Requested move 29 February 2024

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: Moved to Flour massacre. There is a consensus to move to a title with 'massacre' in it. Initial source analysis indicates that the event was not referred to as a 'massacre'. However as presented by several editors here over the course of the discussion, the word has been used as widely as it is not to refer to the event. Therefore a move to at least the proposed title, Al-Rashid massacre is supported.

As to whether to call it Al-Rashid massacre or Flour massacre, this was not fully fleshed out due to how sources had been rapidly reporting on the event, and still are. However, if the last bits of this discussion are of any indications, Flour massacre is descriptive of the event and recognizable. There is also an ambiguity in referring the event by location given that there are other locations with the same name, i.e. Al-Rasheed Street and Al-Rashid, Baghdad. As such a further move to Flour massacre is appropriate. In interest of timeliness and growing perception of the current title being too vague, per WP:BARTENDER, this discussion is closed with a move to Flour massacre.

If there is a contention as to whether the article should be at Flour massacre or Al-Rashid massacre or any other title with 'massacre' in it, a follow-up RM can be open without further discussion with me. – robertsky (talk) 13:44, 8 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Survey (RM 29 February 2024)

Al-Rashid humanitarian aid incidentAl-Rashid massacre – If it really did happen then its not an "incident", its a massacre of civillians that relied on humanitarian aid. Not calling an attack on civillians that killed 112 people a massacre is supporting Israeli propaganda. Lukt64 (talk) 23:28, 29 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Not extended confirmed. –Novem Linguae (talk) 10:48, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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  • Israeli propaganda is a stretch, but I agree it should be renamed, because a significant amount of people were killed Guadeterre (talk) 23:32, 29 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    well the IDF is already spreading propaganda about "what actually happened" so calling out Israeli propaganda for what it is isn't unfair IMO. 2607:FEA8:A4E5:6A00:8562:4DB5:974A:C462 (talk) 23:46, 29 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I mainly said that because we still dont know exactly who did it. I'm not trying to start drama or be political. The main point of my reply was supporting the article name change Guadeterre (talk) 23:49, 29 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    We absolutely know who did it-- it was the IDF, who have a long track record of this sort of behaviour in this particular "war" alone. Let's not take the CNN route, act all coy, and pretend that it's still up for debate as to who started shooting these people. 2607:FEA8:A4E5:6A00:8562:4DB5:974A:C462 (talk) 23:54, 29 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I'll look into the situation more, just trying not to form an opinion yet. In the meantime I really dont want to make any drama or get into a fight Guadeterre (talk) 23:57, 29 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    That's fair. 2607:FEA8:A4E5:6A00:8562:4DB5:974A:C462 (talk) 00:01, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • especially when we consider that every time a paramilitary "settler" gets killed in the occupied West Bank, they get their own article unambigiously titled as "murder of" said "settler". It's really not up for debate that this was a massacre, not an "incident". 2607:FEA8:A4E5:6A00:8562:4DB5:974A:C462 (talk) 23:45, 29 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
WP:ECR. ScottishFinnishRadish (talk) 11:57, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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  • I think it's also important to note that even if a substantial number of the people who were killed were killed because the drivers panicked or in a crowd crush, the catalyst is still the IDF opening fire into the crowd. We also have to assume that the IDF is downplaying how many people they shot as well. 2607:FEA8:A4E5:6A00:8562:4DB5:974A:C462 (talk) 23:56, 29 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    You are getting to the point of WP:Bludgeoning Lukt64 (talk) 23:57, 29 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I just thought that it's important to mention in terms of overall culpability. 2607:FEA8:A4E5:6A00:8562:4DB5:974A:C462 (talk) 00:01, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Thing is, you are replying to every single statement on this post. Lukt64 (talk) 00:02, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Aren't users with <500 edits disallowed to comment on talk pages in this fashion? The user you're replying to has like, ten edits in total. Tdmurlock (talk) 00:05, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Nope, we're just not allowed to physically edit pages related to this issue. As in contribute. 2607:FEA8:A4E5:6A00:8562:4DB5:974A:C462 (talk) 00:12, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I thought they weren't but I may be wrong. The Kip 07:30, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    who cares? 2607:FEA8:A4E5:6A00:8562:4DB5:974A:C462 (talk) 00:10, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

*Support. As sources refer to it as a massacre, or they quote that people are calling it a massacre. -- Cdjp1 (talk) 00:37, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Not extended confirmed. –Novem Linguae (talk) 10:48, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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  • Support. By all reasonable definitions, this was a massacre. If we can classify it as a massacre in the info box, we should be doing so in the title. Using a neutral tone when one shouldn’t be used makes the site more misleading. Describing this event as an “incident” would be like using the term “incident” instead of “attack” for the January 6 page. EvanSheppard (talk) 07:29, 1 March 2024 (UTC) Non-ECP !vote JM (talk) 08:24, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    According to the rules, you are not allowed to comment here. Hazooyi (talk) 07:50, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • :Strongly Support - From what we have seen, they were shot at for trying to get food. The accused have not provided proof of the civillans being a "threat" to them 94.204.139.36 (talk) 06:29, 1 March 2024 (UTC) Vote struck per CTOP/ECP restrictions listed above. The Kip 07:16, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

*Move. Support the move, but can't agree with the "Massacre" title. Neither calling just an "incident" nor showcasing these as a "massacre" is appropriate imho. But the "incident" should indeed be changed. Imperial[AFCND] 09:50, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The Intercept article does explicitly refer to the event as a massacre, but the Washington Post article runs into the same problem as many of the above sources: it quotes people referring to the event as a massacre, but does not explicitly label it as such. Gödel2200 (talk) 23:43, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The main problematic support votes are the (quite significant number of) ones that say something like the move is "obvious" or "not controversial", providing next to no reasoning, or reasoning that is OR. But again, these votes shouldn't discount the many valid comments in support of the move, and these better arguments in support of the move should be the ones counted as evidence in support; a vote tally shouldn't be how we decide when to close the discussion. Gödel2200 (talk) 15:12, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I think editors who are saying its obvious are essentially saying that 1. many sources already refer to it as such 2. the event fits the description of a massacre and 3. civilians involved describe it as such - all of which I think are valid points to be considered, as part of a purpose of a RM is to gain "request community-wide input on the retitling of the article" - while their comments might not be given strong weight they should still be considered. LegalSmeagolian (talk) 15:20, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
There are many comments that fit that description, and those are mostly not the ones I have a problem with. That being said, ones arguing that "the event fits the description of a massacre" which do not give sources, or do not reference other comments citing sources, raise concerns for me that they are OR. But the ones I really have a problem with are ones giving no reasoning at all. There are at least one vote two votes with nothing after "support", and a few others with no reasoning whatsoever after "support". Gödel2200 (talk) 15:39, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  1. Almost all of the !votes occurred before the offending Twitter post.
  2. This is an ECP only discussion, so for the canvassing to be effective, somebody would've needed to make an account at least 30 days ago and then get up to 500 edits in anticipation of this RM. Believing that several ECP editors are doing that, with no evidence, assumes bad faith.
voorts (talk/contributions) 14:18, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  1. 23 of the votes were made after that Twitter post
  2. When a post has that broad of an impact (over half a million views), editors who are already ECP will be some of those who see it.
BilledMammal (talk) 14:29, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Is it really productive to try to conduct a hypothetical analysis of what proportion of the discussion to exclude based off of this theory? Their input has already been given, has been made in good faith, and I suspect the actual proportion of replies here that are the result of the twitter post are much smaller then you would think (if any were the result of that). Also, should seeing a Twitter post prohibit a user from participating in a discussion? LegalSmeagolian (talk) 14:43, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
See WP:CANVASS#Campaigning and WP:CANVASS#Votestacking. The issues with such a post, and editors coming from such a post, is it inappropraitely influences the result of the !vote in the same manner as intentional canvassing. Ideally, we would procedurally close this and hold a new RM once things have died down and editors aren't being drawn here by off-wiki activity. BilledMammal (talk) 14:47, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
You have made a series of completely unsupported assertions, and regardless canvassing, that is doing it, is prohibited, being canvassed is not. If you have evidence of any user canvassing or an editor proxying for a banned user you should report that to the normal places, but kindly stop disrupting this discussion with vague aspersions against editors without supporting evidence. nableezy - 14:51, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
However, being canvassed is a reason for the closer to give less weight - or no weight - to their !votes. As for evidence, look at the contribution history of some of the editors; some have been inactive for years, others have never participated in an RM. BilledMammal (talk) 15:05, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
That is not true, and just saying so doesnt make it true. !votes are judged on their policy basis, not on some insinuation from an involved editor trying to discredit the overwhelming majority of votes that they are opposed to. Again, if you have evidence then raise it in the appropriate place, otherwise please stop disrupting this discussion that from all appearances is not going your preferred way. Theres a template at the top of this section already alerting both participants and a closer about the twitter thread. And youll note that it says However, you are invited to participate and your opinion is welcome. Remember to assume good faith on the part of others. You should do the same. nableezy - 15:11, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Whose votes specifically? So far on my brief glance through contributions I only see one user who hasn't been active in over a year and I do not think not participating in a requested move in the past is really evidence of anything. LegalSmeagolian (talk) 15:12, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Per the canvassing notice that you posted at the top of this discussion, the proper thing to do is tag individual accounts that you believe have been canvassed. It's not up to the closer to investigate every single !vote and it's not proper for a closer to discount an entire discussion because of vague allegations of canvassing. voorts (talk/contributions) 15:14, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'm going to assume I'm one of the "editors" being discussed here as I haven't participated in many RMs in the part. Even so, it's unfair and elitist to assume editors that haven't contributed to these kinds of discussions before are automatically being canvassed. Everyone is entitled to their own opinions, no matter their previous experience on this website. HaapsaluYT (talk) 22:23, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
i might be missing on something but what is the "offending Twitter post"? Abo Yemen 15:33, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It's linked at the top of discussion. LegalSmeagolian (talk) 15:34, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
ah found it Abo Yemen 15:37, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It also isnt even a canvassing post, its a post mocking Wikipedia's bias in language. It isnt a hey go vote to change this message. nableezy - 15:35, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yes someone does need to take a leap of faith to say that the post was implying anything other that Wikipedia, for better or worse, oftentimes mirrors the language of what the largest western media outlets refer to events as. (a point that should probably be considered here!) LegalSmeagolian (talk) 15:37, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
A bias incidentally introduced by a non-EC user, which itself was a procedural lapse. That bias is now unfortunately being prolonged by this RM. Iskandar323 (talk) 15:42, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Support the proposal here or Flour massacre - largely per Carwill, and per the fact that we use massacre in the title of a number of articles in which far fewer people were killed when those killed are Israelis and not Palestinians. There is a systemic bias in language Wikipedia uses in this conflict, Israelis are "murdered" or "massacred", but Palestinians are "killed" or "die in an incident". We have articles for most acts of violence against Israelis, but most acts of violence against Palestinians are treated as WP:NOTNEWS, routine and thus lacking importance to be covered. Here we have some eight times the number dead as Kissufim massacre or five times the dead as Psyduck music festival massacre or six times those killed in the Alumim massacre or five times those killed in the Netiv HaAsara massacre. But this is an "incident". NPOV doesnt mean that one set of lives are treated as less than another set of lives. nableezy - 14:55, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
+1 voorts (talk/contributions) 15:15, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This is a very important point. NPOV doesn't mean blindly repeating whatever US-based sources say. Outside of the US this is widely being referred to as a massacre: South Africa's Department of International Relations and Cooperation, The Herald (Zimbabwe's largest newspaper), Qatar's Ministry of Foreign Affairs, The Media Line, Pars Today, Daily Star, Havana Times.
The assumption that only sources like NYT, BBC, and Washington Post are reliable and neutral, especially in this conflict, is risible. They have been independently demonstrated to have a severe anti-Palestine bias in their reporting, as has been pointed out several times in this discussion. Dylanvt (talk) 17:22, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This is another reason why i am supporting the move. Abo Yemen 17:37, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Right on. I don't object to the description of mass killings of Israeli civilians as "massacres-" it is what it is, but not calling blatant mass murders by the IDF by the names that accurately describe them is an incredible violation of NPOV. HadesTTW (he/him • talk) 18:14, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This is an extremely important point to make, as the phrasing of incident would definitely fall under WP:IMBALANCE and NPOV. Western media are the only ones using passive voice and calling it incidents, tragedies, etc. If we wouldn't use that phrasing for the brutality of the Re'im massacre and other smaller massacres even while we didn't know the details, why is this massacre any different? Jebiguess (talk) 18:59, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
In fact, there seems to be consensus (including the opposes, many of them suggesting an alternative name) in opposition of using "incident" as the name, so I highly doubt a move request to include "incident" in the title would have been started in the first place. The opposing votes are mostly basing their argument off of stating that there has been insufficient RS's labeling this as a massacre to establish a WP:COMMONNAME, and that argument would surely have been brought up if the article originally included "massacre". Gödel2200 (talk) 01:11, 4 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Labelling the event as a massacre or as an unspecified "incident", are neither ideal. Personally I don't think the euphemism concerns of using 'incident' should be underestimated, and the only significant issue with using 'massacre' is that many RSs don't use that word. I don't think there should be much concern about the potentially contentious nature of the label 'massacre', since a massacre did occur and was the core event of this "incident". Though not causing all of the deaths, soldiers fired on a crowd of civilians, causing many of the deaths and causing the ensuing chaos/panic which resulted in additional deaths.
Also, it is likely that as time passes more and more reliable sources will refer to this event as a massacre, as many of the English language sources which avoid calling this a massacre today are either politically biased or self-censoring due to political considerations. (See Media coverage of the Arab–Israeli conflict)
-IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 06:44, 4 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
As an aside - See also: February 28 incident, an article with a similar problem of whether or not it should be called an incident or a massacre. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 06:47, 4 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Oh, so I did already vote, I had completely forgotten that. My apologies and I have struck my first vote. -- Cdjp1 (talk) 08:43, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comment

This discussion of an article page move can easily be contested. Discussions typically last a week and this one didn't even last 2 hours! And the nominator closed the discussion with their preferred article title which is a clear conflict of interest, that act should have been left to an uninvolved editor or admin. I don't think this discussion and closure can be argued to be authoritative and will likely be challenged. Please do things properly in the future, Lukt64, and don't try to rush these processes. Liz Read! Talk! 02:09, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed. Obvious misapplication of WP:SNOW, here. Tdmurlock (talk) 03:42, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Agree. Also, would like clarification on WP:SNOW for the future. From my understanding, it's to prevent starting discussions or processes that wouldn't have worked anyways, not to quickly force through process, like it did just now, right? User:Sawerchessread (talk) 04:09, 2 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
information Note: I have reverted Lukt64's early closure which is made improperly as the nominator. NmWTfs85lXusaybq (talk) 04:38, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Agreed. Fails even the first snowball test. Someone opposed, that's the opposite of unanimous. And WP:SNOW also warns of early pile-ons. Yet the nominator himself closed it less than 2 hours after he opened it. Good revert. JM (talk) 06:42, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"Discussions typically last a week" shouldn't be a hard rule, especially when most people agree the original title is woefully inadequate. While the close was obviously incorrect, I don't think we need to artificially uphold bureaucratic procedures to change the title, and a consensus emerging after one or two days could be good if it is clear enough. Chaotıċ Enby (talk · contribs) 18:27, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Chaotic Enby, that's why I said "typically", not "always" or "must". But I've seen discussions like this last weeks sometimes. RM discussions are closed whenever an uninvolved closer sees a consensus but it clearly needs to last at least a few days, not less than two hours. The temperature is high right now and that is not an atmostphere when policy-guided decisions are made. A bad, early closure without sufficient discussion will just lead to a move war, I predict. Liz Read! Talk! 04:14, 2 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yep, I fully agree with you on this. In any case, it shouldn't have been closed after a few hours (especially by someone that involved), I'd say it's best to wait if a (very) strong consensus emerges after a few days and otherwise let the discussion run its time. Chaotıċ Enby (talk · contribs) 13:31, 2 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

For every day this RM is not closed, people's bias towards wikipedia increases Abo Yemen 12:12, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I think you mean "peoples perceptions of Wikipedia's bias increases." LegalSmeagolian (talk) 14:25, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Probably, I ain't no native speaker of this language Abo Yemen 14:38, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Alternative titles

We would not reach any consensus regarding any title containing 'massacre' as quickly as many of us would like. However, I believe even some of the opponents of this RM would agree that 'incident' seriously dilutes the magnitude of this tragedy and should not persist. As a temporary solution and a compromise, I suggest moving to a different title that contains neither 'massacre' nor 'incident'. Here are my suggestions:

The use of "disaster" is supported by Al Jazeera which quotes an unnamed UN official, as well as Reuters. Thought? -- Sameboat - 同舟 (talk · contri.) 11:42, 5 March 2024 (UTC) 12:45, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"Disaster" to me implies a lack of agency, or a much larger scope. Disasters are events that just happen, either without human involvement, or by accident (like the Port Chicago disaster). Or, they are much more massive in scale, like destruction of dams as a weapon of war. Also, the use of "disaster" in the Al Jazeera source you linked is in reference to the looming man-made famine, not this.
The only non-"massacre" titles that I think would be acceptable (unless a WP:COMMONNAME emerges) would be "killings" or "(mass) shooting", possibly with the addition of "and stampede" --Gimmethegepgun (talk) 12:29, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Agree. I don't see how 'disaster' is better than 'incident'. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 12:43, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Definitely a lot better than massacre, potentially better than incident, even if less supported by RS. The reference to disaster at AJ is not quite accurate, but I would consider disaster to be an adequate common name based on the Reuters use.
Therefore, support (secondary to my opposition to „massacre“. FortunateSons (talk) 12:32, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Sameboat: I think it was soon to offer such suggestions. It looks even weird to me during an ongoing move discussion to open a new move section as you did. --Mhhossein talk 20:31, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I oppose "disaster" - I think it is even worse than incident as it removes agency even more so than incident. However, I weakly support "killings" as an alternative title in the event that some how, some way, the closer finds that massacre does not have enough support for consensus, which I suspect it does at this point. LegalSmeagolian (talk) 22:01, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AJ has plumped for "Flour massacre" "It has been five days since the Israeli army fired into a crowd of the hungry and the starving at al-Rashid Street in Gaza City, an incident that has been dubbed the Flour Massacre." Selfstudier (talk) 13:57, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

WP:DISASTER specifically cautions against the use of the word "disaster" in titles: "Try to avoid the words disaster, tragedy and crisis because this characterization is too subjective. It is preferable to use specific event names, such as collision, collapse, explosion, outbreak, pandemic, sinking, oil spill, and the like." Other editors have suggested "shootings," "killings," or "shooting and stampede" as a descriptor of the events themselves. --Delta1989 (talk) (contributions) 15:00, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
we gotta apply this on other articles about the "disasters" committed by hamas too Abo Yemen 15:34, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'm unsure of what you mean, or how this connects to the current discussion—are there any such articles with "disaster" in the title? --Delta1989 (talk) (contributions) 15:39, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
there are articles about hamas attacks that have the word "Massacre" in their names. What i am saying is that if we're applying this policy here then we should apply it in the other articles too Abo Yemen 16:24, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
In that case, deaths is optimal, but I don’t think anyone likes that one. Killings and shootings are both not yet proven to be the primary cause, so… FortunateSons (talk) 15:42, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It doesn't matter if it is the primary cause if gunfire caused the mass panic those deaths are attributable to the IDF. LegalSmeagolian (talk) 22:02, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Only if the gun fire is the primary or exclusive cause of the stampede, which we don’t know yet, as there is no complete investigation FortunateSons (talk) 22:07, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Additionally, there is generally a difference between an attributable death and a killing, which is a second hurdle here. FortunateSons (talk) 22:08, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Think there is a pretty obvious consensus to move above anyway, so this is both premature and unnecessary imo. nableezy - 15:54, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Agreed, firm consensus above about "massacre". — Mainly 16:39, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah, consensus for massacre has largely been reached. Jebiguess (talk) 17:47, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Until the above discussion is closed, I don't see the harm in entertaining a discussion on other titles, especially since a sizable proportion of Oppose respondents still believe that the current title is not the best reflection of the events as they occurred. --Delta1989 (talk) (contributions) 22:50, 5 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AP mentions that the gaza health ministry calls it a massacre, but opts to refer to the incident as a stampede. Le monde refers to the incident as a "hunger riot". Tdmurlock (talk) 08:26, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

No, the AP attributes stampede as the description of the Israeli military. nableezy - 08:43, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
You might want to strike or otherwise retract your comment about the AP article as it's a gross misrepresentation of that source. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 12:19, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
How is that a gross misrepresentation of that source? It literally says, Israel said many of the dead were trampled in a chaotic stampede for the food aid and that its troops only fired when they felt endangered by the crowd. User3749 (talk) 16:48, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The difference between saying "AP opts to refer to the incident as a stampede" and "AP reports that Israel calls the events a stampede" is what makes it a gross misrepresentation. The AP attributes that language to Israel, it does not itself use that language without attribution to describe the event. LegalSmeagolian (talk) 16:53, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Apologies, it looks like I've misinterpreted the comment as saying "attribution of stampede as description of IDF" as a misrepresentation of the source. Saying that AP refers this as a stampede is indeed a gross misrepresentation of the source. User3749 (talk) 06:51, 8 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Israel also says in the AP article that their troops fired on the crowd so I would strike your comment. The AP article attributes the stampede claim to the IDF, so please strike that part of your comment. LegalSmeagolian (talk) 14:24, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]


The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Alternative title in the lead first sentence

Opposition to Citing Al Jazeera, which is state-owned by Qatar, in the lead

Al Jazeera is not a reliable, independent source on this topic--it is state-owned by the government of Qatar, which has a conflict of interest in the conflict; Qatar is helping arbitrate diplomatic negotiations and is the current residence of the top leadership of Hamas.

"The attack was portrayed by Al-Jazeera as part of a broader pattern of Israeli attacks on people seeking humanitarian aid."

The same would apply to citing Voice of America, as the United States is also helping arbitrate diplomatic negotiations and provides military aid to Israel. JohnAdams1800 (talk) 00:28, 2 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Al Jazeera is considered generally reliable despite being state-owned. Salmoonlight (talk) 00:39, 2 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with Salmoonlight. WP:RSPSOURCES has them as a generally reliable source. Their coverage of the conflict seems professional and accurate so far. Occasionally their bias slips through, for example in live news reports they always refer to the "occupied" West Bank. But overall I am very impressed with their professionalism. –Novem Linguae (talk) 10:30, 2 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Moreover, referring to the West Bank as occupied isn't "letting bias slip through" given that it objectively is being occupied by israel, and is recognized as such by the entire international community. Dylanvt (talk) 20:34, 2 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
That page says “Some editors say that Al Jazeera, particularly its Arabic-language media, is a partisan source with respect to the Arab–Israeli conflict.” Blaylockjam10 (talk) 07:27, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Partisan doesn't mean unreliable. A partisan source may pick and choose what they cover and use charged language, but they can still be reliable in that what facts they do publish are real --Gimmethegepgun (talk) 08:30, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The BBC is also state-owned media, which also has a conflict of interest in the conflict, both due to the UK being in a military alliance with the US, and due to its historical involvement in Palestine. Despite this, it is used as a source in the article and generally considered RS. KetchupSalt (talk) 10:36, 2 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It should be acknowledged that the UK and US are democracies with a large measure of freedom of speech whereas Qatar is a monarchy with far less freedom of speech. Regardless, as Al-Jazeera is currently listed as generally reliable, there's nothing to be done here. JM (talk) 19:00, 2 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
US and UK media have a far more shameful record of cheerleading wars built on falsehoods against the Middle East. That holding an election every few years means obe's foreign policy is moral and media is fair is a laughable article of Israeli propaganda, and one very easily refutable. Also, the NY Times, the BBC, and CNN have lately been dealing with a number of staffer revolts based on the perception, held by their own reporters, that they're biased for Israel. Peleio Aquiles (talk) 04:02, 6 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Indeed. Al Jazeera has actually been a far more serious source for the entire duration of this conflict than almost the entire coterie of war propaganda-pushing Western media outlets combined. Alongside the death of the illusion of international law, we have also seen the death of the illusion of Western editorial standards on impartiality. Iskandar323 (talk) 05:56, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Agree, and it reflects a structural issue that is not resolvable here. Coretheapple (talk) 19:10, 4 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Al Jazeera has bias but they’re reliable and they’re the only news source that actually reports from within Gaza itself, so in many cases Al Jazeera is the only source to verify such stories The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 04:05, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I think the more accurate description is that Al Jazeera is reporting without the "supervision" by the IDF. That being said I don't question another state-owned media, ie BBC's neutrality, but the materials they are allowed to carried away from Gaza are seriously censored by the IDF, unlike Al Jazeera. And I don't think any experienced Wikipedia editors here should ever treat IDF and the Israeli government as reliable sources, anything related to Palestine. -- Sameboat - 同舟 (talk · contri.) 05:45, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Although the BBC has in fact been criticised for its partiality. Iskandar323 (talk) 06:01, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Aside from the outlet's GREL status at RSP and the fact that we expect media outlets to be bias, and that this just means we have a rounded balance of sources, even the indirect aspersion here is spurious – the fact that Qatar is handling negotiations is actually a testament to it being seen as a workably neutral party by both sides. Iskandar323 (talk) 06:05, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I am not sure about Qatar’s neutrality because according to this Wikipedia page, Qatar does not formally recognize Israel International recognition of Israel#UN member states Wafflefrites (talk) 18:06, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It doesn't really matter. AJ is GREL - that's all that really matters. These discussions about bias are a red herring: all sources have bias, not least with respect to this conflict. We build pages by combining partial sources to produce an end result that approximates NPOV. Iskandar323 (talk) 18:50, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, I agree that editors follow Wikipedia’s reliable sources list. I was responding to the last part of your sentence at 06:05, 10 March 2024 regarding Qatar’s neutrality “the fact that Qatar is handling negotiations is actually a testament to it being seen as a workably neutral party by both sides.” Wafflefrites (talk) 19:39, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Capitalization

In the very first sentence, is the capitalization correct? It's called "flour massacre" (all lowercase) but that somehow seems weird. Maybe "Flour massacre" or "Flour Massacre" instead? JDiala (talk) 22:38, 9 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I think it should be capitalized per CNN: More than 100 people were killed in the incident in northern Gaza, which has become known as the “Flour Massacre,” as Israeli troops opened fire near civilians gathering around food aid trucks, triggering panic. nableezy - 22:41, 9 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Whatever we decide in this section, let's first change the article title to match our new consensus, and then change all the article prose. The article title should be the source of truth for the prose, in my opinion. Keeping in mind one quirk: the software forces the first letter to be capitalized in titles.
Checking ((Massacres against Palestinians)), looks like every single massacre has a lowercase "m". They also happen to have uppercase first words, but that's because most of them are proper nouns. This article is a bit odd because the first word ("flour") is not a place like in the other massacres.
Anyway, with that in mind, I think the status quo of all lowercase ("flour massacre") makes sense. My second choice would be "Flour massacre". I don't think "Flour Massacre" makes sense because there's over a dozen other Palestinian massacre articles that do not capitalize the "m", hinting that there's a WP:AT/WP:MOS policy somewhere or a WP:SILENT consensus somewhere that massacre should not be capitalized in article titles. –Novem Linguae (talk) 02:52, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It really depends on what the discourse surrounding it labels it as. "Flour Massacre" could be a full, proper name for the event, much like Boston Massacre and I assume others, if that's how reliable sources refer to it. --Gimmethegepgun (talk) 12:22, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with Gimmethegepgun here in that usage is the primary indicator of what it'll be referred to, but when usage is unclear or yet to be made clear, I feel like we can still make a clear judgment based on what each of the three capitalization styles means. There seem to me to be two different questions to ask here; first, whether or not to capitalize massacre and second, whether or not to capitalize flour. On the first, we should capitalize both words if the event has commonly been referred to by the name of "flour massacre," which would indicate that it's becoming a proper noun and thus deserves capitalization. (Here, the use of "the" vs. "a" is important, but primarily that the use of "a" would indicate no capitalization, not that the use of "the" is indicative of any single usage, as I could forsee it being used in both cases.) If, on the other hand, this is an event involving flour or Flour (which I will get to later) that we know to be a massacre, then a lowercase massacre would be the better choice.
If we were to decide that a lowercase massacre would be the appropriate choice, then the follow-up question would be whether or not to capitalize flour. Seeing as this is referring to the object and food stuff of flour and not a proper noun of Flour, I see no reason to capitalize flour and not massacre (other than in the title or at the start of sentences).
In my opinion between "flour massacre" and "Flour Massacre", I think both have drawbacks, with "flour massacre" being indicative more of a type of event than an individual event, but "Flour Massacre" is slightly hasty at this point and we don't know how this event will come to be discussed down the line. AnOpenBook (talk) 03:10, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
But we have a source specifically saying it is known as capital f Flour capital m Massacre. nableezy - 04:32, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Move review for recent page name move

Please see Wikipedia:Move review/Log/2024 March#Al-Rashid humanitarian aid incident. In case you have not seen the notice near the top of the page. starship.paint (RUN) 03:51, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

UN reference and quote is not ideal. Should be replaced with secondary reference (if exists) and summary of quote.

@Edenaviv5. Re [18]. I disagree. If it is not mentioned in secondary sources such as newspapers, then it is WP:UNDUE and should be removed. If it is mentioned in secondary sources, then it is WP:DUE and we should reference the secondary source instead. Direct quotations instead of summarizing is also not great. –Novem Linguae (talk) 06:44, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed with Novem Linguae. starship.paint (RUN) 09:41, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Novem Linguae
If the issue is whether the UN should be quoted in regard to this international concern, then that's different from what I was addressing. Take out the quote if you want to, or mark the need for summary.
I am specifically concerned with the citation for the quote. I am operating from the place where the quote exists in the article and that, "To ensure accuracy, the text of quoted material is best taken from (and cited to) the original source being quoted." (From WP:RS/QUOTE) -- In this case, the quotation is first published in a press release from the UN, and thus that press release is its most reliable source. Edenaviv5 (talk) 22:52, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The secondary source needed tag that I added and that was reverted was my polite way of saying that this needs a better, secondary source, otherwise it is WP:UNDUE. The other option was to delete the sentence entirely. The ideal fix here is to find a secondary source (newspaper article) that says approximately the same thing, and summarize it without a quote, and cite it. Lots of people say lots of things about this incident. We use secondary sources to filter that and figure out what's actually important. If we use primary sources without filtering them through secondary sources, then everything that anybody says on Twitter is suddenly okay to include in the article. –Novem Linguae (talk) 02:06, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The primary may be OK not really fond of press releases tho, the specific quote definitely wouldn't be, unless supported by secondary.
Here are secondaries I found on a quick look, for what Paula Gaviria said, Israel’s ‘wholesale disregard’ for Gazans’ rights is on level unseen in recent history, says UN expert (the quote is in this one) and
UN expert condemns Israel’s dehumanisation of displaced Palestinians Selfstudier (talk) 11:42, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

On leaving out the bits we don't like

The incident occurred when the crowd blocked and started plundering an aid convoy that was on its way to another part of Gaza City. This fact, which I have never seen disputed, is totally suppressed, presumably because editors fear it might mitigate the brutality of the Israelis (it doesn't).

I've corrected the most blatant attempt in the introduction to make it sound like a planned aid distribution, but this fiction is sustained throughout the article, by both commission and omission. Utilisateur19911 (talk) 09:48, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This seems like quite a good example of how not to write things in the topic area. Congrats. Unfortunately, information about mental states can't be reliably extracted from edits. If the article had been written by an AI but you didn't know, you thought it was written by a bunch of devious rascals, you probably would have made exactly the same revisions for the same policy-based reasons. So, it's about the content. Sean.hoyland (talk) 12:19, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"So, it's about the content." — which you do not address. Utilisateur19911 (talk) 07:33, 12 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

CNN Investigation

CNN published a new article earlier today that I do not yet see cited here. They conclude:

"CNN’s analysis of dozens of videos from the night and testimonies from eyewitnesses’ casts doubt on Israel’s version of events. The evidence, reviewed by forensic and ballistic experts, indicated that automatic gunfire began before the IDF said the convoy had started crossing through the checkpoint and that shots were fired within close range of crowds that had gathered for food."

Snuish (talk) 16:16, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, I'll incorporate this into the article. LegalSmeagolian (talk) 14:43, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"IDF"

the term "IDF" is used several times in the article, without clarifying what it stands for. please edit replace the first instance of "IDF" with "Israeli Defense Forces (IDF)". Daddyelectrolux (talk) 15:46, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Jamedeus (talk) 16:31, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Not a planned aid distribution

There is no mention that the crowd blocked and plundered an aid convoy that was on its way to another part of Gaza City. There is euphemistic and ambiguous language that gives the impression it was a planned aid distribution. Utilisateur19911 (talk) 10:13, 14 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Requested move 28 April 2024

Flour massacre → Al-Rashid killings – Per WP:NCENPOV, we should only call an event a massacre if "massacre" is part of the WP:COMMONNAME, or if it is a generally accepted word used when identifying the event. There is no common name for this event, and sources generally do not use "massacre" when referring to it. For example, working down the list of generally reliable sources at WP:RSP:

  1. ABC News - Does not use "massacre" ([19])
  2. The Age - Does not use "massacre" ([20])
  3. Al Jazeera - Uses "massacre" ([21])
  4. Associated Press - Does not use "massacre" ([22])
  5. The Australian - Does not use "massacre" ([23])
  6. Axios - Does not use "massacre" ([24])
  7. BBC - Does not use "massacre" ([25])
  8. Bloomberg - Does not use "massacre" ([26])
  9. CNN - Does not use "massacre" ([27])
  10. The Daily Telegraph - Does not use "massacre" ([28])
  11. Deutsche Welle - Does not use "massacre" ([29])
  12. Financial Times - Does not use "massacre" ([30])
  13. Forbes - Does not use "massacre" ([31])
  14. The Globe and Mail - Does not use "massacre" ([32])
  15. The Guardian - Does not use "massacre" ([33])
  16. Haaretz - Does not use "massacre" ([34])
  17. The Hill (newspaper) - Does not use "massacre" ([35])
  18. The Hindu - Does not use "massacre" ([36])
  19. The Independent - Does not use "massacre" ([37])
  20. The Jewish Chronicle - Does not use "massacre" ([38])
  21. Jacobin - Uses "massacre" ([39])
  22. Los Angeles Times - Does not use "massacre" ([40])

As such, our use of it is against policy, and now that we can look at this event as one in the past, rather than one in the present, I think it is time to revisit what we should title the article. BilledMammal (talk) 18:40, 28 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose - The proposed title is too euphemistic and generic. Even before the current change the article was called something like Al Rashid humanitarian aid killings. The title Flour massacre also differentiates this incident from subsequent humanitarian aid killings and conveys the notability of the incident, its significant death toll, and the reactions to it, all significant parts of the article. Many of the sources which do not use "massacre" were written shortly after the event, so I do not find the argument that sources are moving away from calling it a massacre to be a credible or persuasive one. Unbandito (talk) 00:36, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Previously, the article was at Al Rashid humanitarian aid incident. Further, the argument isn’t that sources are moving away; it’s that they’ve never used massacre, and they continue to not use massacre - per our PAG’s, this means we can not use massacre. BilledMammal (talk) 00:40, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose + procedural close: No new information has been been presented since the previous endorsed close. On the contrary, the opening statement appears to be a copy-paste of the same evidence presented in the previous RM in a comment on 3 March. Simply pestering the community with identikit arguments is clear abuse of process, and if nothing has changed it means the RM should never have been opened. Iskandar323 (talk) 19:53, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Survey

Discussion

Don't see what changed since the previous RM, which was endorsed at move review, where you wrote:
Working through WP:RSP, it is clear that there is not a consensus in reliable sources:
ABC News - Does not use "massacre"
The Age - Does not use "massacre"
Al Jazeera - Uses "massacre"
Associated Press - Does not use "massacre"
The Australian - Does not use "massacre"
Axios - Does not use "massacre"
BBC - Does not use "massacre"
Bloomberg - Does not use "massacre"
CNN - Does not use "massacre"
The Daily Telegraph - Does not use "massacre"
Deutsche Welle - Does not use "massacre"
Financial Times - Does not use "massacre"
Forbes - Does not use "massacre"
The Globe and Mail - Does not use "massacre"
The Guardian - Does not use "massacre"
Haaretz - Does not use "massacre"
The Hill (newspaper) - Does not use "massacre"
The Hindu - Does not use "massacre"
So this looks like mere repetition of a failed argument. Selfstudier (talk) 18:52, 28 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
What's changed is that reliable sources continue not to use massacre, and the additional distance from the event will allow us to better consider what title is most compliant with our policies - the previous RM did have off-wiki canvassing issues. BilledMammal (talk) 19:17, 28 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
No, the question was what has changed since you presented your arguments last time? AusLondonder (talk) 17:02, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]