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Request for comment on use of "rapist", "sex offender" or "convicted" in lead paragraph and short description[edit]

Situation: The subject of this BLP, Danny Masterson, was convicted of rape several months ago, and sentenced just yesterday. Numerous editors have added "rapist" or "sex offender" or "convicted" to the first sentence of the lead paragraph and the short description, and other editors have removed those labels. The article has been rapidly fluctuating back and forth, and an earlier discussion on the talk page hasn't resolved the issue.

Question: Should any of the above terms be included, or not-included, in the lead paragraph, lead sentence, and/or the short description? Clarification: The question is referring to the use of the labels themselves, not referring to sentences describing the concept.

Relevant guidelines: WP:Manual of Style/Lead section, especially the sections Opening paragraph, First sentence, Biographies, and Biographies' first sentence.

09:08, 8 September 2023 (UTC)

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Citation needed. DonIago (talk) 03:30, 9 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Every news organization is reporting on his prison sentence. He never got this much publicity for his acting career. Jaydoggmarco (talk) 06:31, 9 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Just because his current legal issues are receiving more news coverage doesn't mean that's what he's now more known for. DonIago (talk) 16:27, 9 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • MOS:BIOFIRSTSENTENCE: The first sentence should usually state ... 4. One, or possibly more, noteworthy positions, activities, or roles that the person held, avoiding subjective or contentious terms.
  • WP:CONTENTIOUS: Value-laden labels – such as calling an organization a cult, an individual a racist, sexist, terrorist, or freedom fighter, or a sexual practice a perversion – may express contentious opinion and are best avoided unless widely used by reliable sources to describe the subject, in which case use in-text attribution. ... Rather than describing an individual using the subjective and vague term controversial, instead give readers information about relevant controversies.
These labels are not widely used in RS at this time. (Same goes for the use of the word "former" in front of "actor".) Grorp (talk) 03:41, 12 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I agree this shouldn't be in the first sentence, but what is subjective or contentious about him being a "convicted rapist?" That's not a matter of opinion. Nemov (talk) 12:40, 12 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I echo Nemov's comment. @Grorp, how is this statement subjective or contentious? glman (talk) 13:26, 13 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I agree that there is nothing whatsoever contentious about this. The statement that Danny Masterson is a convicted rapist is unequivocally a statement of fact. It is not a "value-laden label" like those other, different words to which Grorp refers. Cambial foliar❧ 15:15, 13 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Nemov, Glman, and Cambial Yellowing: I never used the terms "subjective" or "contentious", it is Wikipedia guidelines that does so. In the above example, the word "contentious" wikilinks to the policy with header "Contentious labels", whose first sentence starts "Value-laden labels", which wikilinks to the Wikipedia article Loaded language. I have no objections to including prose style content about the accusations, charges, case, trials, conviction or sentencing. My objection is to the "value-laden labels" such as "is a rapist" or "is a sex offender" or "is a convicted rapist" or "is a convicted sex offender" (at the top of the article). Though those labels might well be truthful, it is against Wikipedia guidelines to use such labels unless and until such time as reliable sources start using these terms, and use them sufficiently often enough to overcome WP:UNDUE (and potentially WP:SYNTH and WP:OR). So if you are still confused as to why such labels might possibly be unacceptable, please read Loaded language as well as the other Wikipedia guideline pages. (The same argument holds for the use of "former" as in "former actor".) Grorp (talk) 01:48, 14 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Grorp:Contentious labels talks about "value-laden labels" that may express a contentious opinion. If someone if convicted of rape, they are by definition - a convicted rapist, that is not an opinion, that is a fact, and it is supported by multiple reliable sources - convicted rapist (NBC News), convicted rapist Danny Masterson (Los Angeles Times), convicted rapist (Intelligencer), convicted rapist (The Independent), convicted rapist Danny Masterson (ABC News), convicted rapist Danny Masterson (Vulture), convicted rapist Danny Masterson (Australian Broadcasting Corporation). Plus dozens of other reliable sources that explicitly state he was convicted of rape, and they are not expressing an opinion, they are reporting the facts of his case. Whether or not it should be in the lead sentence will be decided by this RfC. But calling Masterson a convicted rapist is not contentious, a value-laden label, or loaded language. Isaidnoway (talk) 06:58, 14 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I note that all of those articles were published after this RfC started, so maybe the [language] tide is turning in RS, in which case thankfully there is an RfC process. Perhaps people might have left my vote alone had I simply answered "I find it distasteful to use such labels". Still do. I feel using such labels is borne of reactive emotions from recent events, or a media practice towards sensationalism (which drives attention and profits), not logic-based editor judgment. I think using such identifying labels in Wikipedia BLPs should be reserved for those who are well-known because of their crimes—Charles Manson and Jeffrey Dahmer come to mind; nobodies who probably wouldn't have gotten a Wikipedia article except they were notorious for their crimes. The label is contentious; as witness the votes in this RfC. It is loaded language. To say "someone has been convicted of crimeX" is completely different than saying "someone is a convicted crimeXer"; one labels the person's actions, the other labels the person. Those who have asserted it is neither contentious nor loaded have basically been saying "I want to", and have failed to refer to any Wikipedia guidelines that suggest we should use such labels (because there aren't any). That devalues their vote. The RfC results will govern. Grorp (talk) 08:47, 14 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Like I said, it is not loaded language or contentious to label Masterson a convicted rapist, when it is verified. Reliable sources clearly and directly state he has been convicted of rape. We follow reliable sources, and they say he is a convicted rapist. And it does not devalue an editor's !vote when they are following policy and guidelines. Isaidnoway (talk) 16:46, 14 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
It's a good point and I'm conflicted 50/50 on this. We should be extra careful about contentious labels in a BLP, but it is also true that Danny Masterson was convicted of rape, making this an objective fact not a subjective opinion. But even a minor change in the language like "Convicted of rape" or "convicted of multiple rapes" seems more neutral than "convicted rapist." I like the idea of Wikipedia being as neutral as possible even for those convicted of heinous crimes. Does it make any sense or am I over-thinking this? CranberryMuffin (talk) 01:34, 18 September 2023 (UTC) strike comment by CU-blocked sock[reply]
[r as pinged] @Grorp: You claim you never used the terms "subjective" or "contentious", yet the word "contentious" does appear in your comment – twice – albeit in quotes from the manual of style – and you claim it applies to the term "convicted rapist".
You fail to understand what the term "value-laden" in "value-laden label" means. The terms listed as examples involve value judgment. They apply a relative standard, and thus different terms might be applied to an individual by different parties depending on their position on the factors involved ("one man's terrorist is another's freedom fighter", etc). This is not the case for the term "convicted rapist". You imply that "convicted rapist" is a "label-word" – you don't define this, but one presumes you mean it to be roughly interchangeable with "value-laden label". That Masterson is a convicted rapist is a fact established by his conviction under the California Penal Code. The appeal process means he might no longer be a convicted rapist in the future, but there is nothing contentious about the statement that, at present, Masterson is – factually – a convicted rapist. This is what @Nemov, Glman, and Isaidnoway: allude to above.
It is worth making the observation that despite an apparent consensus not to include this in the first sentence, literally no-one agrees with the notion this is contentious – no other !votes refer to it, and at least five editors explicitly disagree with your POV.
Suggesting the use of the term "convicted rapist" to describe the rapist Danny Masterson is somehow contentious, is in my view a little insulting to those who were raped by the convicted rapist Danny Masterson. Continuing to double down on the notion this is contentious undermines your !vote, revealing as it does a fundamental misunderstanding of the style guidelines you cite – wrongly – to try to buttress your argument. Reference to the policies WP:SYNTH and WP:OR similarly detract from your argument, given they have literally no relevance whatsoever here.[1][2][3][4] There are salient issues to consider around whether the reliable sources consistently use the term "rapist". Its increasing use to characterise Masterson in reporting on the sentencing, and on secondary issues connected to the case – before and after the 8th September – suggest it will likely become the widespread norm. The notion that there is something contentious about characterising Masterson as a convicted rapist who raped people is not one of those salient issues. Cambial foliar❧ 10:26, 14 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Yawn. Another round of nitpicking and twisting my words, and assuming hidden meanings where there are none. I have nothing but contempt for Masterson, sympathy for his victims, and pride at Judge Olmedo's work. However, I also have principles and standards as an editor, and about language. And I don't care if any of you agrees with me or not. WP:DROPTHESTICK. Grorp (talk) 11:33, 14 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
You pinged me Grorp, thus I responded. If you feel your words are so important that people should read them but not respond to your failure to understand the policies you cite, this may not be the website for you. Cambial foliar❧ 11:36, 14 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Adjunct discussion
WP:DROPTHESTICK. Grorp (talk) 11:39, 14 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Grorp: Don't ping people with a lengthy post if you don't expect a response. Pinging and then immediately deciding others ought to "drop the stick", alongside the phrase "I don't care if any of you agrees" strongly indicate you are unwilling to listen or get the point. Cambial foliar❧ 11:45, 14 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I posted my vote and reasoning, several asked questions (including you), I pinged everyone to alert to a joint answer. That should have been the end. The pinging wasn't an invitation for you to get confrontational because you don't like my viewpoint. You used phrases such as "you fail to understand", "you imply", "literally no-one agrees", "fundamental misunderstanding", "you cite – wrongly", "literally no relevance whatsoever", "your failure to understand", and you also called me insulting. None of that is constructive or assuming good faith. It is WP:BATTLEGROUND. You get a vote; I get a vote. Not sure why it's so important to you that I change my vote to match yours. Agreement between participants is not necessary in an RfC. Grorp (talk) 13:40, 14 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
You claim "that should have been the end", which implies you think no-one should respond. That's not how the talk page works. I did not ask a question. The claim that literally no-one has agreed with your idea, that the claim that the article subject is a convicted rapist is a subjective one, is a statement of fact: nothing to do with assuming good faith. It's not clear why you think it's important to [me] that you change your vote to match mine – I've not !voted. You make the accusation that I became "confrontational" in bothering to respond to your comment full of bolded admonishments that if the three editors who disagree with you "are still confused" they must "read Loaded language as well as the other Wikipedia guideline pages"; your response – "Yawn"..."And I don't care if any of you agrees with me or not." I'll not reply to your accusation, out of politeness. Cambial foliar❧ 14:02, 14 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Nothing in the policies and guidelines prevents or discourages editors from using factual descriptions of the subject. The word rapist or convicted rapist can therefore be used throughout the article wherever it is appropriate. Given the level of mainstream news coverage and the obvious impact recent events will have on the subject’s life, it would be inappropriate not to describe the subject’s criminality in the first paragraph of the lead. Cambial foliar❧ 00:53, 27 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Discussion

Comment: Previous discussions on this page have raised Jeffrey Epstein and Harvey Weinstein as examples of articles that include "sex offender" in both the lead sentence and short description. These are not comparable to Masterson. Epstein is primarily notable for being a sex offender, and the lead and short descriptions both correctly mention that before his profession as a financier. Weinstein was initially known for being a film producer, but the sustained serial nature of his abuse all but eclipsed his prominent career; his lead and short description rank his profession over abuses, which I think is appropriate. R. Kelly has also been mentioned above as an argument for including sex allegations in the lead sentence and short description. On this I also disagree: Kelly is primarily notable for his music and it is his article that should be changed from its current form, not this one to conform to his. Xan747 ✈️ 🧑‍✈️ 21:14, 8 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Question: Most of the opposes here are without anything resembling a valid argument, and I share the suspicion raised in another talk post that organized trolling is taking place. That aside, it seams to me a few opposers raise one valid argument: Masterson may still appeal the verdict. Isn't that a valid argument - not against mentioning that he is a convicted rapist (objective fact), but against insisting it goes in the first sentence (which is the same as saying it is among the very most important biographical facts about this individual)? Is there a deadline before which he has to file an appeal - and if so, should we wait for that? — Preceding unsigned comment added by (talkcontribs) 15:44, 17 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I, for one, am not trolling. I've opposed the first-sentence "...and convicted _____" on other BLP articles well before this became an issue here. I've never opposed discussing a subject's criminal activities and convictions anywhere else in the lead section, and I don't here. I don't think it matters whether Masterson still has appeals pending or has exhausted them unsuccessfully. It will be bad to put it in the first sentence then like it would be now. But if anyone is only opposing based on the pendency of an appeal, I think they should switch over to support (the opposite of my position) without delay, because that is the bad argument. The hypothetical possibility of a conviction being modified or reversed in the future has nothing to do with the desirability of what we put in the article today. He is legally guilty right now. That status will probably never change, but it may change next year after an appeal, or it may be changed 100 years from now when neither Masterson nor you nor I are still around to hear about it. The possibility of it changing in the future isn't the problem. The problem is putting this kind of stuff in the first sentence where it does not belong. Vadder (talk) 03:16, 18 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I think the relevance of a possible appeal depends on the time frame. In my country, I think the convict would have two weeks to appeal; after that, reopening the case would require substantial new information, or something like that. Waiting those two weeks before considerig it an established encyclopaedic fact wuold make sense. The theoretical possibility that new evidence at some unspecified time in the future might lead to a reopening of the case would not justify waiting; we certainly agree on that.
Good faith or not; the hope with an RfC like this is that we can reach near-concensus. It's not a vote, but if a vast majority points in one direction, that is where we go. If one side represents a fringe view, but manages to get a substantial number of "votes", reaching a conclusion becomes difficult. My main point here is that arguments for "oppose" in this RfC seem absent or poor - except perhaps the one about an appeal. (talk) 06:43, 19 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Two points: First, not every RFC !vote needs to be based in established policy. Reasons given (when they are given) for an RFC !vote can be based in established policy. They can instead be based on what the policy should be (i.e., there is no established policy in this area, but we should start moving towards a better practice that might become policy in the future). They can also be based on editorial preference ... that a given way of writing this article would be be better for this article, and also not prohibited by existing policy. I think good reasons have been given that mainly fall into the later two categories. I accept that you don't think the reasons given so far are good, but that's what the RFC is for ... to determine the consensus of editors at the article about how to edit it.
Second, American law doesn't work like what you're suggesting. While there may be time limits for some kinds of appeals (which are certainly longer than a few weeks), American law is more focused on preventing cumulative appeals of the same type. For instance, American law often prohibits multiple successive appeals over the same issues of fact or law, or appealing on one kind of supposed error at trial, then appealing on a similar but distinct error after the first appeal fails. But there are some kinds of appeals that are always allowed, and can be filed any number of years after the first appeal fails. The way this often happens is a person is found guilty at trial. They appeal a few months later saying that the judge made mistakes at the trial (allowed inadmissible evidence, etc.). That appeal fails. Then, years later, another appeal is filed saying that the convicted person received ineffective assistance of counsel during the trial and the first appeal. The second appeal is basically focused on either getting a new trial, or alternatively getting the right to redo the first appeal. While there are aspects of American law that try to get a final result and bring an end to appeals, there are enough exceptions that it's not easy to say when that point has been reached. My point is there is no simple rule where we can say "Appeal time is over. This conviction is really real now." Vadder (talk) 15:11, 19 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I recommend assuming good faith with those with whom you disagree instead of making shadowy accusations. Nemov (talk) 14:19, 18 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comment This RfC isn't worded very well. What specifically is being proposed to be inserted into the lede? TarnishedPathtalk 10:16, 19 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

As I understand from the clarification given after the RfC had been open a few days, the question is whether to label Masterson a "convicted rapist", "convicted felon" or the like in lieu of using language such as "he was convicted of rape". As of now the second sentence of the lead paragraph says, "Masterson was convicted of raping two women", with no mention in the short description. The RfC is a response to numerous editors appending "and convicted rapist" to the lead sentence and/or the short description, and being reverted. However, most respondents (including myself) have taken the question as where to mention the rape convictions, not how to do so. I will be modifying my response accordingly. Xan747 ✈️ 🧑‍✈️ 19:34, 20 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comment There is a similar RfC currently being discussed about whether Rolf Harris should be described as a "convicted child sex offender" in first sentence of the lede of that article. I would encourage all interested editors to contribute. TarnishedPathtalk 06:16, 26 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Question When and how does the wikipedia community reach a conclusion on this RFC? Despite what I see as a serious lack of serious arguments on one side, there is no clear conclusion in terms of number of "votes". Do we call in assistance, or how do we proceed? Can people who are able to summon a sufficient number of "votes" to blur the picture block a change indefinitely? I know; this is not a vote, and those supporting the opposite view of mine are legitimate editors too. Still, how do we get anywhere? (talk) 12:42, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

If you wish you can submit a closure request at WP:CR. A closure is not a necessity when it comes to obvious consensus. When it comes to your recent edit, rightly reverted by Grorp: on the specific issue of the opening sentence the 19 !votes opposing inclusion with only 7 !votes in support indicate a clear and unambiguous consensus not to include. Cambial foliar❧ 14:46, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, my recent edit was a mistake; I'd forgotten (and failed to check) that the short description was part of this RfC. Apologies. (talk) 13:01, 23 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Patten, Dominic (3 August 2023). "Scientology Goes Off On Leah Remini As "Horrible Person" & "Bigot" In Response To Her Harassment Suit – Update". Deadline.
  2. ^ "Convicted rapist Danny Masterson a 'role model': Ashton Kutcher". France 24. 8 September 2023.
  3. ^ "Ashton Kutcher and Mila Kunis asked judge for leniency when sentencing convicted rapist co-star". Sky News. 10 September 2023.
  4. ^ Dasrath, Diana; Siemaszko, Corky (11 September 2023). "Danny Masterson rape victim says he got a fair sentence: 'Seems like justice to me'". NBC News.

Prison location[edit]

It's getting old that people keep adding content about some old dude (64yo) in another prison (since 1992) with the same name (Daniel Masterson). I just checked, again, and this Masterson is still listed in Men's Central Jail in Los Angeles.

This is the link to check for inmates at Men's Central: https://app5.lasd.org/iic

  ▶ I am Grorp ◀ 09:34, 3 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Rolling Stone reported this week that Masterson "is serving his sentence at a state prison in Chino, California." That would almost certainly be the Reception Center at the California Institution for Men. Could the LA County jail site be wrong? MiamiManny (talk) 19:38, 16 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@MiamiManny: No. Like I said in my edit summary when I reverted an edit, here, there is another Daniel Masterson in the California prison system, but that one is 64 years old, was admitted in 1992, and is serving "life without parole". That is not THIS Danny M. That prison is in Chino. Not surprised that Rolling Stone has gotten sloppy and fallen for that one, too. I would trust the LA County jail website before I'd trust Rolling Stone, especially when you can see the information yourself; here is the inmate locator link.   ▶ I am Grorp ◀ 22:59, 16 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Confirmed. Danny Masterson has been relocated to North Kern State Prison. Release shown from LA County. Admission to North Kern shown on state website. Press release from Tony Ortega with photo (mugshot) and a little more information. TMZ article.   ▶ I am Grorp ◀ 00:44, 28 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The new entry I just checked on inmate locator shows he has been moved to Corcoran. https://apps.cdcr.ca.gov/ciris/details?cdcrNumber=BW7253
Can someone with privledges confirm and update? JP Hogan (talk) 05:42, 31 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jphogannet: Looks like someone did it a few hours ago. I double-checked it and it looks legit.   ▶ I am Grorp ◀ 07:06, 31 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I also looked into this and I concur; it appears he has been moved to Corcoran. DonIago (talk) 13:56, 31 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 8 February 2024[edit]

is an American former actor and convicted sex offender. 86.128.145.201 (talk) 16:35, 8 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done: This has already been proposed on this page and there is no consensus to make a change of this nature at this time. DonIago (talk) 16:42, 8 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 18 February 2024[edit]

Currently imprisoned at California Men’s Colony in San Luis Obispo, California 66.215.120.26 (talk) 20:03, 18 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. Shadow311 (talk) 22:23, 18 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
 Done. Confirmed at https://apps.cdcr.ca.gov/ciris   ▶ I am Grorp ◀ 22:27, 18 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Where was he born?[edit]

"Long Island" is about as vague as saying "Southern California". Where on Long Island? Yours6700 (talk) 01:57, 22 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I believe the implication is that we don't currently have a source that states the location more specifically. DonIago (talk) 18:26, 22 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]