reason to de-list. Majoreditor (talk) 02:54, 23 September 2008 (UTC). }[reply]


The article is heavily skewed with Britonic POV. Most of the Churchill's life was concentrated orientally and he was quite a egoistic person weak in understanding the oldest civilization and craved on his dominating mentality with motives like Divide and Rule. He was the only person in the history to have opposed Mahatma Gandhi throughout his life and made disastrous moves althrough ultimately resulting in partition of nation sitting in the other part of the world.

Recently Nobel committee admitted Gandhi missed Nobel on 5 occassions and it becomes obvious who was behind Nobel committee and what is the real value of that so called honour.

Todd Manning

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Result: Not listed. While the article is good in many aspects, there are issues that need to be resolved before the article can be listed. These issues have been detailed and acknowledged. Jennavecia (Talk) 02:25, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I made intense improvements to this article after it was failed during its first GA review. I did not nominate it that first time for GA and saw the flaw in it having been nominated that time. Once I read the GA review, however, I took care of most of the concerns that were basically implied to be all this article needed in order to be listed as GA. There were only three concerns the GA reviewer had a problem with that I did not completely change. What were they? The GA reviewer had a problem with the first quote, feeling that it may be copyright infringement. I stated that I felt that the first quote was appropriate, and not really going against policy; there are other decent articles that have quotes of that length and are seen as appropriate by experienced Wikipedian editors. The GA reviewer also had a problem with two of the references (really four, but the reliability of two of those references was never in question; it was rather the other two). I explained that those two references are primary sources.

After further improving this article, I nominated it for GA for a second time, and I waited for quite a while for it to once again be reviewed. I came to Wikipedia today, checked on it, and saw that it was failed without even having been put on hold to suggest improvements and without an explanation on the talk page as to why it was failed (though I saw this reviewer's reasons in his GA review). I addressed that much to this GA reviewer. This is simply not a B-Class article anymore, and is hardly in any worse shape than many GA articles I have seen on Wikipedia. I feel that the GA reviewer was mistaken to fail it. It is not so much that he failed it but rather quick-failed it due to what he sees as sploppy prose. I feel that it should have been put on hold asking me to improve the prose, especially since it only has a minor problem regarding that. In fact, I am off to go improve the prose now. Flyer22 (talk) 17:33, 20 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

My comments on the article in the state it was in when I reviewed it are at Talk:Todd Manning/GA2, and some further conversation on my quick fail at User talk:Jclemens#Todd Manning. I have no objection to being overruled, especially since it looks like Flyer22 has been busy making improvements to the article. At the time I reviewed the article, I thought the prose was failure quality, rather than hold-and-give-detailed-feedback quality. If I was being too hard on the article, my sincerest apologies. I've only been doing GA reviews for a few weeks, and if the community consensus is that I should have placed the article on hold, I will humbly apologize for not doing so in this case, and do so in similar cases in the future. Jclemens (talk) 23:08, 20 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
No need to apologize for your review. The three examples given in the second GA review show that the article wasn't ready to pass GA. That said, I bet that Flyer will be able to bring the prose up to par in short order. Majoreditor (talk) 03:08, 26 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, I have taken care of the three examples Jclemens pointed out in his GA review, as stated on his talk page. As I stated there: "Sure, I was lazy with the prose and did not read over the article as much as I should have before nominating it, but going back over the article, I still saw few problems with it. The prose you pointed out in your GA review I just took care of not too long ago. It was that simple. I noticed other prose problems along the way. It was that simple." I also improved a lot more of the prose since his GA review, and added a new section (the latest one to the Controversy section) that I feel is decently written. Any other tweaks needed for the prose, or not so much needed but that would help improve this article, I would definitely appreciate hearing, and would take care of as soon as seeing them mentioned here. Right now, though, it seems like I will just have to nominate this article for GA again. Flyer22 (talk) 06:25, 26 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The article is informative and well-cited, but still suffers from uneven prose. An example: Making the character Victoria Lord's younger brother gave the writers a significant amount of story to work with. Majoreditor (talk) 22:55, 31 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, I'll take care of that later today or tomorrow. But the bad prose has been taken care of. As for any more uneven prose (which I don't see as bad), I will be sure to take care of that as well very soon. But, really, parts of this article can still be cited as having room for improvement. I mean, we're not talking about whether this article is ready for Featured Article status, of course. Though, honestly, even some of those articles can still be improved. We're talking about whether this article is now good enough to be given Good Article status. I feel that, besides more needed tweaking, it is. I've looked over enough listed good Wikipedia character articles, like Harry Potter (character), to know that I am not that far off, or even actually off. I've been studying a few good and featured character articles as well, not just looking over them. I am definitely for improving this article as much as it can be improved. Flyer22 (talk) 00:32, 5 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
This would be not too hard to fix, but after reading the article, I share the unease that that the reviewers express about the unencyclopedic style. For instance, people rarely "say" anything in this article; instead they "relay", "elaborate", "detail", "relate", "cite". The prose has the linguistic dexterity of a thesis, not the factual directness of an encyclopedia. This would also be an easy problem to fix, were it not for the cause: large portions of the article have not just the style, but the character of a media studies thesis, and are analytical. More precisely, this analysis is taken from a media studies paper of Jennifer Hayward (reference [8]), which is cited 36 times, without once mentioning her name. That's a big no-no on Wikipedia and goes against WP:NPOV and WP:NOR.
For instance, the section on "Specific writing", which should be the character equivalent of a plot summary, is almost entirely sourced to [8], and packed with analysis. It is great analysis, and I actually think the article is a fantastic piece of work. It is just not encyclopedic.
This can be fixed too, but it requires reworking the article significantly. Wikipedia can (and should) cover scholarly analysis, as long as it is presented as such. That requires a section on "Critical analysis" (or something like that), which reponds to the sentence "Todd has been... alluded to and studied in books" in the lead and attributes the opinions and analyses to the scholars who have written about the character. Such a change is too substantial for a GAR, so I endorse the fail, and recommend renomination once the article is reworked. Geometry guy 14:52, 20 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I think it's a procedural issue and really no big deal. The article didn't meet GA, it was failed, it is being improved, when you are ready it will receive a fresh review. No problem, right?. Everyone's goal here is to get articles up to GA, and sometimes fail is a shorter route to that goal than on hold. --Una Smith (talk) 01:45, 22 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Habbush letter

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Result: delisted Ok. I've looked at this one for a little while and it is high time to close it. On review we had a few problems. One, pretty innocuously, a typo resulted in a failed nomination with no apparent review. Two, the review itself appeared perfunctory and didn't fail the article on a listed Good article criteria. Simply put, vandalism and IP POV pushing are not what is meant by "unstable". Ongoing edit wars between major participants on the page changing the meaning and scope of the page are what we mean. But, a review which failed the article on incorrect grounds doesn't mean that the article should be passed automatically. I am going to delist this article and suggest that it may be renominated at any time. Protonk (talk) 06:00, 28 September 2008 (UTC).[reply]

The article was rejected for good article status, but the reviewer did not even indicate how to improve the article as seen on the very blank review page. It is apparent that the reviewer committed the review in bad faith, considering his/ her track record in other Wikipedia-related activities such as this. Starczamora (talk) 21:33, 9 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

It seems that the assessment was performed here, but I agree that the reviewer could have given more information as to how the article was inadequate. I feel that questions of WP:NPOV are important when reviewing this article. When was the article nominated for GA? It might help us shed some light on the "unstable" clause. Some of the references need to have better formatting. -Malkinann (talk) 07:55, 10 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Starczamora's very blank review page is due to a typo, "GAn" instead of "GA1". The review is exactly where it should be, Talk:Habbush letter/GA1, and has been there since September 8th. --Una Smith (talk) 02:11, 22 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
It was rejected due to the fact that there are many vandalism just with a quick look on the history, meaning it was unstable.Eduhello (talk) 11:10, 10 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
What kind of vandalism did you see? Simple cursing does not count for this consideration, it has to be a content dispute. -Malkinann (talk) 11:21, 10 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Here it is:(cur) (last) 23:42, 25 August 2008 EdJohnston (Talk | contribs) m (Protected Habbush letter: Edit warring. If the dispute still doesn't settle down, full protection is an option [edit=autoconfirmed:move=autoconfirmed] (expires 23:42, 8 September 2008 (UTC))) (undo)
Got it?Eduhello (talk) 12:13, 10 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Let's keep it cool, ok? Did you look at what the edit war was about or if it had been resolved? -Malkinann (talk) 17:05, 10 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I'm almost always cool. Here is just a partial taster of the dispute. [[4]]. There are still many others once you look at the history. Happy Editing! 04:59, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
Guys, i spent a few hours editing this page, and i think you should hold off before you call it 'good'. there are still a lot of unanswered questions about this situation.... someone should really triple fact check every little word in the article. imho
I agree that the review is not satisfactory, being too short, but has anyone asked the reviewer to expand it? Given his response here, he is willing to expand on it, but I think (a) he needs some coaching and (b) his native language is not English. --Una Smith (talk) 02:11, 22 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I did a new review to the article. In my opinion it is more satisfactory. Here is it.

Please tell me if it is more satisfactory or not.

Thank You!Happy Editing! (talk) 11:30, 26 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Du battant des lames au sommet des montagnes

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Result: Delisted. Unanimous consensus in the 9 days that it has been here; article hasn't been worked on since then. PeterSymonds (talk) 19:19, 28 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

It seems to me that the arguments given on the talk page are about merging and renaming the article, not about its quality. Thus, the withdrawal of the Good article status is not motivated. Thierry Caro (talk) 23:44, 19 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • But on Réunion, throughout its history, it has clearly been Parisian customary law that has guided the rights of succession.
  • The task of dividing plots perpendicular to the coast was made much easier by the fact that numerous ravines, difficult to cross, cover Réunion, starting from the heights and striating the sides of this cone-shaped island.
  • Thus, a judgment of the Conseil de contentieux administratif, issued 2 August 1853, defined the first as designating the high point as seen from several successive places, while the second referred only to the crest as seen in the foreground.
Wikipedia readers expect and deserve concise, well-composed prose. Please, dispense with the meandering sentences. Shun the passive voice. And consider using English where possible ("Conseil de contentieux administratif"?) Majoreditor (talk) 05:36, 20 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Robot

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Result: Delist. There are no signs that the GA concerns raised will be addressed in the near future. Geometry guy 21:20, 4 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Major problems of this article:

And that's just after a cursory scan of the article. There is a general copyedit needed template at the top of the article as well. This is not a Good Article quality. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 18:01, 20 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Having a limb can make all the difference. Having eyes too gives people a sense that a machine is aware ("the eyes are the windows of the soul"). However, simply being anthropomorphic is not sufficient for something to be called a robot. A robot must do something, whether it is useful work or not. So, for example, a dog's rubber chew toy, shaped like ASIMO, would not be considered a robot.
In other spots the prose disintegrates into a tangle of rough-hewn embedded lists.
I'm also concerned with the article's focus and breadth. There's an embarrasing lack of material on the current state of industrial robotics. Unless the article's editors can address these issues quickly then we should move to delist. Majoreditor (talk) 02:54, 26 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I'm surprised you say that. As someone who subscribes to Industrial Robot Magazine (there are not many of us), I can tell you that the current state of industrial robots is well covered by the article. What in particular did you think the article missed in this area? Industrial robots haven't come very far since they were invented. They're basically like the car. It's gone about as far as it's going to. Changes are mostly superficial, and we're waiting for the next big thing (flying cars, cars that drive themselves). Rocketmagnet (talk) 23:38, 26 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Also, bear in mind that there is a lot to cover in this article. Industrial robots make up only one sector of the field, and the article is already long. Industrial robots would be covered in depth in their own article. I imagine the Robot article as a kind of introductory hub to all the other articles. Rocketmagnet (talk) 23:38, 26 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
And thank you for your efforts to improve the article. I'll give it another reading in a few days. Oh, one other point. I'm concerned with one of the statements in the lead: Despite the huge advances in technology of the last century, robots are still nowhere near as capable as the public imagination believes. Both mentally and physically, robots are still slow, dim-witted and clumsy. Does the article really reach those conclusions?
You're right, it doesn't. But wait ... don't remove it from the lead, let me add to the article so that it does reach those conclusions. I think it's a critically important thing to say. Rocketmagnet (talk) 12:43, 29 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, I deleted that, but I'll put the the second sentence back, with a small tweak, to the end of what I've got, and wait for supporting material in the text to see where we're going with that. - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 13:59, 29 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Perhaps Rocketmagnet is correct and I have been too extreme in my statements on industrial robotics. However, I still think there's room for improvement. For example, there's much emphasis on robots in automotiv emanufacturing, but scant mention of them for metal fabrication outside the automotive industry. I'd also suggest that more could be said about the production, sakles and marketing of robots. Thanks, Majoreditor (talk) 00:21, 27 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Sure, those kind of robots are used in various industries, and the article talks about robots working in factories in general, eg removing hot metal from die casting machines. I guess it could have a little more, but it would be a shame to make the article industry heavy. Rocketmagnet (talk) 12:43, 29 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
In the light of this, it seems to me that large chunks of the article are simply not reliably sourced. The whole listy first section on definitions makes many assertions about what may or may not be considered a robot, but apart from the "official defintions" subsection, it is sourced to a CBC News survey, a NASA programme, a record company, a gadget review site, a robots exhibition, "How stuff works", a dictionary and an encyclopedia (tertiary). Where are the RSS's?
In the history section, assertions about Al-Jazari and Leonardo da Vinci are unsourced, including "The design was probably based on anatomical research recorded in his Vitruvian Man." According to whom?
The section on "Increased productivity, accuracy, and endurance", which advocates the benefits of robots, is dominated by primary sources to the companies which make the products described. One click to the footnote, and another to the source, and the reader is greeted with "Electronic manufacturing solutions. Your path to the future just got clearer" or "TUG can do this. TUG can do that". The manufacturers must be loving this article! The section on swarm robots is just as bad.
"Dangers and fears". Whose analysis is this? Two facts are sourced, as is the "uncanny valley" and concerns about the use of robots in warfare. The rest of the section isn't. "Literature": "The first reference in Western literature to mechanical servants appears in Homer's Iliad." Sourced to an interview by a college journal with a playright?
"The most prolific and best known author of short stories about robots was Isaac Asimov (1920–1992), who placed robots and their interaction with society at the center of many of his works." According to whom? Geometry guy 20:08, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Ah! After your warning on your talk page (WP:V you say? What's that?), I thought we were going to have a fight. I completely agree. I will attempt to pawn as much of the work off as I can (not that I've had any luck at Robot). The Asimov, Al-Jazari and da Vinci sources are in those articles (hopefully someone will go get them); I don't like the automated guided vehicle (AGV) section myself; I would prefer to have more online books as sources; and I struggled to find a better source for the Homer quote and got nothing (but I don't want to yank it until I know we can't source it). I thought we were going to have a more fundamental argument. Robot has had over 1000 unique registered editors. This is not an article where I get to read a few books and write what I want. Rocket and I have watched this article for a very long time, and we know that it reflects a lot of community standards. This is where you guys come in: if you want to say "no", say "no", and then I'll pull the source, unless there's some previous battle over that, in which case I'll try to determine consensus. - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 20:55, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
On the first section: that's Rocketmagnet's baby, so get ready for a fight. The people who best know the answer to the question are academics. All 4 of the academics quoted in the CBC source are world-class experts, and they know what they're talking about. I think what you're saying is that you want a paper from each of these guys, rather than 1 interview that quotes all 4 of them: sounds reasonable. Anyone want to poke around? - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 21:11, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Franamax worked up this table to replace one of the lists; which format do you guys prefer?
Mental Agency Criteria
Mechanism Characteristics Classification
Clockwork car Simple mechanical control Never considered a robot
Remotely operated vehicle Operated under human control Sometimes considered a robot (or telerobot).[1]
Car with an onboard computer, like Bigtrak Drives in a pre-programmed sequence Might be called a robot
Self-controlled car such as the 1990s driverless cars of Ernst Dickmanns or the entries in the DARPA Grand Challenge Senses its environment and makes driving decisions based on this information Likely called a robot
Sentient car, like the fictional KITT Makes decisions, navigates freely and converses fluently with a human Usually considered a robot

- Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 12:44, 26 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Could we have prose, based on reliable sources? Geometry guy 21:50, 26 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  1. ^ "Real Robots on the Web". NASA Space Telerobotics Program. 1999-10-15. Retrieved 2007-09-06.
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